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TangledHeart


Hi! I'm new to FiMFiction, and hope to become a good writer, and well known in the fandom! Also known as gallaghergirl09 on fanfiction.net

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After a flying lesson with Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle has an accident that leaves her with no memory of ever living in Ponyville! As Twilight struggles to remember the friends she knows she is supposed to love, Rainbow Dash struggles with the guilt of indirectly causing her flying buddy's accident. Will the magic of friendship prevail? (NOT shipping TS and RD)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 8 )
Comment posted by Qussar deleted Oct 2nd, 2014

Well, this is good so far. BUT...

she went upstairs to he loft

Either "the" or "her" loft.

Really like it, I put it between my favs, hope u continue.

And it's officially worthy of getting a favorite from me. Also:

"Rainbow Dash, remember my element? Honesty? Yeah, it's a good thing it isn't yours."

:pinkiesmile: I like that touch.

This will probably be the first Pinkie Party ever that I have not attended, She thought. But I can't see Twilight, not until she is more like herself, and could possibly remember me in the right way, and forgive me…

:ajbemused:

:twilightsheepish:Err, Rainbow? You're acting a little suspicious.
:rainbowdetermined2: What? I didn't cause your accident!
:twilightoops:I didn't say you did...
:rainbowderp: ...
Or that's how it would go if Twilight questioned her.

I love this story!!:heart:
Are you going to continue it?

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