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Call me GB! ^_^ I enjoy writing colourful horse stories for you to enjoy. If you liked one of my stories, please share it with others and have a wonderful day!


Princess Luna has been through a tough life. A thousand years ago she could not control her jealousy, envy and rage and became the infamous Nightmare Moon. Then, she spent a thousand years on the moon, only to return, still as Nightmare Moon.

However, despite everything she has been through, her return to Equestria was warmly celebrated. Princess Luna is a pony that everypony loves, and she is completely forgiven for everything that's happened.

So, when Princess Luna is suddenly and unexpectedly killed, the entire nation of Equestria is thrown into grief and despair. Ponies everywhere find themselves unable to deal with the tragedy.

But the worst hit is Princess Celestia herself...

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 256 )

Wow...The Royal guard sure do suck at their jobs. They can't even protect an immortal. :applejackunsure:
It's an interesting story anyway.

You fiend! :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

I see the title, I wanna commit suicide.
Oh no my internet sucks can't watch live-stream it keeps getting stuck buck it:raritydespair:

Please don't tell me people are disliking this because Luna dies in it.:ajbemused:

omg im on chapter 2 right now but i love your story sooo much! like no joke! i cried when luna died!!:applecry::raritydespair::ajsleepy:

*Starts semi truck*
You've gotta get on the highway sometime, mister....
...And when you do....

....I'll be waiting for you!

*"D.T." by AC/DC starts to play*

good story so far, a mannly tear was shed :fluttercry:

Sad man, just sad. Good story however.

Very good so far. Very good.

Definitely tracking.

231948 I hope the same thing. This is the first website I've uploaded this to where the story has gotten any form of disapproval. I sure hope people are more mature than to downvote a story just based on its subject matter. :trixieshiftleft:

233506People should know what they're getting from the title. Don't like it? Don't read it.:facehoof:

:fluttershysad: Just sad bro. I imagine, this would be the procession song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4LyoUGxVd8

luna's ghost?

awsome :pinkiegasp:

luna used a spell to make her a ghost ? :pinkiegasp:

"who you gona call? ghost busters!" :twilightoops:

well done on the Zecora part, that must have been hard to write, always rhyming :derpytongue2:

awsome so far!

oh gawd,:pinkiegasp:

you continue to pull me into this story. awsome :scootangel:

wow, just wow.......


Argh! This story is AMAZING! REALLY! LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!! :heart::heart::heart::heart::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

I'm writing something like this.

However in mine Luna dies of a heartattack, and Celestia goes into catatonia for years.

It's up to Princess Twilight to save the day... and night of all the land.

Hurry Twilight! I've said it a million times, I hate cliffhangers. More please.

Mouth pistol? Really? Hope he has a good dental plan...

That's just... weird. :rainbowwild:

epic chapter + cliffhangers!

OH GAWD THE SUSPENCE! :trollestia:

just giggle at the ghosties fluttershy! :pinkiehappy:

322613 I've seen it done quite often, most notably in Fallout: Equestria. It's just how non-unicorns operate their firearms. Ponies have strong teeth, man. Have you seen some of the things they use their mouths for? :raritywink:

I am now part of a captive audience. DAM cliffhangers!

235276 Or judging by the title (and the fact that it's in my top 10 saddest songs) it could be a rewritten Vale Decem


384518 In terms of what that title means, you are correct. Vale Decem is "Goodbye ten", so this is "Goodbye Luna"

384568 :eeyup: Yup. :pinkiesmile: It would have been more than a little presumptuous to automatically assume that the thing in your mind when titling the chapter was the song playing during the regeneration of the 10th Doctor, seeing as Latin itself predates it by a couple thousand years, though it certainly was the first thing that popped into mine.

Seeing the above comment about the funeral procession song, though, I just had to make the direct connection. Polarbearman threw it right over the plate, so I had to take a swing! :rainbowlaugh:.

Faster girls you're running out of time!

I literally can't wait for the next chapter, I'm hanging on the edge of my seat!

Oh boy, we got some real tension going on! Can't want for the next chapter. :ajsmug:

Omg the suspence, keep going!:pinkiehappy:



its more about the recoiled and hot lead fling near there face. Plus the question of how they can load bullets into the mag with there mouth. And that's kinda the reason energy weapons are the common and small weapons are attached to the forelegs in my story, of course that's just me.

Anyway I've been following your story back on fanfiction.net so glad its on here.

THE SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::raritydespair::trixieshiftright:

That :fluttershyouch:
Big :fluttercry:
MEANIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :flutterrage:

I knew Luna was going to get shot as soon as I noticed Navy Shield hadn't used his gun yet. Hopefully we'll see a bit of Celestia rage next. Incinerating all of Equestria by dropping the sun on it should do. :twilightsmile: On a more serious note, that cliffhanger was evil. Though I'm holding out for a good ending nevertheless. It would be kind of a bummer otherwise, to have Luna die after all the effort and build up towards saving her. (But hey, such things have happened before, as readers of One Piece might know.) Good job!

Damn you! I hate this cliffhanger most of all!

We seem to have a big problem with the moon here.... Back in Chapter 9 they said Luna had to be killed during a NEW MOON so that she couldn't use the moon's power to regenerate herself. But somewhere along the way that seems to have changed to a FULL MOON, which doesn't really make sense, because that's when you'd expect her powers to be greatest. What happen? :derpyderp1:

The bad guys also seem to think she has to be killed outdoors in order for it to stick. Let's hope that was right.


A two-parter and I STILL got cliffhanger'd! And yet, I can't even be upset. I'm loving this story. Can't wait to see how this turns out.

How could this get dislikes, i am on the edge of my seat! :rainbowkiss:

IM......ON......THE......EDGE.....OF......MY.......(*Thump* ) AHH FELL OFF!

Now, you better not kill luna, who knows what might happen:pinkiecrazy: (along with the irony)

Somepony's going to get INCINERATED.

brimstone will rain down upon thee

That was glorious. Many tears were shed, MANLY TEARS WERE SHED!!!! I have no words for how emotional this roller coaster has been, no words.

I cannot wait for next chapter.

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