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Parodox


Because Paradox was taken

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This story is a sequel to What must not go unsaid


Honesty, Kindness, Laughter, Generousity, Loyalty, and Magic. These six elements make up the magical artifacts known as the Elements of Harmony. For years the six bearers kept the peace between all with their magic which defeated all evil that threatened their home
But they are not alone. There are other Elements than those of Harmony, and when they are unleashed the world begins to tear itself apart, and the battle for domination begins as Elements fight against Elements.

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Written by Storyteller and I

Cover art provided by me

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 53 )

8020109

Oh hey, you're a friend of Calvin's right?

8020911
No I just came from the other story
We had a conversation there
Who's Calvin?

8021508
Oh, well hello Calvin my name is Andrew

8023185 MY NAME IS GIGA NIGGA 9000 DEATH HOLOCAUST MACHINE

8023384

You have just earned my respect

Author's Note:
I am Catholic. Or at least I try to be a good one. I'm not one to force religion or anything but yeah, the Deer religion is basically like Christianity. Or I try to make it like that.

Well I'm a Christian

8028724

With the power of religion we rise!

Good luck dude and may the Element of Determination be with you :rainbowdetermined2:

The more I read this fimfic the more interesting it gets. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the rest of the whole fimfic.

8046430

Gee, thanks. I only wish other people would like it too

8047996 I'm shore more will like this fimfic if they give it a try like I did. By the way, awesome cover art for the story

I'm sorry for if I'm being a little inpatient but still when is the next chapter going to come out?

8059340

Not sure, I'm in Costa Rica with my friend. So I haven't had a whole lotta time to write

Well, shit.:ajbemused:

Ring the black bells, because Hell has broken open.

8023384 Random BS.
I freaking love this site.:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowdetermined2::raritystarry::raritywink::scootangel::twilightblush::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile:

COLD!
I got the chills off that last scene.

[If you didn't cry then you have no soul.]

A bit much on that statement don't you think?:unsuresweetie::duck::facehoof:

8067076

Well I cried and I have somewhat of a soul

8067052

"The only thing promised in life is death."

-Rosa

Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

8152489

There is blood, like a guy getting his head ripped off but that's only in chapter 4

There are many Elements, and each one serves an equally purpose

equal
"Belay that order." Gideon commanded. "Their is nothing to fear, this beast is under my control."
Delay"

what is the Guardian from?

Other races soon followed, some gaining the power of flight, others the power of flight,

repeated
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the Deer religion is basically like Christianity. Or I try to make it like that.

No it's close to an idealized version of christianity in reality christians were a military like organization with a knack for war.
You know how luther and many other broke from the main church that was what the church was originally like as proven by the judas bibles existence. Eventually one sect killed all the other christians, burned their bibles, and erased them from history which is the literal definition of a successful genocide. Other terrible thing include the medieval witch hunts, the inquisitions(more attempted genocide), and torturing their own templates
The Grandmaster Jacques de Molay said to have screamed out of the flames that King Philip IV and Pope Clement V would both meet him before God, “and that right soon.” They both died within a year; Phillip had a stroke and fell off his horse while hunting; Clement died of natural causes, and a rumor persists that his body lay in state during a thunderstorm, when lightning struck the building and burned it to the ground. For these reasons and many more I see the christians as a violent genocidal organization that has so much power that it doesn't even need to hide its dark past because people just accept it and some how aren't disgusted by the mass slaughter. To me they are the Nazis if they won WWII and then claimed there about peace in about 300 years people would accept them as the peace promoting organization they claimed to be just like the christians.
P.S. This wasn't grim overkill or an attempt to rile people up this was an attempt to let the truth go free and represent my view as an individual from one of the groups the church tortured and tried to eliminate.

Fawn squinted his eyes and saw that it wasn't the tree that was moving but rather the bark seemed to be twisting and shifting in a certain line. That's when Fawn realized it wasn't the tree which was moving.

I think you meant bark

An invisible gas escaped from the locker, one that made all of the manticore's start coughing.

Minotaur's

Finally! I was waiting for like a month for the next chapter. Which is a good chapter btw. Keep up the good work n I can't wait for the next chapter. Whenever that will be.

"Thank you, amen."

your god did nothing forester has the power that goes against your god worship him.
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8070053

If you didn't cry then you have no soul.

Hey I resemble that remark.

8165590

In the military, belay means to ignore or disregard the order that was given
8165769

The Guardian is just another Elemental, he isn't based off of anything but Storyteller's creation and mine.

8166742

Yeah, sorry to keep guys like you waiting, but finals are coming up and Calvin and I are being swamped with study guides, homework, quizzes, and other things.

8167484

He was not aware that it was Forester who brought him back, and even if he did know he would believe it was Nature that worked through Forester to save his son

First comment!:pinkiehappy:
Excellent chapter as always.
Though, if possible, when you do Life's sentences, see if you can add an outline to the words. It makes them very hard to read on a white background.

8174090

'Fraid I can't do that, there really isn't any other way to show Life speaking than with the white text (although to me it looks to be more silver.) and because Shadow's color is grey, I can't make the text any bolder and darker

So, Yellow Lantern Zoku(I think that's his name)

i just got a flashback of green lantern with the yellow fear.....:trixieshiftleft:

If you somehow got even a fraction of that right, my jaw will be to china in a light-second.

8202553

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This hit my front door, I assume you want it back?

"His name is Gideon you Scheißkopf Miststück" should be "His name is Gideon you Scheiß Miststück" because your version is incorrect in german gramma.
Keep up the good work:pinkiesmile:

8203652

It's supposed to be "You sh*thead bastard" in German. Since I only speak Chinese and English I had to use google translate

8203691 oh okay, I only speak german and english. German is my first language.

8204084

Do you know the correct translation for what I said?

8550237
life isn't dead it just needs new host that could take some time though

"What is the meaning of life?"

Indeed

8784190

If only it were that simple.

Also, nice reference.

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