• Member Since 20th Nov, 2013
  • offline last seen January 13th

SixShooterOutlaw


Just a Whovian Pegasister who loves Anime, Gaming and Writing.

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Rainbow Dash is excited to be spending her first Hearts and Hooves Day with Soarin, but when he doesn't come or say anything Rainbow gets worried that he has forgotten. So she starts looking for him.

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Comments ( 5 )

NEW LINE, NEW SPEAKER!!!!

A few grammar mistakes, but really good. Keep writing and you'll improve more and more. Love this story anyhow. Fav and Like.

You could have a brief sequel for the mare Cheese has a crush on. Good story by the way.

3897804 I'm glad you liked the story!:pinkiehappy: I was planning a sequel since I began writing this one! here is the link to it http://www.fimfiction.net/story/166420/will-you-be-my-super-duper-special-somepony Hope you like it!:twilightsmile:

Cute! :pinkiesmile: The 1st line was a huge run-on sentence, but I enjoyed the story, nonetheless. :twilightsmile:

~Dashie14~

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