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Our First Hearts and Hooves Day

Rainbow Dash is excited to be spending her first Hearts and Hooves Day with Soarin, but when he doesn't come or say anything Rainbow gets worried that he has forgotten. So she starts looking for him.

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Rainbow87dash #1 · Feb 4th, 2014 · 2 · ·

NEW LINE, NEW SPEAKER!!!!

Darth Redbeard #2 · Feb 4th, 2014 · 2 · ·

A few grammar mistakes, but really good. Keep writing and you'll improve more and more. Love this story anyhow. Fav and Like.

SageBrony07 #3 · Feb 5th, 2014 · 1 · ·

You could have a brief sequel for the mare Cheese has a crush on. Good story by the way.

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SixShooterOutlaw #4 · Feb 6th, 2014 · · ·

3897804 I'm glad you liked the story! I was planning a sequel since I began writing this one! here is the link to it http://www.fimfiction.net/story/166420/will-you-be-my-super-duper-special-somepony Hope you like it!

Monie Le Brony #5 · Jul 19th, 2015 · · ·

Cute! The 1st line was a huge run-on sentence, but I enjoyed the story, nonetheless.

~Dashie14~

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