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MiraculousDragonMaster


Howdy, everyone! I have been liking a lot of stories on this site. So I decided to join the community. I hope you guys read and enjoy the stories that I will share here with you.

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Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity have lived in the underwater world of Seaquestria ever since they could remember; and all they remembered before arriving in the undersea realm was when they were young fillies being lost at sea. They all knew that they were different than the other seaponies, with their unique appearances and lovely singing voices, and they wondered what it was like up in the world above.

After experiencing another storm that stirred up old and faint memories of their forgotten past, they all eventually sneak away from Seaquestria, return to Equestria, and regain their land hooves. All the while, they reunite with their families, go on fantastic adventures, and grow to fall in love with very special someponies or creatures.

However, there’s two things threaten the happiness that they have always dreamed of. Three attractive yet jealous mares with a darker fishy secret, and an ulterior motive other than eliminating whoever they see as competition, challenge the six of them to see who is the better singing group. And that whenever the Mane 6 touch water, they reveal their fish tails as a reminder of where they had been all the time apart from their families.

How can this group of best friends learn how to handle so much? Well, not standing alone and finding true strength within each other is part of the solution.

Ships contained: Flashlight, SoarinDash, AppleSpike, Fluttercord, Cheesepie, and Raripants.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 113 )

I'll give you an upvote!

I have not even read the prologue yet, and I'm already looking for references. Let's see.
The Little Mermaid
Barbie as the Island Princess
Either Aquamarine or H2O: Just Add Water or both
Am I missing anything?

This story is getting amazingly good. :scootangel:

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Thanks! :twilightsmile:

And the references, even before you read the prologue, was it that obvious? :ajbemused:

But, thanks again! :pinkiesmile:

WOW. I can tell you put a lot of thought into this story given how much is written compared to your other stories I have read. And so far The Little Mermaid is the only reference I got so far given the theme of the story and summary you have about them falling in love later. I am certainly going to be following this one! I can't wait to see how they meet the boys! Will they be vacationing on a ship and the girls spot them? Or will they will they be kind-of like pirates? (Gasps! Would they be working for Captain Celano?!) Of course this brings up the question of how each guy will be introduced and what would their backgrounds be particularly Spike, Discord, and Soarin's. I also got the songs the first time I saw them, that was really great! :pinkiehappy: A very good start to a very good story. :ajsmug::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::yay::twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::heart:

Honestly... didn't really care for either song, but I will concede that they fit here.

Looking forward to when they bump into the colts. Why do I get the feeling it will be Twilight and Flash first? ... (looks at writer's Avatar)... oohhh!!!:raritywink:

I love how you used the song 'Constant as the Stars Above', brings back memories to my first ever story on this site. Also...Ooooooooo cliffhanger at the end. Hope the next chapter is soon. I'm excited :pinkiehappy:

I recognized those songs so you brought back childhood flashbacks I spent with my little sister. Looking forward to this one!

You had me at Fluttercord :heart:

Wow, please update soon

Finally! Been waiting to see what would happen.

Great chapter. How soon until we get to the shipping parts?
Also, you were asking for votes for that story? :pinkiegasp: I thought you were asking for guesses. Well, if it's votes you want, then I vote Flashlight. :twilightsmile:

Huh. Nice start. I like it.

I absolute looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this story

I am really looking forward to what comes next! As for your other story, I'm torn between the ships but I am really curious on how you would do Flashlight for a Romeo and Juliet scenario, with Fluttercord it'll be pretty obvious.

FlashLight... always FlashLight

Damn it, I just got that song out of my head!

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Still humming...
"One small thing, so much we can create..."

Are you uploading the chapters of this story on the eleventh day of every month?

Hmm ..........
You actually surprised me with this really good story I look forward to Moa

I'm looking forward to reading more :)

This story is GREAT so far! Looking forward to the next update... I can't wait to read more <3

A mermaid song to consider:

Just thought you could add in the song.

You don’t want to work on it anymore?

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I’m still working on it. I did say before that updates on this story would be less often because of longer chapters.

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but can you make more time for your work?

Cute story, but for future chapters I suggest that you not reuse scenes from the movie. It's fine to reference a scene, but many of the lines in this chapter are lifted straight from the source, which is rather boring to read. Don't be afraid to play around with it and mix it up more. For example, Skystar could've tried to cheer up the Mane Six instead of the other way around, since they were worried about their families.

Wait what about discord ?!
Does hè come in the next chapter or what ?

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Oops. I keep forgetting to mention that Discord doesn't come until later in the story. The Mane 6 will have to battle him, and quick before he reveals their watery secret.

Great really looking forward to Discord’s part the most though
Can’t wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

Wow, I don't know why, but Fancy being friends with the rest of the guys without Rarity's influence feels weird to me. At the same time, it certainly is plausible.

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They're probably the only guys he can be with that aren't stuck up noble snobs.

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Is it me or does Discord seem to be the odd one out in your stories? :applejackunsure:

Dang. This was a really good chapter. I like how this introduced most of the guys, and I like your take on Flash. FlashLight is why I'm here. I really like where this is going.

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How so? :applejackunsure:

I mean, I know I’m still working on his whole wacky personality. But, if this is about him not showing up yet, he will be eventually.

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In Beauty Lies Within, he's the only love interest who is locked out of the loop, and in this story, he isn't friends with the other guys (pause) yet. I know you have story purposes in both cases, but it's just something that I noticed. Then again, in AJ and the Dragon, Flash was the one who was the odd one out (only love interest who wasn't at the cursed castle), and based on what I've already read, that seems to be the case with Through the Mirror also (only boy who hasn't met his intended love interest yet). Again, I realize there are story purposes for this.

let me guess; the next chapter will be on March

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Hmm...

We’ll have to see. :raritywink:

But, it might come later, depending on my schedule.

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