This is a re-imagining of Free at Last https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401389/free-at-last
Hello, I'm cccvvvttt. Why? Because... I couldn't think of anything better. Also all my works consist of HIE stories. Maybe that will change if I ever write something else, but mostly that
This is a re-imagining of Free at Last https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401389/free-at-last
AWESOME!
OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH! *SQUEES LOUDLY* ITS FINALLY OUT ITS FINALLY OUT! IT IS ABSOLUTELY PHENOMENAL AND ITS ONLY THE FIRST CHAPTER!*BEARHUGS CCCVVTT*
(OMG my innerfanboy is in full bloom once again!)
I reread the story looking for errors and I only found one.
the n in went is missing
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The n key is one of my broken ones. I'll fix it right now. Thanks for informing me.
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your welcome!*Hugs you again*
Also is it a good or bad thing that my inner fanboy is back in full power?
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It's a good thing, always appreciate a fan and good friend
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do you think this story will surpass FAL? also glad im appreciated
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The answer to that question is up to you to decide. When this one is complete, you'll be able to determine which one is better in your opinion. This one is going to delve more into Zachary's personal life, like how he was like at school and stuff like that. I can't tell you which one is better because that's for you to decide as your opinion, but in my opinion, I think the premise of this one will be better.
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will there be a villan
I believe this is going be a great re-imaging story!
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I'm going to try my best.
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Every Story has some sort of villain or conflict. Yes, there will be a villain, but it won't be visible through the naked eye
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It is good to know that those ponies were curious about Zachary. The last version I read involved ponies being afraid of humans.
Sonic Boom in my pants😍😍😍
a good start, I am waiting impatiently for a continuation ...👍
do u have an estimate on when the next chapter will be released
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I'm going to use most of my spare time working on it. It should be out soon hopefully.
AWESOME!
I fell a lot of Love coming~
First of all i'd like to say sorry for the late comment i forgot to track the story so I didnt realize this chapter had been released.
I see what what ya did there!
*All of a sudden my fanboy emereges*
*SQUEE*
wow Hes so amazed he c-*SQUEE*
*Bearhugs cccvvvttt**SQUEE*
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I always enjoy hugs. *Hugs back* Can you guess what the song means?
Wouldn't Zach be bigger than that I mean hes 6 not 1
Also with this chapter I was starting to doubt if it would be better than the original but when I read Zachary's dream it made all my doubts disappear
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He's the same size as a colt or a filly.
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Awesome
I hope Zachary tells them he doesn’t wanna go back to his world, even when Twilight finds the spell to teleport him back
Guess we’ll just have to wait and see what’s planned for chapter three
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Yes, You'll just have to wait and see... Yes. Who knows after all
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This one will have a more psychological aspect than the original... Well, that's what I'm trying to do anyway
shone has an u instead of a o and is missing its e
woke is missing its n
nah is missing its h and rainbow is missing nb
meet is missing an e
THIS IS DEFINITELY BETTER THAN THE ORIGINAL!!!!
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I really need a new keyboard. Thanks for the compliment.
Rarity doesn't have an 8 in her name
This Chapter was Really AMAZING!
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Okay, that one was my fault, not the keyboards. I'll make the correction. Thanks for the support.
This reimagining story of Free at Last is getting interesting and very interesting
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Thanks. I wanted this one to have more of a phycological aspect and I guess I'm doing a good job. Thanks for the support.
*SQUEE* *BEARHUGS CCCVVVTTT*
THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING!!!
the t and e are in each other's place.
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Thanks for that
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Creepy....
AMAZOME CHAPTER DUDE!
also
you forgot the 1st a in tiara also theres no second i.
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Thanks
You cannot give up just yet...
cccvvvttt! (you)
stay
DETERMINED
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Dude... Are you alright? Do you want someone to talk to?
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I will, thanks.
Awesome!
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yay
Amazing chapter
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Thanks