• Published 3rd Sep 2018
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If You Want To Go, I Won't Stop You. - TwiPON3



Sunset has to make a decision that a friend might just make with her.

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Chapter 3

???, ??:??; Somewhere In A Paradise


When she hit the ground, the world only went black for a second before she found herself in a field, new clothes, and with a pair of wings just like her mom's.

She felt no pain.

No sadness.

Only joy.

Sunset knew she could never go back, though.

"Princess Celestia, Mom," she said to herself, taking her boots off and putting her feet in a stream of cool water, "I'm ready to be your daughter. I'm sorry it took so long."

Nonsense, my child, she heard her mom's voice in her head.

She knew that she wasn't there.

That they wouldn't see each other.

Again.

Ever.

"But I'm ready. Even if I am late."

Since she had arrived in this place, she didn't have a sense of time, so when someone came to her, she didn't know if she had been there for a minute, several eons, or somewhere in between.

"I told your mom," a familiar voice said.

Sunset turned around, but didn't find a vampire.

"What?"

Seth, but no vampire.

Not as messy, either.

"One stupid move."

"What happened?"

He sat next to her, leaving his sandals on when he put his feet in the stream.

"No vampires in the afterlife, apparently."

"No, what happened?"

"CHS has about 25% of its students left. 75% of the original body trolled you, so now they're rotting in Equestrian Dungeons. Your former-friends are with them, and I decided to jump the following day at midnight. Exactly a week after you. I know you're going to ask this, so I didn't try to learn any new songs just for your funeral. I had your mom, Princess Twilight, and the Equestrian others come in white. Princess Celestia made the week that you were dead into a holiday. She'll only raise the Sun halfway, and nopony sees her during that time. Essentially all of Equestria is put on pause for the week. Princess Twilight and her friends are going to try to come into the human world as much as possible to keep order and help Celestia. Greg and Mitzi weren't sad when I went, but only because I told them not to be. They knew it was for you, so they accepted it immediately. Your mom really loves you."

"How do I know that you won't hurt me?"

"I gave up Earth and being a vampire to come here, didn't I?"

Sunset forced a hug on Seth, knocking both of them into the stream.

"Sunset!" Seth laughed.

"Seth!" Sunset laughed in response.

After playing in the stream, they laid on their backs on the ground.

"Seth?"

"Yeah?"

"New life?"

"New life."

Comments ( 16 )

I don't get it.

9148941
In this incarnation of MLP/EG, the human world has an afterlife. This particular incarnation's Sunset didn't go into the Human world for the same reasons in the comic; instead she went into the human world because she knew that going through that part of the library was a big mistake, and that Princess Celestia, her mom, catching her might lead to her being disowned. The fact that she didn't have wings put a hidden resentment in the back of her mind, so she always thought she was a disappointment to the Princess. Sunset runs away into the mirror world during an episode of depresion.

Skip forward a few years, CH1 takes place. All of Sunset's friends abandon her and everyone thinks Anon-a-miss is her. Applebloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle's confessions are taken with pure denial from everyone. Sunset is about to jump, but when she finds out Seth has the same problem on a frequent basis, but never can go through with it, and being told to do what she absolutely thinks is best. She decides she's made as much of her peace as she possibly can, so she wants Seth to head her funeral, then she jumps, taking Seth's advice to heart.

I really hope this helps.

9149273
Ok that helps. Will you make a second part with the Rainbitches serving their sentence, and forced to realized how badly they screwed up?

9149295
Honestly, I was debating to do a sequel, so yeah! You got it!

9149300
Cool! i get why everyone was in denial they didn't want to be wrong the Sisters or two sisters and sister figure being the stupidest.

Were the CMC also jailed or they free as they did fess up, if they are free for confessing then maybe visit the Rainbooms in prison, tell them while they screwed up, they at least were willing to fess up to fix things, them going into denial and pushing Sunset to her death was their doing thou.

9149303
They, my friend, are not part of the 25% still in the human world. Princess Twilight and Seth are the only two that added things up right. They don't go back to the human world, but aren't imprisoned either.

9149312
Take be revealed in the sequel?

9149368
What do you mean?

9149369
............Groans....

Ok fine...What happened to the CMC?! Are they banished imprisoned dead, on Santa's naughty list what?!

9149374
OH! Sorry! Twilight's finding something else out to do with them. I thought you meant something else. My bad!

9149303
Sequel's up. I don't know if it's as good as the first, but I went off the base that the CMCs were overly-aware of what happened when Anon-a-Miss went out of control.

9166121
What? Did I spell something wrong?

This is the stupidest thing I have ever read and it makes no sense whatsoever.

What in the name of Hazzard County did I just read? Who are these OC's that have no backstory?

This was over fast.

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