Portal accident equals a human going to equestria. What will happen on this adventure?
(Rewritten from the ground up!)
Warning, Will contain Inflation, Also Rubber ponies.
(Cover art drawn by me)
Chapters (9)
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Interesting.
You naughty naughty girl~
Happy birthday then. Also this was a nice small chapter.
Ermah-bat-gerd it's alive! ALIIIIVE!
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Yes! I can't belive that I picked it up again, i have no experience with writing, but i'm trying to make an entertaining story, haha.
This story is interesting, and cute. Hope to see another chapter soon.
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Thank you for the complement!
Great Story
Just caught up and wanted to ask where all the food was going in Loonie, that is, was it just piling up in a hollow leg somewhere? (Yuck!) Wasn't until a bit later that you mentioned an ability to convert food to air. Another question was of a technical nature; why are nearly all the singular "i" uncapitalized? It's a bit jarring at first but as it's consistent, I got used it.
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Oh, Crap. I can try to fix that. I'm sorry, i don't usually write, So i forget all the time.
This story is really out of my comfort zone, it's my first one really. But i am trying my best.
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Seems to be a harmless bit of slice of life so far, nothing to be worried about. I've been tempted over the year to try my hand at OC insertion but it never went anywhere and remains mulled over fragments-- I'm not audacious enough to try and go for Ponyville, instead I use OC towns like Bucksnort. Problem there is I then have to craft entire populations to go with it and I'm utterly useless at creating one-off names to throw around.
Huh, Twilight's friendship festival is drawing near? So this story probably set after season 7. Anyway good chapter. Been expecting the reform ability every balloonies have.
interesting story keep it up an nice art to hope we could share some art one of these days? Also I wonder if her balloony self might soon start to affect other ponies as well?
This is probably just me but, does Fluttershy has a balloon fetish? That's what I'm getting regarding her behaviour around Loonie Sky.
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This fluttershy mayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy have a thing for balloon pets? xP
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*squeeeee*
Great work keep it up
That cover art is dummy thicc
Huh this story seems to have a bit of the same problem as mine... I can't figure out pacing, just can tell when it's off.
Well this was interesting... yay
Looking forward to wherever this may end up going.
I wonder how are town names are like in equestria all well...
nice but when will the next chapter come out?
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I've been both trying to get better at writing and thinking of ideas for the story, I dunno when the next chapter will come out.
Ohhhh yea a nice fanfic
PERSONA!!!!!!!!! Hehehe I love the game. It pretty much became #1 spot above Dragonball XV for me.
hay do continue this
hay update it I want to see more chapters
I can totally relate to life getting in the way. Pity, I absolutely adore inflation, but there's plenty of sources if ya know where to look.
Well, there's at least one reader waiting for anything posted to this story.
Well if you ever get back to this, know I’m excited for more!
Take your time. Because as the saying goes. Haste makes waste. And all that. And now for what I want to say... if you somehow continue this story then I'm going to be stuck reading it a few more times.
i can see the reason there take ur time ur stories are great
Why was Luna in Ponyville?
Thankfully it wasn't something about a crown.
status on the story? as i have not checked on this for some time now its not dead it it?