• Member Since 20th Sep, 2016
  • offline last seen Sunday

CreeperZone


In a literal sense, for me, MLP is a life savor. It saved me from a dark place, it has given me hope. I write stories here, very personal stories. Set in a darker version of MLP, a version with hope.

T
Source

This story is a sequel to Flower


Hello Ancient one, my name is Bun Button, I was a scientist working on creating a truly living artificial intelligence before I had been given this gift of knowledge. And yes, I do know you are there. I believe the word you use is ''Reader'', well, the few of us who know about you call you Ancients.

I am sorry if this seems confusing, or strange, but if you are like my creator, I assume you are here to take a peek into the world I was so blessed to be born into. Feel free, this is the story of my life in Equestria, and how I went from a humble little city dweller to a cyborg super-spy that can see into other universes. So if your here for a crazy action-packed ride through the life of a near-superhero, I hope you enjoy mine.

Sincerely, your loyal servant, Bun Button.

P.S. I would also like to say that CreeperZone has told me to mention that I can in fact hear you, if you have anything you wish to say to me, go ahead! Just make sure you address it to me by name and I will make sure to write back at my earliest convenience.

P.S.S I am bad at writing letters, but whatever, another thing I forgot to write is a specific thank you to Swirling Blade! He helps with the equine-to-your-language translations, I'm sorry if they're sometimes a bit, you know, wonky. Your language is very difficult for, I believe you'd call my species, a ''horse''? Right? Anyways, Sincerely, your loyal servant, Bun Button. (Again.)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 19 )

I LOVE IT

“99,999 words exactly, you had just interrupted me as I was about to break sextuple digits.” He smiled, seeing that Bun was impressed.

WAIT A MINUTE

Interesting start. Can't wait to see what you plan to do next.

"If it flies, it soon won't'

Ahh, loved the speech almost Everytime

9735458
I like your enthusiasm :)
- Bun

She picked up the note and unfolded it once, revealing a small message.

Thank goodness these things only happens in fictions, cause i would die if i got myself one of those that changes the story

She cried and screamed in utter terror, destroying her own vocal cords, she tried to shut her eyes but the light was too bright and too dark simultaneously to be protected by her eyelids from this immediate distance, and Odin didn't turn his head away to save her. He didn't even know.

Whoah, this is the point where you have to read again to let it sink in how it turned dark

Twilight leaped from her throne and stuck her face inches away from Bun, nearly frothing at the mouth in her desperately confused state. “C-changeling DNA... I... I completely overlooked that... I-it was deemed unsafe in the chemical field due to high cancer rates... Though... This may be the solution I've been dreaming of...”

There is a quote from the book "drawing with the right side of the brain" that sas
Of the life pleasures, the noblest of all is the pleasure of the understanding realization

“Why don't we begin... Can you confirm this is you?” Bun was given a long checklist of her name, age, home address, work address, family members, credit card information, favorite colour, least favourite animal and allergies.

I felt uneasy about my credit card information reading this line

I had imagined that the part where blood diamond said about the capabilities of the body where mediocre where a speechcraft skill to make bun do as blood diamond wanted

I noticed the foreshadowing about blood diamond not being sure about her real name

Now that i thought about it, the story kinda took a very different route i was expecting with the secret agents compared to the first 3 chapters

Edit: read the intro again, "cyborg super spy"

9815972
Slips dragon-style secret note into pocket

Comment posted by CreeperZone deleted Jan 17th, 2020

Hi. The link that “peek” in the description leads to (https://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/1213543) is dead. You might want to fix that?

10119798
Thank you for the heads up! Fixed.

10120130
I’m glad to have helped! This is a story that I like.

10122001
That makes me happy to hear, and I apologize for slow chapter releases but it's currently exam season of my final year soooo yeah in like 3 months I'll be putting out a bunch more chapters!

Lots of love - Cz <3

Nice. Hopefully there will be more to this

Login or register to comment