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{Flower - Description} The documented events caused by the AI known as Cardinal, the first and final major failure, and ultimate downfall of the Shy Project. Footage found is a combination of computer history and recovered security camera recordings, along with a large amount of footage decoded from the AI's own database, all put together by CreeperZone, with the help of PeerImagination with compilation and editing. Available for public study and use in creative commons. Best viewed with regular visual settings, turn off Night Mode or any plugins affecting colour for best experience.
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Chapters (10)
Damn...this is getting intense...I -like- it~
Left Cardinal raising an eyebrow? Probably Seeker. ^^;
Twilight seems intense too.
Seeker is moonlighting for Cardinal? Goodness, she gets around.
Also this story is awesome and gritty. I love it so.
Somepony needs to get her strapped down somewhere...wowzers.
And so the hunted becomes the hunter...
It's so sad, how a good story ends...like you are saying goodbye to someone you had just gotten to know. How you were with them through thick and thin. How you've gone to see what they've seen and experienced. Realizing that it is over...but in a way, her story isn't really over is it? In a way this is a new beginning, too...
Thank you for this. It was tragic, heart warming, intense, and had an ugly beauty to it.
I can only hope they see each other again. To learn what love really is for them both.
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Wow, I was pretty surprised to open Fimfiction to see 8 notifications, but wow, thank you for the kind words!
I am very happy you enjoyed the story, and if you like this style of world I hope you are pleased to know that I am working on making an interconnected series of stories based on this world, (The only other currently that is out is called War Pony, but there will be lots more.)
Also thank you for pointing out some mistakes, my editor can only get so many of them and with my dyslexia, there is a lot. I've been trying to fix them as they are pointed out to me but I am slowly getting better.
Anyways thank you for reading and commenting, it truly is inspiring. - Cz
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Glad to give them for a great story! I read some yesterday, but then I just sat down and couldn't pull myself away! That kind of story that just pulls you in and keeps you tied to it is great to see, and I am immensely thankful for the chance to read it.
I must say I am curious to know how things got to such a state in this AU, and to learn more about the world that Cardinal found herself in. As ugly as it may seem at some points, there is still kindness and beauty to find within it. Hope, as you put it. I'll have to read War Pony soon, and am eager to see what else you put out, connected or not to this world you have brought to light.
I have some slight issues with reading comprehension at times too, but the important thing is to keep working at it. A pointer here and there about a mistake is a chance to improve and make a connection with someone, so I feel that's something that can bring out the best in both sides of the conversation! That and I was almost miffed at how nobody had posted -any- comments in this story, good OR bad! With how this story reached me I felt I should put at least something out there and hope others will too, so you and others can make their own connections with you and this great read.
I now see the near-wall of text I've put up, so I'll finish by saying thanks again, and I hope to read more of your works soon!
This was an amazing and also emotionally draining and sad read. Apart from a few spelling errors and grammatical issues, this was an absolutely beautiful story.
How were you able to make almost every chapter exactly ten thousand words?
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Eh. Pure coincidence ;)
(But for reals, yeah that was very intentional and took a lot of work, this whole book took a lot more to make than any regular story. The point of it is showing that every chapter the same themes are being repeated from the first chapter of Cardinal's initial journey in it, and only at the last chapter does that cycle end as she breaks free from it.)
This was pretty amazing to read. The amount of time and care that went into it must have been insane. Easily one of my favorites that I've read. I especially loved the use of colors throughout the text to emphasize things.
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Thank you very much!
Luv <3
Absolutely Amazing.... like seriously. Amazing. Hate the ending though because I dont like death. Lol. Still wish I knew what happened after she blew up though.... how the world and such reacted im extremely curious to know.
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Thank you very much! And if you are curious on how the world changed afterwards, I'm currently working on Harmony Of Machines, which is a direct sequel to this story following Bun!
This is an interesting story!
It's like The Mind Electric meets House Of Leaves. This has my attention