• Published 16th Mar 2019
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Flame of a Dragon - ShadowNightmare



A young teenage girl by the name of Victoria gets an unexpected surprise in the mail that turns her whole life upside down.

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Comments ( 49 )

Great work can’t wait for the next one

Whoa! Nice.

'Dragona Jewlery,' "Probably Etsy!" :rainbowlaugh:

Great story, hope it keeps picking up.

:pinkiegasp: OHMYGOD—STARSET!!! :pinkiehappy: Love that group! :yay:

please continue more ember, please.

Is this what my life has become? To see myself in the mirror as a dragon, and then my eyes turn to reptilian?

So... the physical transformation hasn't actually happened yet? Just the reflection? Interesting concept, indeed.

Very interesting so far. Can't wait to see more!

9594466

I have to apologize in replying late to your comment. The only physical change that has happened so far would be Victoria's eyes, as they were once emerald and now been turned into ember slit eyes. Wearing the necklace allows her to see her dragon form, but has led to the changing of the eyes.

Thanks for enjoying the concept by the way. I'm not certain when will the next update come due to me being busy with college work.

Respectfully, as I’ve heard many authors request feedback for a down-vote, here are my concerns. The fundamental premise seems interesting, however the execution is poor. About two thirds of the sentences were grammatically incorrect or awkward or else seemed so unbelievable that they broke me out of the story. (For example, the main character expecting to get rich being a teacher, or believing she is familiar with almost every jewelry maker. Ember is not a color.) I can’t recommend others read this story as it stands.

I am glad others have been able to enjoy this story and I wish you the best in your continued writing.

9632168
Will you let us know if you're writing it?

9646823
Do you need any other people who may have received a necklace and say, turned into Smolder or her brother, Garble or another creature (like Yona the Yak, Silver Stream the Hippogryph, Ocellus the Changeling, or any others?

9646823

I will. Again, really am sorry for replying this late. University life isn't easy when it comes to wanting to write stories when I have free time.

9805649
Try it on the weekends and school holidays.

im loving this story so far ember is one of my favorite dragons in mlp so im excited to see a story with her keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

Hope you find the time to upload more chapters to your stores

9917617

I've been trying to. Fall semester has been a pain in the flank, unfortunately. :ajsleepy:

Well hope to see u soon

9965432
Don't worry. I'm still not going to give up on this story! :rainbowdetermined2:

Interesting

When do you plan to continue?

10008756
Still working on college work for a class of mine. Until then, don't expect any updates coming any time soon. :ajsleepy:

10049014
I'll be coming... soon. :twilightsheepish:

10051918
I love this story already! Can't wait for the next chapter!

10203440
I'm still here. Like I've told others, I'm busy with university work. I can't write this story until I finish my hard classes. Really stressful over on my side, but I have not forgotten about this one story of mine. I want to continue on with this story, but university just isn't catching me a break sadly. :ajsleepy::twilightoops:

Its been ages since you upsated, plz update or hand it over to someone who will continue plz

10204634
When's the next chapter?

Dragons are reptiles they wouldn’t have breasts they aren’t mammals

10349510
:ajbemused:

Do you really think logic is going to apply on something that is fiction?

10378181 Sounds like crazy Writing. Writing Really the only way you can make a female character look pretty by adding breasts just wiw how creative.

10378509
I don't know what I just read, but you are aware that this story has the anthro tag on, right? Not to be rude or anything, but this is my story and I know I can't please everyone. If it's not your cup of tea, then don't read it.

10280659
Sorry for my late reply. I'm having more free time in terms of writing on here. I have made a little bit more progress on this story. You might be able to see an update either this month or next month, but I can't make promises.

Is this still alive?

10396619
It still lives, my man. I just been busy on my side. This story ain't dying on my watch!

Do you have writer's block when I comes to this story?

10540591
Not entirely. It's just that I'm in my last semester as a university student and I will graduate this fall.

In terms of ideas, however, I still have some to go by for future chapters.

Would’ve been nice to see this story continue

Yo it's been two years since the last update, what happened?

10787310
It's... still coming, just been focusing on other story projects and relaxing irl. :twilightblush:

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