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Holocron


Gaze within the Holocron and see what stories it has to tell.

Comments ( 16 )

I love how many dislikes this has, just because it so clearly not porn, how could lie to everyone like that? You evil person tricking people into reading your story by not obviously and blatantly marking it as “porn”!

8898833
My apologizes for your dislike of this piece. But I must disagree with one thing. This is a porn. It clearly states and details intercourse. Though short as it is, there is still a disrobing, a penetration, and then an orgasm.

8898841
What?! I would never have guessed that as being possible?! (I dunno why that was a question. Not important.) I mean, it’s not like it says it, right there in the tags! I, sir, am now going to dislike your story, so as to make my displeasure plain and obvious, and make sure that you know that you should be ashamed of yourself for making me read this trash! Because I certainly couldn’t have simply NOT read the story upon seeing the porn tag. No, I knew, the very minute I saw that tag, that I would have to read it, simply so I could be insulted by this disgusting display of horrible, evil SMUT!

8898855
Thank you for your opinion, and I respect your right to express it so. :twilightsmile:

https://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide#Said-tags

You really need to read this part of fimfiction's writing guide, because in every instance of your dialogue that was followed by said, commented, or any other said tag, you used a period. You need to use a comma.

Also, publishing 3 stories all at once is not a good idea. You make those who don't have much time to pick and choose maybe one story, leaving the other two untouched and put in the (not going to) read later list.

well rushed fiction. It didn't make me feel hard at all... do better the next time as I go 2 more of your rushed stories.

Do not let the haters get you down.

8898894
I agree with this... Seeing 3 stories in a row by the same author in under five minutes......It makes me uneasy you could say

8898894
In a similar vein, it's not that posting three stories in a row is a bad thing, but rather that more people will just think you're trying too hard, or are farming for upvotes, favorites, followers, etc.

8899004
Certainly raised my eyebrow in curiosity.
I started wondering if there was gonna be more than just three in a row.

8898865
I don't think he was being serious. It looked more like sarcastic humor. :rainbowlaugh:

8899447
I figured it was but unless an emoticon of some kind is shown to display emotion, I have to assume every message is serious. That's how I show respect to all my readers. :twilightsmile:

Can there be more? It’s really good.

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