Serve the Zebra

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Shadowpony300

Shadowpony300 #1 · May 13th, 2019 · 2 · 3 ·

NICE

Shimmer_Bolt

Shimmer_Bolt #2 · May 13th, 2019 · · ·

Love it.

Let's play "Downvote the Degenerate."

Madness bookman

Madness bookman #3 · May 13th, 2019 · 3 · ·

Nothing really happened

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #4 · May 13th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Shrug

Silver Eyes

Silver Eyes #5 · May 15th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Next challenge is to write a story in 1000 words and not 1000 words trying to be a story.

DocMadfox

DocMadfox #6 · May 16th, 2019 · 5 · ·

While I enjoyed it - and would never say one has to write more than 1k words if you don't waste them - this seems more like a build up than an actual story. I would suggest going into detail for the sex.

V-H-SClop

V-H-SClop #7 · May 30th, 2019 · 3 · ·

will there be part 3?

LewdChapter

LewdChapter #8 · Jun 2nd, 2019 · 11 · 1 ·

I wanted to like both of these stories, but I sadly can't. The first one was almost there, just rushed to hell. I've always disliked word-restriction challenges like that. Most stories are going to need more than 1k words to get across the scene that you're trying to paint. Take this story, for instance. Basically nothing happens. It's a good concept that I'm very into, but I can't help but feel cock-teased (and not even in the fun way)

SWEETOLEBOB18

SWEETOLEBOB18 #9 · Sep 15th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Reluctant at first, she eventually relented and took a flight to the exotic lands of the zebras. Upon landing, an escort by the name of Zaka was waiting for them. Telling them that he was a friend of the Princess and was her escort when she visited the continent. The trip was nice and calming, with plenty of sights to see as the land was beautiful. Landscapes she would’ve never known or seen back in Equestria. And best of all, despite their guide’s rather large and...impressive features, Velvet felt no temptation to indulge. Where as before, she would have his cock in her throat before even saying hello. But now, she felt such pride in her self control. Even Twilight and Cadance seemed well behaved. Eventually, Zaka brought them to his village, a very rural and homely look (looking) place. Aside from the near nude attire of the residents, it was nice. The tribe was so kind and friendly. They even offered to share their special fruit wine that they make only in their village. Though hesitant at first, seeing her daughters partake, Velvet takes a sip. Before long, her eyes feel heavy and everything goes black.

Stormsair