• Published 21st Apr 2018
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Twenty Three Score Divided by Twenty - Kaidan



As mildly interested in Anthropology, I always sorta wanted to be human, but not for real! Now that it has, all sorts of things are getting weird around here. I'm a mare, not a dude! Humans aren't real... right?

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i get feeling that this is more about you listing off all of the fan fics you read instead of ponies turning human

Well... there is Rule 64 (nudity) and Rule 63 (gender bending), so where are the other rules?

How do you plan to write a fic in such a short amount of time? I have trouble trying to push a Flash fiction in a week :twilightoops:

8885064
Some people need less time. I've put out some one-shots in as little as a day.

Kaidan, you are a beautiful buy some apples and I hope you never change.
8880074
I will rage if she does not literally grow a hipper tipper now.
So thanks for that.

“So… you worried for Shining Armor?” you ask.
“Nah, Spike’s watching him and he’s not cursed. If Celestia can’t fix this, we’ll head back and begin experimenting for a cure. If Spike is immune, I can try giving Shining Armor some of his blood… and since my magic seems to be fading slowly, I might even be able to try a spell or two dozen on him,”

Shining: "I'm soo looking forwards to this."
Spike: "Welcome to my world."

“I have a bad feeling about this,” you remark, as clever, witty, and original as ever.

Especially original.

Good chapter!
I'm curious what they will find inside the palace.


If you have some spare time consider making a blog/author's note explaining the story-references. I got a few, but not all.
And I imagine especially the bronies new to the fandom will have trouble understanding these.

Don’t Human Open Inside

... I don't get it. :unsuresweetie:

Wait a second... Did you lie about how fast you were gonna complete the fic? Unless you have like several chapters already been written, there's no way you could catch up to your supposed deadline:ajbemused:

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Basicaly there were too many side stories so they had to make restrictions on who could make them.... it was THAT popular.

8892785
Oh, I get this one!
It's a reference to the big boxes they stuff zombies into from The Walking Dead. The left door says

Don't
Open

And the right door says

Dead
Inside

But if you read it left to right, it looks like

Don't | Dead
Open | Inside

So people like to make fun of it. It inspired its own subreddit, /r/dontdeadopeninside

Hello? Anypony here?

*pokes story with stick*

Southern accent: Ah think it's daid!

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I was considering finishing it up as the silly/random thing it is. Maybe it'll spontaneously resurrect itself soon.

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