Sometimes you lose yourself in your own narcissism. That's when you find out you might be the bad guy.
Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash are in a relationship. A completely secret one. On the day that Fluttershy will tell her friends about the relationship, Rainbow Dash has a chance to get in the Wonderbolts. Twilight casts the spell for other ponies to walk on clouds. Something goes awry and Fluttershy's special power awakens. With it comes problems that Equestria has never seen. Happens after season 2 of FiM.
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NO NO NO NO the other main 6 should not get powers excluding rainbow for simple reasons but the others why them this is fluttershy's thing you know
True, I haven't really figured out where it's going to go from here. If they do all get powers though, they probably won't be on the same side.
say what?
Give me time. This is my first story and all. You see. I just need a couple chapters to flesh out the plot.
Hey as long as Dashie and Fluttershy stay together, it'll be all good. Its great to see a diffrent kind of Flutterdash story appearing like this.
(So diffrent to the cute and cuddly ones... I write.)
You have my attention. Now feel free to take as much time as you need to figure out where this awesome story is going.
Hmmmm.... Not only is it a Flutterdash shipping, Fluttershy becomes a dragon/phoniex/pony... I like it!
FlutterDash!
I definitely approve. X3 I look foward to see where it all goes! 
Oh! First comment! Well, I really like the idea of this so far. A fight between alicorns? Epic! Can't wait for more chapters!
I like where this is going... special powers + cool fight between alicorns. I wonder if the two princesses will be getting involved too
FTW!
Go team Flutterdash!
Now done with the first three chapters. The story will become more actiony. These chapters were just used as a way to set up the powers, characters and plot. Now the teams start to convene on Ponyville. Things will be going down.
980188 And I'm liking where this is going down to
Just add a little Flutterdash action to and blend it in with this awesome war you have set up and things will be super sweet.
FTW!
I plan to, just needed to create a setting for the battle between the Morning, Dark, and Canterlot factions. More Flutterdash is on the way. Thanks for the previous comment by the way, your question on whether the Princesses would get involved helped me a lot with the latter half of Chapter 3.
Flim and Flam can duplicate themselves? They're already annoying enough, why do you need to make more?
May i ask are there going to be OCs?
Yes there are the two new alicorns will be my only OC's in the story. I thought that adding those two would be enough.
Ok, scratch that last statement. I'll have three OC's (the brothers of the Princesses and a third OC appearing in chapter 4.) This is what happens when you write like I do. The journey to the end is a means in itself. I do know roughly what will transpire, in the story. Get ready for some more weirdness.
Kinky first part... not bad. Just kinky.
I'm looking foward to the big fight up next though. Keep the chatpers coming please.
Yesh... I see where this is going
IM SOOOO SORRY! I disliked it because i really don't like the idea of flutters getting new powers and or new looks. I love, no, I LOVE FLUTTERDASH! But I just don't like this one. I am soooo sorry again. Still friends
?
No worries, I understand that a few people wouldn't like the premise of the story. To tell the truth, I got the whole idea of the story from a random thought I had so I had to write it, or it would just bug me. For the record, I will be going on a vacation tomorrow so no more updates for at least a week. Once again thanks for reading. You people drive me to write more.
Woah... I want to know more about Sameal now.
Rainbow is so fucking lucky!
WOOOW, what a coincidence! didn't read it yet, but just went check if this had been updated, and immediatly i get the e-mail saying: "Brand New Powers has been updated!"
oh, Fluttershy... *Cough* Slut *Cough*
So, everypony (possibly including Shining Armor) is now pregnant?
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No (while that would be hilarious) think of it as one time=one baby. And dependent on physiology Shining Armor is not pregnant. In my head it is Fluttershy, Cadence, AJ, Applebloom, Octavia, and Pinkie that are pregnant. While for the lolz your idea would be awesome; I have certain ships I like and well I went with them. Also this gets rid of the whole foal issue since most of the characters are female (except for the few male stallions like Big Mac) and also magic always makes things like this better in terms of impossibility. e.g. that is impossible, nope screw physics I used magic.
I like the idea of Fluttershy and RD having a filly anyway (It appears in several of my stories
) So I have have found appeal in this.
Good ol' magic... theres a lot of it in this fic. Keep up the random awesomness and I look foward to more Flutterdash.
Preggas ponies going into battle... Hmmmm this will be interesting
Whoa... Just whoa...
Now we will soon be getting to the endgame. Now, the chapters will be getting darker in regards to the beginning. Well, the idea of increasing darkness has been a theme since chapter 4, but the next chapter or two will have some curveballs.
Ohhhh Sluttershy!
O.o i so confuse =\
That's what I hope to alleviate. I want to create a sequel to this at some point so... that's why the weird ending. Plus add in the whole joke about rainbow inception ideas, a few days of brainstorming without much sleep, and a plot that seems to get weirder as it goes on. I guess this is just how my mind works.
I promise that the plot will be tied up. I only see this story at 10-12 chapters at completion and that probably includes the epilogue. Blame my mind for the mind link at the end of the chapter, I thought it would be funny to see how the couples I put in the story mixed together into foals/colts. If you pay enough attention you can infer which colors are which foal. Convoluted mindscrews ensue. 
Insane.... I'm enjoying this in a warped kind of way. Keep up the good work. I am yet to work out who of those is Flutterdash's foal...
I find it funny that you made the connection between the foals, that shows from who they'll be born. I got a little sad at the dreams Dash had, i mean, the Death of Trixie, wich is a character i really like, made me a little sad. but anyway, keep it up, a liiiiiiittle bit confusing, but still have potential. hope that Samael bastard finds his death soon!
P.S.: sorry for my bad english, not American or British, so it makes a little difficult to communicate.
Thanks for the compliment. I hope you continue with my story. And yes, Samael will get his comeuppance. Sorry for this chapter though, the idea of the dreams of increasing weirdness I literally dreamt up. Plus adding that glimpse into Equestria if Samael won- I got that from the plot of 1984. Think of the chapter you just read as a conglomerate of different ideas fighting for dominance in my head. I mean really, I got the idea from a dream. Then I hit wikipedia for a list of types of superheros... if you want to be technical, I wanted to name Dark Star and Morning Star after anagrams of names of the devil. I kept that idea for Samael somewhat. I just named him after the angel of death in Christianity.
Sorry for this long post everybody... its just I wanted to show that I have influences in my story. ,
I shall continue in my story, as a preview I shall say you will get to know the names and general description/ actions of the foals.
What happened to this;
?
Sorry, I wanted a somewhat heartwarming chapter. Since the rest of the chapters have been kind of dark. But don't worry back to the action in the next chapter. It was more of an experiment than anything else. Let's just say Samael will soon be beat in 2-3 chapters. Then maybe a calmer chapter, then epilogue so in total. probably 3-4 more chapters. Sorry for the confusion, This is my longest story I'e ever written, so flights of fancy might result.
1086630 I'm up for some flights of fancy
I'm looking foward to seeing thier interaction with that rainbow maned filly.
FTW!
Its cool having a meet the foals chapter. Rarity and AJ's filly was especialy funny... almost makes me consider thier ship rather worthwhile. Anyway... back to Flutterdash
I look foward to thier parents getting to meet them in real life... then a good fight. I love it when romance is mixed with action...
Keep up the cool work.
These foals... Are smarter than me. That's quite discouraging/ odd. /.3.
I luv this story. Luv it.
I'm using periods. That's just not me .-.
This is me!
Sorry 'bout the whole, 'Out-of-Character" 
I especialy liked the start of the chapter, before Chorma had to be seperated from her mums.
FTW!
Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the comment. I will probably be finishing the story in the next couple of days because I will have to soon go to college. But, I won't end here I feel like 2 more chapters maybe 3 will end the story on a good note.
And with this, 1 more chapter to go. Sorry for the length I had real life creep up on me. Also, please don't hate me too much for this chapter. You'll know what I'm talking about when you get to it. When I added that scene, I thought should I do it? Then I was like, oh well it's my story. There was more I wanted to add to the battle scene....but, writers block kinda helped shorten it to it's present length.
Fluttershy like a boss!
Fluttershy is best pony for doing that :)
Hmmm killing someone in a WAR does NOT = murder, like wtf?
1114158 lol
Well that was.. . interesting. I hope Dashie helps her out and they get to be together like they should.
Fluttershy sounded... terrifying. *pat Fluttershy on the back* Welcome to Shylyflyism!
Sorry for the confusion on that part everybody. The whole killing someone in a war still does =murder. Just I wrote that part so it was her bad conscience that gave her the idea. I attempted to give some reasons why it was semi-justifiable though. Seeing your comments though shows that I was only partially successful. Don't worry though the next chapter will attempt to wrap things up.
