A magical malfunction sees the Equestria Girls transported across worlds and dumped in one of the most unforgiving of places... the Capital Wasteland.
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Its one thing for Sunset to murder three scumbags while they're defenseless. Its another for Applejack of all people to legit torture a scumbag to death. He deserves it but still damn
Damn, these girls are never going to be the same again. Are we sure it's actually in their best interests to return home and stay there? Because I feel like there aren't a lot of job opportunities for their new skill sets and experiences in the civilized world.
I think I said something before about Moriarty playing with fire regarding the girls and it seems that’s where he ended up. As for reacclimatising when they return, more than therapy will be needed for what they have had to do and endure.
Ru-roh. Don't do it, Applejack! This is definitely gonna backfire!
DAYUM AJ, Okay!
I don't know what I was expecting, but that was not it... I love it!
Moriarty..... you've fucked up for the last time.
Badass Aj is as cool as Badass Twi lol
There are many definitions of the terms 'right' and 'wrong'. Is what AJ is doing to Moriarty right or wrong? The answer is 'yes'. Moriarty plays by one set of rules. AJ and the girls play by another rulebook. Right now, AJ is playing out of MORIARTY's playbook. He has no grounds to complain. After all, 'What goes around comes around.' Beings like Moriarty do not understand, and will never comprehend, AJ and the girls' playbook. No sense waving it in his face, he won't listen. Wave HIS in his face, and he will learn. Hopefully before he dies, but if not, no regerts.
There's killing a man, and then there's crushing a snake.
Given what Moriarty keeps doing, this was the latter.
Woohoo! Go AJ. Torture that son of a b*tch!
Damn these girls will never be the same after this. Massive shock to the people back home
Holy shit, Applejack!
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Well, sunset killing those surrendered raiders didn't backfire(yet), so I'm not certain. I am worried Lucas might be angry with her though.
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Of course he’ll be angry. AJ is currently committing premeditated vigilantism, kidnapping and murder. Even the law in Megaton doesn’t allow that kind of stuff.
Calling it now, this will end horribly
Nice ending...
I was getting super fed up with Moriarty...it's nice to see that plot thread snapped off finally.
Not that I'm complaining mind you, a villain is SUPPOSED to be hated after all. so good job, you nailed it!
Well this is going to make for a hell of a follow up chapter when the girls and everyone else learns what AJ just did....Simms is gonna be PISSED at the very least. And I like Simms in this story and in the base game, he's a good egg and a bro.
Just hope it doesn't fuck with the RarJack ship.
Applejack's protectiveness over Rarity endeared to me very heavily here since I love those two as a couple, how she storms in to save her, even if Rarity had Fluttershy skulking about unseen, thus not being in as much danger really.
And that, fellow readers, is why I never hire Jericho as a companion. Ever. Ever.
Frankly, I have no qualms about what's to happen to Moriarty. He's scum in every sense of the word; making women serve as prostitutes, not holding up on the deal with Silver about quitting, owning Gob as a slave whom he abuses to no end, and having blackmail material on everyone in Megaton. He tried to harm the one Applejack cherishes the most, so here comes karma.
Others have said essentially all there is to say about the end, so I’ll focus on something else a bit more minor.
I’m a bit surprised you are going with saving power for fusion cores as a thing in this actually. Up until fallout 4 it was stated that they were essentially unending batteries that never needed swapped out, and was just another bit of “pre-war magic”
It wasn’t until they were looking for a way to balance the power armor in 4 after making it much closer to how it’s described that they retconned that, and it ended up just not making much if any sense given how limited they would be and how fast they drain, and it’s definitely something that I’ve only ever really seen taken as a gameplay vs lore conflict that most writers seek to ignore.
Interested in your own personal reasoning if there is any, but reading that particular part it just stood out to me
Back in Chapter 64, Applejack fretted that she was a monster for killing Enclave troops with her bare hands and not being bothered by it. As much of a scumbag Moriarty is, and as much as Applejack’s actions are driven by her concern for Rarity and her friends, for her to calmly and methodically kidnap him and slowly beat him to death, right after conceding that she’s not much better than him for doing so, no less, begs the question of whether she really is a monster now. Then there’s the consequences. If Simms really is a by-the-book cop, he can’t give her a free pass for this. Her friends probably won’t fully approve of what she’s doing, either, no matter how callous they’ve gotten, especially if the fallout doesn’t help their situation. This can’t end well.
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AJ lost Karma.
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I've been seeing it as a mix of the two. The fusion cores would probably last an impressive length of time, but will run down eventually if used to romp up and down the wasteland all day every day. They still last much longer than the game though.
On one hand, I can see the reasoning why Applejack would be doing this, Moriarty was attempting to have Rarity kidnaped. As mentioned in previous chapters there is at least a romantic spark between the two of them. So trying to kidnap her would most certainly be enough for Applejack to give into the Anger and lose control of herself. However, I can not say in good conscience that Moriarty deserved this type of fate. Yes, he is a jerk of the highest order and no doubt some form of revenge would be considered needed, but there is a line between settling the score and taking your anger out on someone. And I fully believe that Applejack crossed it. After all, the worst Moriarty would do is getting someone killed by hiring someone do it for him, which in itself would probably be quickly under the reasoning that doing it slowly would be a waste of time. Of course, one can say that Applejack was rationally compromised because of her Anger, and that is completely correct. But, like all other bouts of Anger, Applejack will calm down once she runs out of it and realize what she has done. Regardless of whether he deserved it or not, the very act will cause her to feel an absolute amount of guilt, not to mention the bad karma she will most certainly be getting for this event. I guess the old saying is true “all is fair in love and war”. This is of course not even considering the consequences this will result in as well. Needless to say, Applejack needs to do some serious self reflecting on her character after this, because if Moriarty can die with the satisfaction that he has the high moral ground over Applejack, that speaks volumes to a person.
Sorry, needed to vent after that fiasco,
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The most brilliant part of this story is that as the Wasteland becomes a better place, the opposite is somewhat true for the Rainbooms.
It seems that the proverb : You die as a hero or you live long enough to see yourself become the villain is true. Sunset, Aj, Fluttershy are fucked Up and even Pinkie since she tried to kill herself a long time ago. Rainbow, Twilight being away from the conflict a lot of time and Rarity being Rarity seems to have kept some normal state of mind but if one of the girls died I can't imagine what kind of shit it would cause.
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I don't think they'll ever be villains, just... ruthless, by Equestrian standards. Antiheroes, probably. They're only going this hard on definite bad guys.
and next is the books...... oh no.... OH NO.... OH GOD NO! (slowly turn head to see twilight face)
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It's a simple fact: Everything needs power to operate. Sure, power supplies are constantly evolving, but they will have limits. And hey, in Fallout they have condensed micro-fusion to roughly baseball-sized batteries, so I totally buy that in lore fusion cores would last much longer than in gameplay. I mean you find a majority of them inside generators that have been running since possibly well before the Great War.
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Well you also have to factor in the fact that game time is rather accelerated. One second is a minute in fallout time or something. Fallout also had some funky ever lasting light bulbs
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Yes, but when writing a story, you do not, repeat; do not focus on gameplay. You don't want to end up like Goblin Slayer.
I would defer you to the centennial lightbulb.
Also, this song is fitting sort of
600 upvotes! You know what that means!
KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL
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Well that’s horrifying anyways I’ve never considered
I believe that the girls can access a base version of their powers without the geodes and only need them to pony up.
I could be wrong but there’s this.
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Are... you alright?
“Are we the baddies?”
“No, the wasteland is pretty shit so it’s ok”
*proceeds to commit murder*
chanting Rock him Sock him KNOCK HIS SOCKS OFF!!
oh ok, so you plan for Sunset to be an actual whore, yeah ok, that makes perfect sense. jeesus fucking crist i really hate the author. he ruined Sunset for me and many others, you could have made Sunset actually work trough her problems but noo, you just had to make a whore, you could have made a chapter or two from the ideea that Sunset should work on her mental problems, but no, she just fucks and looses her virginity to a random dude, yeah that "seems" in character with her, i will wait for the story to finish so i can just post it again but with few things different.
i will edit it so that Sunset is not a fucking whore and actually works on her problems, and i will make her a little more badass, she was so bad in the beginning of the story and oh yeah, let's not forget that the absolute fucking moron of an author decided that Sunset, a 16-17 years old girl, should have some feelings for a 35 years old dude, yeah, not creepy at all, and the old dude has some feelings for her as well (kinds see a self insert here).
Oh yeah and i will make sure that she does not pisses herself in the battle to take back the water purifier, that was so retarded that i can't even begin to describe how bad of a decision was for the author to put it in.
God i hate the author.
The worst part is that the story is actually good, EVERY character except Sunset is well made. Sunset is the only one who got it bad because of an author that hates her, and that just ruins the story for me. like i said, i will just wait for thjs guy to finish the story so i can remake it into what is should have been
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what is wrong with you?
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Again, dipshit, Sunset’s not a whore. It’s perfectly natural for her to have a sex drive and act on said drive and even find people older than her attractive. Same goes for most people. She’s also 18, so she’s free to have sex if she wants, with any other consenting adult she wants, for whatever reason she wants. Considering all the traumatic shit she’s been through, a decent person could scarcely blame her for wanting to feel something good. Also, has it not occurred to you that Harkness might not be 35 chronologically? Being a synth, he might actually be closer to the Rainbooms’ age, maybe even younger, which wouldn’t matter anyway since again, he’s a synth.
Since you’re new here, I initially decided not to give you grief about your frankly deplorable behavior. But after watching you repeatedly make such ignorant assumptions about Sunset and even wish death on the author, I’ve gotta say you’re a real piece of work. I’m think I’m gonna report you.
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Are you. Um... anti sex?
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HAVE YOU EVEN READ WHAT SHE HAS
BEEN THROUGH UP TO THIS POINT YOU
GAGANTUTAN SHITHEAD?!
APPERENTLY FUCKING NOT.
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AND ANOTHER THING YOU DICKHEADED MONKEY BRAIN, THE
PART IS CALLED PLAGIARSIM, WHICH, IN CASE OF YOUR FARTBRAIN IS TO DAM STUPID TO KNOW, IS FUCKING ILLEGAL.
When your magic is so depressing that the first thing a robot does after being hit by it is suicide