A magical malfunction sees the Equestria Girls transported across worlds and dumped in one of the most unforgiving of places... the Capital Wasteland.
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Dun. Dun.. DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN.
Damnit Adam, Fluttershy's going to be crushed. Not only that, Sunset is probably going to be horribly traumatized being in someone's mind just as they die...
Sad, Sad Chapter, but I am glad that the story gave fawkes a good reason not to be the one to put the code in.
Such a cursed waste it is.
Wow just powered through the story and I got to say it’s one of the best crossovers I have read. I love how the characters have a constant threat of danger hanging over them and are not all powerful. I also can’t wait to see the aftermath the girls will be changed forever after this and seeing how they try to fit back into a peaceful world (if they can) should be interesting.
Argh... So sad. I love it, but curse you for making cry so early in the morning. I really enjoy reading your work.
What a chapter! So much action and drama! And that cliffhanger! Good on you that Fawkes was unable to reach the reactor rather than refuse to enter the code, because that would have just been a dick move on his part. I’m also confident that Adam will survive and get the chance to properly date Fluttershy when he wakes ups, what with him being the Lone Wanderer and the story to include the DLC content down the road. I have a feeling they’re going to have a baby at some point.
I’m glad to see Autumn finally brought to heel after all the crap he’s pulled. He’s not so tough and arrogant when his arms are broken and all his troops have been massacred.
Also, damn, Sunset actually pissed herself. Can’t say I blame her, though.
The Sunset perspective was harsh. Living through that, seeing the dark abyss of death itself while under that kind of pressure? That's bound to break someone. I don't think either she or Pinkie will be able to see combat again so soon.
Hmm I smell a super mutant Fluttershy coming to the rescue.
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Considering she's a civilian traumatised by death in an active combat zone? No one with the slightest heart would mock her for it.
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Ignorance is a bliss.
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Have you heard of broken steel?
(Potential Spoilers if you haven't and look it up)
POTENTIAL SPOILER FOR THE FUTURE
Adam is going to live, Liberty Prime is nuked from orbit
This chapter was a great birthday present.
I can see it now. Adam opens his eyes and see's Fluttershy and thinks he's in heaven... only to have her slap him, berate him and then cry and hug him.
Until they dig you out some short few months later.
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Unless with the rainbooms, that bit of the DLC isn’t followed to the letter. At this point, Adam isn’t completely necessary to the story. I have liked him as a character, and wouldn’t be against him surviving, but also think it might be fitting if he didn’t.
Can't wait for broken steel
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The next couple of chapters will be showing the aftermath of the assault, one with the Rainbooms and one with the Enclave, then we'll be going into a mini-arc to address a few loose ends before the story picks back up...
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Belated happy birthday!
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Er, I apologize, and thank you!
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Glad to hear that you're enjoying it!
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Understandable, we do have two weeks of in game time to go through. They don't have the leisure of sleeping it through
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...ghoul anyone?
I believe combat armor is actually made from synthetic or composite materials rather than steel. Not that I’d expect Sunset to realize that at first glance.
So does this not include the Broken Steel DLC?
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It will! There's going to be a couple of chapters showing the aftermath of Take It Back, then a short mini-arc tying up a couple of loose ends before we get back into the story.
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Cool, I'm excited to read that. Good luck with these next chapters.
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Man this chapter hit hard.
Sunset's moment with the soldier was one of the biggest things that stood out, and I think she nearly died by having the connection with him as he died.
I also feel so bad for Adam and Flutters, I hope something can be done
I will say though, Liberty Prime's programmed phrases did have me laughing though
Liberty Prime is best giant robot.
HA!!!
Wow didn't kill Autumn and very cool way to do the endgame choice
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Iron Giant: *glares*
nah, I'm dropping this, the author really hates sunset it seems.
i can't stand the disrespect he has for my girl.
first he made her fucking usless, not giving her a plasma rifle or something that can actually damange the power-suits, then she has ptsd, which is understandable, however applejack, rarity and rainbow killed a lot more and they cope, Sunset is supposed to be the one with the best mental fortitude now she is just worst then Fluttershy.
and now she pissed herself of fear? fucking bullshit. this is garbage and fucking disgusting on how mu h the author hates sunset, fuck you.
you either make her the badass she is supposed to be or just don't write anymore. i will dislike every single chapter untill i see sunset as she is supposed to be. fucking garbage
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It's called a character arc...
This is chapter 63 out of nearly 200 and counting. Also, Sunset isn't even from the EQG Earth so she don't have the same pre-set fortitude against this then the rest of the girls. Yeah, they are all breaking down, but Sunset is having the worst because she grew up where even hearing about war and killing was barely even heard about even in the news. Not to mention, killing monsters and the like are nothing compared to another person.
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Wow…you must be fun at parties
man the girls got sidelined even HARDER this time. i guess its good you gave a reason for fawkes not helping tho, i got really fuckin mad when he refused to go in the game.
Hmm, i have some things to say about this.
Why did. Hold up, I'm trying to find a way to phrase my thoughts. So, i like this chapter, it shows that the Rainbooms are not ready for a war, they don't know war, and so they didn't know what they were getting themselves into. I like the reaction Sunset had when the Enclave soldier came after her. BUT! why did she pissed herself? More accurately to ask is why did you chose that moment for Sunset to release herself. Couldn't she had done it after she felt like she had her soul sucked into a cold void and feel a man die? From the description you gave us, after death, in the fallout universe there is no concept of a afterlife. If there was, i don't think that Sunset would have seen a void. Shouldn't that be the moment when she is so afraid, scared and so filled with terror that she pissed herself? It makes more sense. Not complaining, i am confused. Honestly i am glad she took her hand off, because if you stare into the abyss for too long, it stares back.