A magical malfunction sees the Equestria Girls transported across worlds and dumped in one of the most unforgiving of places... the Capital Wasteland.
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awesome hot chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
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Okay, if what I'm reading is correct:
1. The Wasteland Survival Guide and Trouble on the Homefront are definitely going to happen.
2. Side quests like The Amazing Aqua Cura!, Oasis, or The Nuka-Cola Challenge could go either in the main story or in the side story
3. DLC's will likely come later
4. The crystals will come into play, likely in the last act
I think that's everything. Also, while I'm still on the wiki, I'm mentally crossing off which side quests the girls have done, and which ones they either locked out or would never do.They've been busy!
Edit: Have they seen Paradise Falls yet?
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Oasis is definitely going to happen, but later, and it's going to be considerably different to the game. Amazing Aqua Cura will probably be Side Stories (though I'm not 100% on that one yet). Nuka-Cola Challenge will most likely be Side Stories.
Ahh, geez... Sunset, girl...
Yeah, that dude is just as much to blame as she is. Should have said no and just stood guard by her door or something.
Also, Flutters... I'm not sure Sunset is in any better condition to answer that question than you are
Ooh, albino radscorpions are spawning. The girls are pretty high level!
Well at least Moira will have a volunteer for the first aid portion
Oh no, Sunset's tried Alcohol. The Wasteland, and her dignity, is doomed.
about time
First and foremost, frustratingly enough, I /have/ to preface this with the fact that I do /not/ condone dudes taking advantage of chicks, or anyone taking advantage of anyone else.
But in the understanding of this fic, and the disciples position, this dude had a veritable godess approach him and say "yo, fuck the goddess or refute the 'blessing'"?
Sunset was 100% tipsy and not in her right mind, but this guy straight up had someone he views as a stance of absolute authority approach him, single him out, and tell him to come get some. Even when he admitted to recognition of her virginity she stood Fast and goaded him.
How would anyone take it to have their deity just walk up and go "you want some fuck?"
It's a shitshow both ways. Sunsets 100% compromised, but the dude was in no way in a position to make a rational decision there either.
Definetly skimmed over the scene. If I want clop, I can get it somewhere else. I like to keep characters from porn in an entirely seperate canon than stories I want to legitimately enjoy. That being said, I do appreciate how it was written. Short, simple, and very obviously desperate. No over-dramatized descriptions or lengthy pleasure scenes. It did very well in portraying how much of a bad thing it really was.
It would probably be very healthy for Sunny to find another outlet soon. But I guess Celestia never gave her any in the first place, so she really is stuck with having to make one herself.
Now the question remains, will the rest of the group notice? Pinkie probably would, bc Pinkie. But the rest probably won't. Flutters can keep quiet, Twi wouldn't have the context, Aj is ogling Rares, and vice versa (Although if anyone else would notice, it would be her.) I wouldn't be surprised if Rainbow noticed, but she can be pretty dense as well. If Adam noticed, he'd probably say something and Flutters would quickly hush him before he could say too much.
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Lol funny but to true sorry
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Maybe if you can consider fluttershy is a virgin
Sunset should find some of the pip-boy games from Fallout 4 to be her outlet.
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Yeah, it's an absolute mess of a situation. No one can walk away from that with their head held high. Thus, the warning in the A/N, as I can imagine that a scene with that context is going to make some people very uncomfortable.
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The girls have not seen Paradise Falls, yet...
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I'm afraid more scenes of this nature are going to start popping up every now and again. I'm in two minds as to whether I should put page breaks around said scenes every time, just like in this chapter, for people who want to skip over them. What do you think?
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I'm personally a fan of some kind of warning. That being said, for me specifically, I can skim them well enough to know when they are over, so I'll survive if there is no warning. It is still incredibly relevant to her character, and not very pornographic, so they are tolerable. (I've read Project Horizons. This is leagues better in those terms.) In short, I like the scenes, as they feel very important to her character, even if I don't personally enjoy reading them. It's weird, but I like to think of them as real people, and I wouldn't want a real person to cut out something from their life just because I'm uncomfortable.
Loving the story, btw! Keep up the great work!
Well, it happened. Someone finally did the deed and lost their virginity, albeit not under ideal circumstances. It could’ve been a lot worse, though it’s not cause for celebration, either, given it’s just a couple of dumb-dumbs acting under the influence of booze and faith, respectively. On one end, Sunset’s impulse control has been steadily eroding over the course of the story thanks to all the shit she’s been through, and this isn’t the first time she’s tried to do this. The wine certainly made things worse. On the other end, the Disciple was propositioned by one of his goddesses, who he has now dedicated his life to serving. How many Christians can say they were invited to bang Jesus? Sunset even appeared to be getting into the sport of things during, the narrative referring to him as her Dsiciple. If this is going to be her outlet (and that’s not a bad or good thing), then she’d better take Kelly’s and Fluttershy’s advice to heart and be careful in selecting a partner next time.
As for the writing of the sex scene itself, I must commend you. It was very tasteful, if a bit lacking in detail, though that may be for the best, given the context. I was kinda thrown off by the page breaks, though. I’m so used to them being used to shift perspectives or scenes that it was a little confusing at first. I wouldn’t recommend them in the future. Hopefully the next scenes you make will be even more impressive, besides.
As always, keep up the good work. This story just keeps getting better and better.
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I think I'll put the same question in the A/N of the next chapter, see what everyone thinks.
Also, thanks!
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That's probably the best idea. It'll give everyone a chance to pitch their opinion.
Have a great night
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And have a great morning!
Moira seems to keep pushing Fluttershy’s buttons, doesn’t she?
Good thing she knows how to drink wine the right way.
At least the girls still have their jokes. That’s a good sign, right?
Just avoid hurting Adam with your enhanced strength and you’ll do fine, Fluttershy.
Sunset definitely has a type. She prefers her men tall and strong but with submissive personalities.
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I will say that the way Diaries of a Madman does it is quite good. Just in brackets a quick message. I think it’s [sex incoming. Ctrl+f “sex is over” to skip] and then afterwards just [sex is over]
Managers to not break the flow as much as a page break, and makes it easy to skip for those who don’t want to read it for one reason or another.
It really should have been doggy style, you know pony... XD
How about some future sunlight to keep her off the disciples?
An alleged goddess who's clearly inebriated is casually drinking straight from a wine bottle while checking you out. What an image.
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Good idea!
ok now i want to see a killer TV! like a tv that do mind contral roting a raider mind!
Well, the “seps” wasn’t as bad as I’ve imagined all things considered . I hope I don’t see any of the Rainbooms raped
for fucks sake can you stop making Sunset a whore?
like, are you retarded or something?
first there was the guy in the brotherhood of steel, then the OLD GUY in river city, then this guy. DO YOU HATE SUNSET THIS MUCH TO MAKE HER A WHORE? you fucking moron, you piece of shit of a human being. fuck off and go die.
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SHUT UP!
That's it, i'm reporting you now!
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She’s not a whore, you ignorant dipshit.
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nope,she isn't, the World of Fallout has just fucked her up more then the others.
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Oh, come on. Dignity is one thing, but there’s no way Sunset could doom or destroy the wasteland in a bout of drunken tomfoolery…right?
This time there is no metzer to talk sense into her head and even worse, she is drunk
Besides the fact that she will deeply regret it tomorrow, I'm scared of the possibility of a child
I'm apprehensive about what the other disciples would do to the poor idiot if they found out what happened
the first sex scene you make and its......this? it was just uncomfy and sad, and kinda pathetic in the "mental trauma" kind of way. 0/10 very bad vibes.