I seriously hope they arent a replacement for the vault dweler, that would be an insult to the legend

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Absolutely not! He's in there and doing his own thing. I've been deliberately avoiding bringing him in directly for now but he will get a mention in the next chapter and from then on his actions (and their consequences for the Wastelands) will have an effect on the Equestria Girls and their own adventure.

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Ah I see now at first I thought he was docs assistant, but when I saw that he didnt mention having a son and girls having a somewhat simmilar encounters like in the game i thought that was the case. But I admit that i am very interested in how will they interact with the wasteland dwellers like moira, burke, BoS and others

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I hope the girls will have some travel with the Wanderer I think it'd be interesting to see his reaction to them and possibly even help them. Kind of wonder why he seemed absent at the welcome party. Amata couldn't get his ass to come?
Guess I still got to keep reading

Too many names! Too many names!

Oh, I wonder what jobs the girls'll be getting.

Oh, the G.O.A.T. what a hoot. So many random ass questions.

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Never did understand the baseball one.

"But Doctor! Wouldn't that cause a destabilization of the fission singularity?"

Nicely done you managed to breathe life into the dwellers of 101 very well here. If I'm remembering right isn't Officer Mack one of the officers who attacks you on sight during the escape? Also I forgot just how scummy Butch was early on, he got better later (I think) but yeah he was scum early on and the alcoholic mom was no excuse.

How many attacks like that were they going to have to endure before they got home?

How many attacks

attacks

If I know anything about Fallout 'verses, the correct response to that is: "Oh, you sweet Summer child..."

“Good morning, my name is Amata Almodovar. I’ll be in charge of showing you around the vault and helping you get settled in today.”

The overseer daughter.

“In that case, please turn over your exams sheets and let’s get started.” There was a flurry of sheets being turned over. “Question one. You are approached by a frenzied Vault scientist, who yells, ‘I'm going to put my quantum harmonizer in your photonic resonation chamber!’ What's your response?”

answer is ups yours to buddy.

Take a shot for every time the main seven are name dropped XD

I keep expecting the lone wanderer to show up. I couldn't help but notice some of the recent chapers were named for the wasteland survival guide so the girls probably take up alot of the side quests the lone wanderer would have done.

Ooh, I hope the nuka cola quantum challenge. I bet her and pinkie would be good friends. And Moira from craterside supply. She's my favorite character in fallout 3. Even if the survival guide doesn't happen until way later I hope we meet her before long.

Really loving the story so far, I'm getting all excited and ahead of myself.

"In that case, please turn over your exams sheets and let’s get started." There was a flurry of sheets being turned over. "Question one. You are approached by a frenzied Vault scientist, who yells, ‘I'm going to put my quantum harmonizer in your photonic resonation chamber!’. What's your response?"

Wait a minute.... was that supposed to be some kinda sex joke? 😅🤣

"Like I said, the Overseer wants us security guys to keep an eye on you girls, and I intend to keep a very close eye on you. For your own… protection ." Mack leered, running his eyes up and down Sunset’s body in a way that made her skin crawl. "You go getting yourself mixed up with Butch, and people are going to think you’re up to no good."

Kick that fucker's ass with the power of MAGIC!!!

I was starting to wonder how many of the people they were meeting were what they seemed to be, and how many were traps and tests set by the Overseer, but looking at the other comments I'm getting the feeling that isn't how this works. Oh well, interesting story so far, even if I am late to the party, lol.

Coming back after reaching the current point, there is so much irony in this chapter.

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You're gonna kill someone.

"Question one. You are approached by a frenzied Vault scientist, who yells, ‘I'm going to put my quantum harmonizer in your photonic resonation chamber!’. What's your response?"

There was a moment's silence, then each of the girls cried in unison, "Huh?!"

Hah! Oh man you're keeping the satire in, that's great! I hope we get to see more silly moments like these.

Another great chapter. Your approach to how this situation would develop feels very logical and believable. It's been a while since I've played Fallout 3 (that's the one with Vault 101, right?) but the little I recall is not in conflict with how you're portraying the setting or the characters at all.

It's not a pleasant train of thought, but one of the first ideas I had was that Fluttershy would probably be at high risk for SA. I like that you give Sunset a chance to identify this threat and an opportunity to plan for it. If Flutters got attacked and all the girls were surprised I'd be pretty annoyed with them. I also like how you've got Rainbow and AJ kind of instinctively acting like the front line protectors of the group. I think that's people's first thought when it comes to Dashie since she's so scrappy, but not always with AJ, oddly enough.

Anyway, that's where I'm stopping for now. I'm really enjoying this! You probably aren't going to make this into too big a deal, but I'm actually super curious what roles the girls will get assigned. I see lots of story possibilities!