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Bravo! A grand conclusion to a fun story.
It was great hearing a callback to the Lyra and Bon-Bon story. I don't believe that story got finished but I do remember the adventure the mares of S.M.I.L.E. had started.
The scavenger hunt really put the cherry on top for the story. Twilight with Cheerilee, Bon-Bon with Rarity, Trixie with Dashie, and Derpy with Starlight and Flutters was super cool. I really liked Derpy's attempt to communicate with the little ones.
Nice story and wrapped up very well. I do like when you reference other stories you've written. It makes everything so much more fun. :)
That last bit of the ending. Are you going to turn that into a story?
D'aaw! Big Mac is so sweet! He's a good brother!
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL!!!
I also liked how Fluttershy said she wet the bed till she was 7, that was adorable!
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Well eventually but I don’t know when.or how soon. But we just left it open to do later
I love how everyone got humilated especially Discord when Fluttershy out him in a diaper and dress. Though I think Spike deserved some humilation to!
My sequel sense is tingling
SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!
Discord, you promised!