A 32-year old gay trans girl. Got back into the show thanks to a friend and bingewatching. I've got quite a few things planned...
Peace never lasts long in Ponyville. A day beginning with relaxation, party planning, and plenty of research into ancient history soon turns south with the disappearance of Discord and the arrival of a mysterious mare devoid of emotion bearing a dire message for the Princess and her friends.
An ancient being is about to awaken, threatening all of Equestria. Will the Elements of Harmony be able to stand against this new threat, or will they fall just as she did?
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I really want to see where this goes. I can't wait to see what you come up with. Please continue.
Ooh, I can't wait for more.
I'm glad we finally get to hear from Discord. Time for the story to really get interesting.
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I'm glad you're looking forward to what I have in store.
This was a good chapter so far. Looking forward to what happens next.
Aha! I knew it!
8085478 You did? I take it you mean the twist?
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Yeah, the twist. I mean, I figured that something was up with cold reason, and even thought that maybe she was the oathbreaker herself, which she kind of is. But I wasn't entirely sure. It's a pretty good story so far, and I can't wait to see how it progresses.
The Twin
Nice start.
The Twin
Good intro to the mane six, and while you may not have liked repeating yourself I think it all flowed very nicely. And yes some of it was humorous.
Although i think Twilight would have been my first guess instead of Rainbow Dash for where Discord was. But we needed to rope Rainbow into this some how, so it works.
The Twin
Ah good old Discord, brave enough to think of fighting a super Alicorn all by himself, but still thickheaded enough to forget theres strength in numbers. Well done.
The Twin
Very good chapter, Cold Reason seems to have more then one pony in that little spiritual head of hers.
The Twin
I had a feeling Cold reason was something like that.
Good chapter can't wait to see more.
8108711 So so sorry for taking so long to respond to all your comments! Although I guess there's not much I can really say to them besides the fact that I just...really appreciate hearing people's thoughts on it. I'm glad you've liked what you've read so far, and I hope you keep reading it to the very end.
This was really good! I seldom see a fic that seems to grasp the spirit of the show quite so well. It's just really impressive and awesome that you made something that feels so much like an episode from the show. I could easily see this story as one of the two-parter episodes. Good job!
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Being able to capture the spirit of the show is a skill I really value, so being told I've done just that is high praise for me.
Thanks!