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CJ Esmerio


I'm a 23-year-old MLP brony fan (since September 2016), and I love writing stories for people to enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: A Race Against Time


The first-ever Friendship Festival doesn't exactly turn out the way that Princess Twilight had planned. Based on the theatrical film, with additional scenes. Stand-alone sequel to "A Race Against Time".

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 41 )

I like it so far...grated I've seen the movie, but still...keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

If this is an epic, then why are the chapters so short?

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I'm sorry about that, but that's how I write my stories

Comment posted by MJP deleted Jun 17th, 2020

This story is amazing! It is even better than the actual movie. When is the next chapter coming out?

This is so cool! When do you think the next chapter will be out?

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Hopefully this week. Workin' on it as we speak

Doing pretty good here! When do you think the next chapter will be out?

As soon as possible :)

This looks interesting! I'm actually planning on doing a rendition of the movie, myself!

Oh, you'd be surprised, Tempest.

You just HAD to ask, didn't you, Pinkie? :facehoof:

...Nice going, Rainbow Dash.

...Oh, Twilight...

Comment posted by Wrekferno deleted Jan 7th, 2018

Hang tough, Twilight. You, too, Casey.

Maybe it was a little much, Twilight.

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thanks! Sorry for the late response :twilightsheepish: but I hope you've liked what you read so far!

This ending is spectacular!!!:pinkiehappy: When is the second part coming out?:rainbowderp:

Nice additional scenes:twilightsmile:. I’m actually planning on making a rewrite of the movie myself. Not that I didn’t enjoy it put...I’m planning to make it more extended and more...epic:rainbowdetermined2:!

Another chapter nicely done:scootangel:! Also...

Meanwhile, Casey was doing his best not to have flashbacks or anything similar to past events since this usually resulted in even worser things happening.

Does Casey have some sort of connection with the Storm King in the past:rainbowhuh:?

As the small hedgehog hurried out of the room, the damaged unicorn looked over at the other three princesses of Equestria in the room - Cadence, Celestia, and Luna - all of them now turned into stone, and an unimpressed look was on her face as she said, " Please, how far can one little pony get on her own?

Very far Tempest...very far:ajsmug:.

" Besides, the desert looks pretty empty and harmless," added Pinkie. "I mean, what's the worst thing that could happen to us out here?"

Celestia bucking dammit Pinkie!!!:flutterrage:

Twilight's muzzle almost dropped to the ground, and as Pinkie smiled at her, she cried, " What?!"

You really shouldn’t be surprised Twilight:ajsmug:. You should be used to Pinkie’s randomness, because at this point it’s no different than looking at the newspapers:rainbowlaugh:.

Goddammit Rainbow:twilightangry2:! Of all the times to pull of the Sonic Rainboom, you chose now:facehoof:!

I feel so bad for Captain Celaeno right now, along with her crew:fluttershysad:.

In a swift amount of time, several royal seapony guards surrounded the group of friends, and once again, Twilight’s happiness turned into fear. Would things ever go their way?

With everything that’s happening, I don’t see that happenin’ for a while Twilight:ajsleepy:.

As much as I understand why Twilight had done what she did, that was not cool:ajbemused:. Did she really think that Queen Novo would leave the Pearl unattended if she didn’t think the jellyfish protecting it wouldn’t let her know that a thief was trying to steal it:facehoof:? Geez:twilightangry2:!

"No… I'm the one who failed friendship."

Truer words have never been spoken:ajsleepy:.

Maybe my own sun and moon idea for the Festival wasn't so great after all , thought a nervous Twilight, who was also wishing that her friends were with her right now.

Ya think Twilight:facehoof:?!

Great chapter:scootangel:! Loved the scene with Fluttershy and the Storm Creature:rainbowlaugh:!

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I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile: Thank you very much!

Friendly word of advice, link to A Race Against Time. Please respond to this comment.

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