This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: A Race Against Time
The first-ever Friendship Festival doesn't exactly turn out the way that Princess Twilight had planned. Based on the theatrical film, with additional scenes. Stand-alone sequel to "A Race Against Time".
I like it so far...grated I've seen the movie, but still...keep up the good work
If this is an epic, then why are the chapters so short?
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I'm sorry about that, but that's how I write my stories
This story is amazing! It is even better than the actual movie. When is the next chapter coming out?
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It did today! :)
This is so cool! When do you think the next chapter will be out?
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Hopefully this week. Workin' on it as we speak
Doing pretty good here! When do you think the next chapter will be out?
As soon as possible :)
This looks interesting! I'm actually planning on doing a rendition of the movie, myself!
Oh, you'd be surprised, Tempest.
You just HAD to ask, didn't you, Pinkie?
...Nice going, Rainbow Dash.
...Oh, Twilight...
Hang tough, Twilight. You, too, Casey.
Maybe it was a little much, Twilight.
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thanks! Sorry for the late response but I hope you've liked what you read so far!
This ending is spectacular!!! When is the second part coming out?
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Hopefully tonight or tomorrow
Well, that was fun. :)
Nice additional scenes. I’m actually planning on making a rewrite of the movie myself. Not that I didn’t enjoy it put...I’m planning to make it more extended and more...epic!
Another chapter nicely done! Also...
Does Casey have some sort of connection with the Storm King in the past?
Very far Tempest...very far.
Celestia bucking dammit Pinkie!!!
Oh boy...this scene again.
You really shouldn’t be surprised Twilight. You should be used to Pinkie’s randomness, because at this point it’s no different than looking at the newspapers.
Goddammit Rainbow! Of all the times to pull of the Sonic Rainboom, you chose now!
I feel so bad for Captain Celaeno right now, along with her crew.
With everything that’s happening, I don’t see that happenin’ for a while Twilight.
As much as I understand why Twilight had done what she did, that was not cool. Did she really think that Queen Novo would leave the Pearl unattended if she didn’t think the jellyfish protecting it wouldn’t let her know that a thief was trying to steal it? Geez!
Truer words have never been spoken.
Ya think Twilight?!
Great chapter! Loved the scene with Fluttershy and the Storm Creature!
.Nice going Trixie
That was amazing!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it Thank you very much!
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No problem.
Friendly word of advice, link to A Race Against Time. Please respond to this comment.
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Thank you for the heads up!