• Member Since 22nd May, 2013
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mattchilly


I'm just a fan of MLP, Touhou, and much more and now for a personal quote. "Inspiration is a fickle thing it’s there when you don’t want it and gone when you need it."

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Sent to the Equestria Girls verse and going back to high school isn't so bad when I've got the combined power of several of my favorite fictional ninjas. My name before no longer matters. Now I am Kohtaro Hanzō a Master Shinobi. This is my story.

Edit 1: Kohtaro's Token is a scroll with this written inside. "To any that find this write down the job on the lines at the bottom of the scroll that you’d like the Shinobi of the Hidden Phoenix Village to take. Know that we will need to be paid for our services and the more dangerous the mission the more expensive it will be and have the right to deny any mission if we feel that it is necessary. Ryu the Shinwa no Kage, 神話の影, The Myth Shadow." There is no audible message

This is one of two characters I designed to be completely overpowered. the other being in The Archer of Twilight

Edit: This is going on hiatus for awhile because I want to work on it but the inspiration and ideas just isn't there.

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Neither. The name Kohtaro comes from Kamen Rider Black/Black RX who's one of my favorite Kamen Riders and Hanzō is the name of one of the most famous leaders of the Iga Ninja clan from japan. Although Hanzō is often used for ninjas in fiction and I forgot both Mortal Kombat's Scorpion and a character from Naruto had Hanzō as part of their names.

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Funny enough, Hatori Hanzo was, by birth and training, not a ninja, if memory serves, but trained them anyway. Man was that badass

Things are heating up! Wait, this begs the question. If their new 'daddy' gave them his DNA, does that mean they can unlock Doujutsu?

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Maybe Yes, maybe no. You'll just have to wait and see

i like the idea but i dont like he didnt give them the option to get new bodies its to similar to the conversion bureau for my tastes

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that's fair. Looking back on this it kinda bugs me too that I didn't give them a choice

Hey is a reboot or something for this because the idea is hella awesome and I would lobe to see another maga fanfic out there. (More then one crossover working perfectly together.)

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I do want to do one but sadly I just haven't felt like working on any Solo stories. I'm not really sure why

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It's ok, beside its your story so you do whatever you want with it.

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Thank's for understanding though if I do another Naruto based Displaced I'll mostly likely go with someone who's WAY less OP then Hanzō lol

Damn you became a father of 9 without even having a wife.

But then again you could probably with your abilities, and resources create your own wife or wives.

I put wives because CRA.

Here's the formula for the CRA and a formula for op characters.

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I have figured out a few things about OP characters, 1st 2 things that you should know before we even start.

[Saitama situation] can't find a challenge, doesn't even have to pull out full strength for anything.

[Goku situation] can find a challenge, but will pull out full strength when those that he cares for are in danger.

These 2 situations seem to be the most widespread, and average.

Now the best way that I have found to restrict OP characters is to use limiters (be they restriction seals, weights, etc).

Because through just limiting them to a certain degree, they get there entertainment (be it through fighting or other such things).

And when those that they care for are in danger they can pull out all the stops (as in limiters are turned off).

As such we turn a boring Saitama situation into a enjoyable Goku situation, were they don't use there full power unless they need to.

P.s in some worlds (Naruto, DBZ, ect) these restrictions are used as a form of training, but after some time they'll need to practice with the restrictions off to get used to there new limits.

After all by making it so your either slower or heavier, you will be much faster after some time when you get used to it.

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Also you know what.. I figured out that if you fill these categories then you have a high chance to be in the CRA (Clan Revival Act) whether you want to, or not.

[Special ability] (be it a bloodline, kekkei genkai, ect) special ability that can be passed down, or taught to a descendent.

[Last of your clan] (or one of the few) last of your old clan, or destroyed clan.

[Your new clan] when you create a clan then you may need, or be required to be in the CRA inorder to populate it. Of course you can still accept others into your clan.

If they (those who fit in the slots above, expect the last one) don't get into the CRA then there is a chance that they'll be turned into breeding stock.

There are ways to escape this though, like being accepted into a clan.

P.s the requirements to build a new clan is to fill the first slot, and go through the paperwork.

Managed to start reading this.
Looks cool so far.
Where's Spike though? Why did the girls leave him out?

Managed to see this fully.

Though not liking how Spike was left out hard.
With how the girls get to be shinobi but Spike is left completely in the dark.
Especially with not knowing what Twilight is now.

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