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Most stories will be based around Rainbow Dash, Twilight, Sci-Twi, and Scootaloo! Also a W.I.T.C.H fic writer on Fanfiction.net(Same username)

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STORY GOING ON HIATUS TONIGHT(JULY31st, 2018) @ 9PM EST DUE TO OTHER STORIES NEEDING ATTENTION!! AS WELL AS PLANNING FOR THIS STORY!! IT WILL BE BACK ONLINE HOPEFULLY!! SORRY FOR THE DISPLEASURE I MAY HAVE CAUSED!!

Princess Celestia huffed as she flew as fast as she could to the meeting place, located in Cloudsdale, a little ways above and near Ponyville. She held the bundle she was carrying with extreme caution with a face of desperation, determined to get it there on time.

Her small alicorn form landed on the nearest cloud before looking behind her, seeing a small rainbow light coming right behind her, following her trail.

"Shoot," she muttered before running forward again. She huffed loudly as she ran through the dark streets of the mobile city made of condensed water vapor that will never fall. The princess of the Sun looked down at the bundle in her right hoof as it began to move before looking back up again.

Soon, after mixing her trail, she arrived at the meeting place, where two ponies, a stallion and a mare, were waiting patiently.

"She is on my trail," Princess Celestia huffed as she came to a stop in front of them. "You know what you must do." The stallion nodded quickly before she continued. "Same hair color. Make it work for as long as you can, no matter what."

"Of course," he said desperately.

"All you have to do is make sure she is happy," the princess told the mare. "Make sure she lives her life and suspects nothing. I will return when she is ready for the truth of her origin and purpose."

"Yes, your highness," the mare responded. Celestia nodded before hearing the faint roar of her pursuer coming closer. She looked back down and lifted the covers to reveal a small foal asleep, snuggled against the softness of the blanket. She smiled as a tear escaped her eye before she leaned down and kissed the foals forehead, nuzzling her rainbow colored mane.

"I will return, my daughter. My Rainbow Dash."


(Currently in the midst of starting off the series. If I work hard enough, the story will be finished as early as by the end of next month!)

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I like where this is going. Keep up the good work!

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Thanks! This story won't only have the feels, it'll have some more comedy and action in it! Thanks for reading!

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

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Well....man, that's a good question. I'd guess that Sergeant Cloudstorm would have a voice that has a little bit of bass to it. Calm yet in authority. Special Agent Sweetie Drops would sound like your average drill sergeant. Armed fire would speak loud in determination. Proud yet unsure. Slip stream would sound like Twilight except just a little deeper. Spear head. His voice would have a regular dad's voice. I don't know how else to explain it. Let's see ummmm...Shine heart would have a southern accent. These are Rainbow Dash's personal security detail when she leaves her cloud castle.

And great sound, Songbird Serenade's manager would have an deep english accent. The CMCs still sound like they always have.

There might be more OCs. I don't know, we'll see. I hope you enjoy this story so far. I'm trying to make it interesting. If you have any recommendations, voice them in the comments and I'll see if I can make it into a reality!

Hey, everyone! Markelsmith866 here! I'll be posting a new chapter later on this afternoon! I'm going to add a lot of feels in it. And don't worry! The action is coming back soon. And also? Spoil alert! I'll be adding Canterlot High somewhere in this story. I usually just type and let the story create itself. After that, I add some things.

Thanks for reading!

Hey, everyone! Sorry I haven't updated my story today like I usually do, I've started working on an original title, called "What Am I". I'm trying to get that kicked off, so it's gonna be really great. Once again, I'm sorry if you were expecting a chapter at the usual timing, 3 pm. It'll be up soon tonight, I promise.

I am really loving this story! Though I have noticed quite a few grammar errors and missing words, though they haven't been too problematic. The only one that did came from this chapter.

Have you seen Lyra by any chance? She moved out of Ponyville to Canterlot and I haven't seen her since."

Isn't Lyra present right now during this conversation? Furthermore, isn't Lyra the one saying this line?

As for this chapter, I imagine Diamond Tiara didn't bring this up because she was scared stiff, but I wonder what would've happened if she brought up the fact that Scootaloo had never been punished for her crimes of stealing food. I know that in Rainbow Dash's eyes, that's forgiven because it was done purely for her survival, but I'm not sure if Diamond Tiara would just let that little detail go forever. (Though at this point, I think it would also be impossible to bring that up.)

That could also be my guess as to what happens in the next chapter.

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Oh dude you're right! I meant Bon-Bon! Than you for telling me!

Well. That certainly was an unexpected response. But it sure fits so well in showing how broken her brain was from that news.

Looks like the only issue now is that threat mentioned at the beginning of the story. Until then, time to enjoy what they have.

"Two? I'm your mother. So I know everything."

A mother knows what's best! Even if your mother is Rainbow Dash! Haha!

"This....will be a very forbidden place if I lose to a fight that I am destined to be in," Rainbow answered. "Or if I am forced to make a decision that affects everypony critically."

"No....." Rainbow turned around to face them. "It's not. This room was built..............for me."

Time to set the tone. You've all had your wonderful time of happiness and dreams. But now, it's time to get serious. Rainbow Dash wasn't turned into a Princess for no reason. That royalty now comes with a huge, HUGE responsibility. The responsibility of a threat that could spell the end of all Equestria.

From what it's setting up, it sounds like Prince Blueblood will take a huge role in this. I wonder if part of his help is coming from the Rich family too. Rainbow's secret will soon be revealed. The question is, who will reveal it, and how will it be taken?

I'm so anxious to find out. I've been waiting for a story like this for a long time. (Kind of like the 'To Be A Wonderbolt' series.)

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Oh yeah. There's going to be another chapter later on tonight. I'm finishing up a chapter in my other story titled Queen Scootaloo which will be up in about twenty to thirty minutes! The chapter's a little dark, but I'm trying to get it all depressing before the real adventure begins! Thanks for the comment! I really enjoy the positive feedback!

So Cadance has figured it out. And it looks like she understands that keeping it a secret has been for quite a dire reason. The situation sure sounded dire. Rainbow Dash has already accepted that these events will happen the way Celestia foresaw. But the future can still be changed. Right?

It's About Time

Right?

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New chapter up now! Just like you asked! Enjoy!

this story gets deter and deter

It’s a great fic, so then why aren’t there any comments?

Hahaha! I can't stop laughing at the silly events happening during the serious conversations that the princesses are having with their family. It's so hilarious!

"You dipped yourself in the fountain in there, didn't you?" Fluttershy asked her, sighing a little.

Scootaloo looked at her for a moment before rubbing the back of her neck. "A little bit. But my great aunt....is evil. She wants the magic that mom has......and will kill over it?"

The princesses all looked over before Celestia nodded. "Yep. Now go get clean. If you don't get it off now, it will be permanent."

"Stop lying to my daughter."

That's gotta be my favorite moment in this chapter.


I'm almost forgeting that Twilight is a unicorn in this story.

"And who made this law?" She asked, slowly stalking off her throne and towards the Prince threateningly.

"I had it billed and-"

"YOU WILL NOT, I REPEAT, NOT HAVE ANOTHER MEETING WITHOUT MY CONSENT, DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR BLUEBLOOD?!" She yelled at him, making him cower down in fear.

Prince Blueblood forgets who has all the powers here. You try outsmarting somepony like that with a sneaky loophole like that, you're asking for punishment. Princess Celestia has just as many, if not more, more powerful at that, loyal subjects than Prince Blueblood ever will.

Unfortunately, that's really gonna paint him as a HUGE target for Spectrum recruits. And that's not gonna be good. Still wonder if the Rich family will have any involvement as well.

Anyway, I eagerly await the day Prince Blueblood finally gets what's coming to him!

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lol, I’m not the only one that screws up while typing

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Nooooo I’m reading this and then I come to the last chapter (so far) Awwwww

But I can’t wait for the next one! :twilightsmile:

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I'm working on the next chapter tomorrow morning and will be up by twelve! I already planned it!

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Thank you. I'm trying to put in some humor. The next chapter will be up tomorrow morning.

By the one hundred-fortieth pony, Princess Rainbow was getting a little tired. Is this what the other princesses felt all the time? This was a mess. She could barely understand what the stallion in front of her was saying.

"That is all your highness," one of the guards at the door said.

"Really? I thought it was two hundred ponies," she said in confusion.

"That was two hundred, your highness," Sweetie Drops said.

"Really? Because I only counted 141."

Also, TWO HUNDRED?! That's a lot for her very first court day.


And now the signs of Spectrum's return is coming. And it's starting with the Everfree Forest, the place Blueblood is trying to investigate next. Either he's going to be denied access and be really mad, or he's going to enter, and Spectrum's gonna have a brand new friend...

At first I thought Blueblood’s poumpous prancing scares the animals out...(So stupid of me right?) The I kept on reading and I realized Spectrum was coming back...

Anyway, great fic! (Again!) :derpytongue2:

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Thanks! I'll try to have another chapter up by tomorrow morning at 9 AM EST!

I’ll be watching.... (lol, I sound creepy)

Welp, I have a dance competition today, and last time I fell on meh ass, so wish me luck!

And now Spectrum has a brand new friend! Once Prince Blueblood shows that picture, Princess Celestia will have ALL the evidence she needs to prove that this awakening was all Blueblood's fault.

P.S. After that romantic scene with Rainbow and Fluttershy, (Which was beautiful and quite funny I might add) I think this story's rating might need to be up'd to Teen.

oh my faust,

Also, I love that saying for the Princesses. Though I think that'll need to be Capitalized. Not entirely sure though.

Oh crap, what if Blueblood tells her? I can’t believe he would go this far, but, once Spectrum is defeated, wouldn’t it be alright to tell Everypony that Rainbow is Celly’s daughter? I think I’m getting to ahead of myself though... Can’t wait till the next doc! Keep up dat good work!

And Jesus, Celestia will never knock, will she? :rainbowlaugh:

Well, I got third at the completion last night, so thanks for the support!

"Princess Luna must've been nuts," Prince Blueblood commented.

"Whoa whoa whoa whoa, hold on!" Luna yelled, holding up her hoof and stopping his story. "You thought I killed those guards?"

"Yeah!" He replied, looking at her confusedly. "You were the one who attacked-"

"She only has control of the stars, the moon, and the night, not over the plant life. That would be Princess Dash's control."

"So Princess Dash probably killed those guards!" Blueblood yelled.

And then Prince Blueblood found a really giant hole through his chest.

"Get off of me, you wannabe," he said, pushing her off his chest. "You are nothing compared to me and-"

*SHING* Rainbow drew her sword with her magic, positioning it right between Blueblood's surprised eyes.

Oooor... he found a hole, IN HIS BRAIN!!!


And now, Prince Blueblood has been stripped of his royalty. So what does that make his name now? I would LOVE to see the aftermath of that effect. Seeing just how badly his life crumbles down now that he's not royalty anymore. Maybe those scenes could eventually lead to how he becomes an ally to Spectrum, where only more bad things will happen.

Oh boy... The future has become unpredictable now. Now there's absolutely no telling what the end results will be. Stay strong Rainbow Dash. Fluttershy, Scootaloo, Princess Celestia, your friends, and so much more, they're all counting on you, counting on you BIG time! Don't let them down. Stay strong.

Start the fight seen i can not wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Can’t wait till the rest comes out!!!! :twilightsmile:

Still waiting for the big fight..... :ajbemused:

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Hmm.....there may be a probable effect, we'll see. A;lthough it could be in later chapters, we'll see. :raritywink:
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I'll try and have the scene up tomorrow, you two. i was going to wait and abide by the SCHEDULE HERE, but I'm not doing much tomorrow. So i might as well. But after tomorrow, I'm abiding by the schedule. What would you like to see? Reply your answers!

P.S. I'll try to have the chapter up by 6 PM, considering I might make the action scene into three parts.
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It's coming!

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I already mentioned what I want to see. The effects of how Blueblood's life changes after being stripped of his title. Possibly seeing how it crumbles down so far to the point, he becomes Spectrum's pawn, whether either of them know it or not.

You make my day beter just by uploding these fanfics thank you so much

No do not died rainbow scootaloo needs you :fluttercry:

Huh... That seemed a bit short lived. This was the villain that Princess Celestia was fretting over for the past... 20+ years? I forget. But for many years. And before I suggested Blueblood, she really didn't have any allies, forced or by choice, and alone, she didn't have much chance against all the princesses. It felt like there would be a lot more danger involved, and the deciding fate of Equestria happened too soon. Or maybe I'm just speaking too soon.

But regardless, THAT FIGHT WAS AWESOME!!! I really wish there was more of that! It was so epic!

But... uh oh... At what cost? Rainbow Dash... Stay strong. Stay Strong!

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