Great rhyming skills! I suggest either Twilight or Fluttershy for Rarity's chapter, but it's up to you.

Please don't let Spike get laid anywhere in this story! I beg of you!

2240204 Well, enjoy the rest of your Spike-hating clopfic.

2240155 That's rather what I was thinking, too. AJ and Pinkie's chapters are still yet to come, so I don't want to over-expose them too early, and poor Rainbow Dash is worn out already, so that leaves Twilight or Fluttershy.

2240112 My apologies, but as the note at the end of Chapter Three implies, there won't be any Sparity here. Sorry.

2240318 Glad you approve!

Personally, I love the dynamics of Rarity and Pinkie, but Pinkie's had enough screentime for now, methinks. I'm up for some Rarishy myself.

Three-way. *eyebrow waggle* Nice one, Zecora.

2240395 Thank you sir

I'd be down for some Twilight loving. They'd get twice as horny as the Rarishy option, amirite?

2240864 Har!

2240898It's been one of those days. You're welcome.

IT'S BACK

Because of season 3, I'm stuck between twirity and rarijack... vs

2244246 As was Rarity for most of the season opener.

If it weren't so similar to the plot of this chapter, I think I would throw her in the middle of a Twijack sandwich.

Diamonds and sparkles are always a good mix
but for my suggestion, look to my pic

Ciao darling

Just noticed that, if you take the title of the series rather than (Prologue), the chapter titles are rhyming as well. Your dedication is admirable.
Mine is not, but that's fine too I guess...

2254002

Congratulations on your sharp eye!
I wondered how long this would take readers to spy.

Big Mac is red;
a ripe apple's hue;
rhyming is hard;
you're very good at this.

2280078

On the grounds of good grammar, I must decline
to apply the suggested changes this time.
"teasingly," an adverb, has no place there,
and "once more again" is redundant (to be fair).

As for the wait, I do apologize.
It takes some time for rhyming porn to materialize.
As a song I once heard goes, it's hard to rhyme a
critical word for clop like vagina!

2240395

rarity has to make a entry any day
would be a bomer if she was not gay

and a lady of her allure and grease
covert in latex, a strap-on with veins

a whip, anal beads, butt plug's and gags
rarity for sure has a master fetish complex

magic vecters, blind folds, gender swap
deep throat, fake cum, riding crop

the ideas explode out of my head
trouble rhyming?, don't fret!

i have some ideas if you need
PM me, and i'll feed your greed

I'd say make it a Rarilight chapter.

Love the new chapter! My kind of silliness!

You know, you played a slightly dirty trick on me. Now I'm expecting rhymes in everything I see.

1007826
Flutterdash? But but but why would that be a worst ship?

3641447 Honestly, most Dash ships aren't to my tastes. Granted, that comment was made... more than a year ago? Yeowch... and a few of my shipping opinions have changed since then--namely, Twinkie is now much higher-rated in my book--but I can't say that FlutterDash has gained any ground. Apologies to any fans of the pairing.

4238124 Pretty please?

my first link broke. Lemme get that for you.
https://soundcloud.com/tgap-linko/zecora-tries-her-hoof-at-clop/s-63QpD
There that's better.
It's pretty bad. Screwed up a bunch. Please bare with me

4238327 Funny, the first link worked just fine for me.

Also, that's awesome.

I think i'll do the second chapter soon. Maybe i'll try a manly masculine narrator voice. (Just for schlits and wiggles) I'll try to make it less painful to listen to

4238342 I know it has been a very long while since this story has been sitting here (Incomplete). I hope that you have completed the other 3 chapters? I am wondering who Rarity is getting some fun from? Maybe an All-Mare orgy with several adult toys??? Oh it is December 15th, 2016.