• Member Since 11th Jun, 2012
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Esle Ynopemos

Was that me? Or was it... somepony else?


When Rarity has Twilight over for tea, she learns her friend has a big confession to make. But what is really going on here?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 332 )

Voila, my first fic.

Do you think I should put a Romance tag on this? It isn't exactly a romance, but it plays at being one for most of the story.

Good Christ..this was actually really funny. No, don't put a romance tag. I think comedy fits it well. :raritywink:

Oh wow. Wasn't expecting that at all. :twilightsmile:

Well. I like it. You could have made it longer. But it definitely worked in the end. I'll give you. :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

Goodness, that was amusing! :pinkiesmile:

And, no - don't misuse the tags. You have them perfect as is.

This was amazing; I loved the whole thing. I don't think it needs a romance tag, but if you want to use one, it's up to you.

I like the personality of Twilight at the end. She isn't normally like that, but she could be, and ponies (like people) surprise me all the time.:moustache:

I lol'd so hard. Brilliant job man. You've just earned a watch. :rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile:

Thanks. I agree it is too short, but whenever I try to add anything to it it just feels like it breaks the pacing and makes it drag.

I think we can all agreed. Prankster Twilight is best prankster pony.

That last line. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I think you've won something, but I'm not sure what...

Using time travelling for a prank? Sounds legit.

I wtf'd very hard. Make me a favor and go get urself a nice treat for this fic. Loved it still do. :rainbowlaugh:

I...wait...with the...in the back of...mint jelly...kaleidoscope...:derpyderp1:


I think you broke a reader.

Now that was a twist, this was an entertaining read :rainbowlaugh:


Hahaha that was brilliant!

GENIUS. Simply Genius. I'm laughing like a madman xD

Lmao, you broke my brain for a second there; that was really funny. :)

Seems slightly out of character for Twilight at the end but I could still imagine her doing that so it works just fine anyway. Definitely doesn't need to be longer. It works great for what it is. A short, funny, one off story about a prank. I thinks no romance tag just so as not to be confusing but thats just me. You get one thumb up for I can only give just the one. So have some mustaches as well :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

Oh, brilliant.:rainbowlaugh:

Just one thing, you couldve made the whole porting in thing a bit more obvious. As it was, I nearly missed it.

Just seemed a bit like a foot note, y'ken?:twilightsheepish:

As soon as future Twilight entered... my head just kind of exploded. Really good, and I laughed my face into the desktop screen. Very good job! :pinkiehappy:

:twilightsmile: Ain't no other pony that can troll like me! :twilightsmile:

Definitely don't need to add anything. It is perfect.

“Oh, me,” Past Twilight said...

Haven't laughed like this in a long time. Good job.

That was brilliant! :rainbowlaugh:

Oh dear:rainbowderp:
I'll admit the second I read the "dating myself" line, I let out the weirdest yelp/laugh sound; thanks for that:twilightblush:
A+. 10/10. Would read again :pinkiehappy:

Ha! That was pretty great... Plus, Twilight certainly learned a lot about how Rarity views her, didn't she?

Indeed, but the payback, in the form of the prank, was undeniably awesome. Could stand to get a bit of jaw-drop from Dash/Pinkie, but still, well done.

731760 It's classier to just have one tag.

"Well written" I say. It is clear why people like this.

I almost feel bad giving you a thumbs up, because that "100" looks so perfect.

I read this aloud and did the character's voices as I went, but I think this story would have been fun any way I sliced it.

At first I was like
But then I was like

That was absolutely perfect. One of the most well-made fics I've read in a long time.

735814 :trollestia: might have something to say about that....

Sweet Celestia, that's the best fanfic I think I've ever had to spend 3 days hunting down to re-read... Actually, it's the only one I've been dedicated enough to scrounge for... My point is, I think I can die happy now. Great job!:twilightsmile:


I am pleased you feel it was worth that kind of effort. Although, even if it's happy, I hope you can hold off on dying for a little bit. I don't want it to look like I'm trying to inflate my numbers by putting dead people on my watch list. :trixieshiftright:

That... certainly was interesting as it was amusing.

Congratulations Rarity, you have officially been mind screwed.

I was surprised to see a new chapter for this fic.
My brain hurts :facehoof:, I don't really understand why Twilight decided (will decide ?) to come back in time if AppleJack was locked in the closet, guess it's just like in the episode and there is no beginning to the cycle.

...Did Twilight just prank herself and Rarity simultaneously? :twilightoops:

Best. Prank. Ever. This story is awesome.

WOW!:rainbowderp: And I thought I pulled some good pranks before.
You just won :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Heh, time travel is awesome. You don't watch Doctor Who perchance, do you?

1387358 Yes. Yes she did.

1387431 To be fair, access to a time-traveling spell is a tremendous advantage when pulling a prank.

1387449 I may indulge in some Who from time to time.

Twilight's logic: I'll prank my friend by going back in time and kissing her full-on and make believe my past self was the one who is pranked. Mindfuck, bigtime.:rainbowderp: Ladies and gentlemen, Trollight Sparkle. :trollestia:

Genius! Pure genius!:rainbowlaugh:
My faves and moustaches, take them all!:moustache::moustache:

OH! She got pranked like a BOSS! I was sort of hoping it would be some Applejack/Rarity romance before I read that it was the real Twilgiht from the future...very, very well done I really enjoyed this story.

Trollestia :trollestia: is proud that her faithful student has learned the ways of pranking so well. brilliance. i cry for more!

You just aren't meant to beat Twilight at these things Rarity :raritydespair:

oh heavens stable time loops. Love it!

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