Lets see where this goes. The stories that i write are the kind of stories i like to read and are the kind of randomness that fills my head. I write primarily for my own satisfaction.
This story is a sequel to Lost Piece of the Pie
A series of linked one-shots that take place after the events of Pieces of the Pie and Lost Piece of the Pie. There will be story arcs in this series and I will list them as they are posted.
The Diner Arc:
-Apple Bloom
-Applejack
-The Diner
Adoption Arc
-Scootaloo
-Rainbow
Stand Alone
-Silver Pie
-Spike
-Rarity
Reflections Arc
-Sunset
-The Road Home
-Lost...
-...And Found
Part of the Journeys Universe
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Then write MOAR of Flurry Heart and Puppy Spike why don't ya!!!!!!
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Lol
Careful; you might be accused of plagiarism since there are a lot of stories that use the SunsetSunburst sibling relationship.
I'm quite interested in you take though.
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It seems like a logical conclusion. They look a lot alike. I haven't read any Sunset/ Sunburst siblings stories, but it doesn't surprise me that they are out there.
Beware of Flurry Heart.
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There is at least one more part in this story arc. Plenty of time for the adorable pony antichrist to make her presence known...
Ever notice Flurry Heart make them go 'dawwww'?
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Yep.
It's extremely tough, I will admit. I find listening to clips of them speaking helps immensely, but my main technique is to soften the vowels a bit and run words together. For instance;
Apple Bloom (Standard English): I seem to get into trouble all the time!
I is shifted to Ah, to reflect the softened vowels, 'into' becomes 'inta', to indicate the raised pitch, and 'all the time' becomes 'alla'time!'.
The revised version now reads:
Apple Bloom (Dialectical English): Ah seem ta get inta trouble alla'time!
Whilst this is a good idea, you have to be careful not to overdo it. In my earlier stories, Applejack often sounded as if she'd burnt her tongue.
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So many error's.
Great set of stories!
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Thanks