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BlazzingInferno


Engineer, Brony, Aspiring Author. Not necessarily in that order.

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Historians call it the Wailing Mountain. The locals call the surrounding desert Forbidden. Daring Do calls them both nuisances, annoying physical obstacles between her and a clean escape from her latest adventure-gone-south. Visiting this secluded peak, and learning why its resident’s screams echo across the sands, might change her mind.


The Suicide tag is being used only because the topic is mentioned.

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Well that was awesome. :yay:

A nice effort, but I feel like this isn't your genre. You're so good at writing character and relationships anything else just seems bland in comparison.

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“Would like like some soup?”

*cough*

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Damn, this is intense. c.c

and a ear-splitting scream

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That was pretty darn cool. :D

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*cough*fixed! Thanks!*cough*

Nice. But who was that mare, and how did she gain her powers? Are there others like her? Find out next time, on Daring Do!

Daring Do and the Whaling Mountain...

All goes well until those aliens show up wanting to chat with humpbacks.

:trollestia:

“Silence!” the chieftess bellowed from the crowd. “The traveler comes! All hail!”

Choose the form of the Destructor!

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I... I couldn't help it! It just popped in there!

:trollestia:

8787928 Probably another Pennywise demon thing.

They all have 8 legs at some point. :raritywink:

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The thought did cross my mind while I was writing :rainbowlaugh:

Interesting setup. I look forward to see where this goes.

I might not call it "fun", per se, but that was a good read.

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Daring has a terrifying day job, sometimes :twilightoops:

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So, does that mean the writing is what she does for fun?

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I figured she’s an idealist and adrenaline junkie, and writing is a way to keep the thrill ride going while her body recuperates. I don’t claim to be a Daring Do expect though

Good, interesting story overall. Bit fast paced and little quick and short on details/build-up, but works really well nonetheless.

I love the ending sentence :twilightsmile:

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