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StormLuna
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Not everyone understands military time
8588163
Seriously? I've been using military time since the start of my "Terror in Equestria" series and you're the first person to ever bring that up.
For those who don't understand it....for everything from 1300-2359, just subtract 12 from the first part of it. For 0000-0059, just add 12 to the 00.
8588210
Someone's gotta do it. Personally, I think using military time in the civilian world is a show off move, akin to what servicemembers would call 'boot' or 'moto'. Trust me, its not a compliment.
8588300
I get where you're coming from but in other countries across the world they use it....and they use it in hospitals, law enforcement in some areas use it so I really don't get what the big deal is.
Stating that not everyone understands military time isn't making a big deal.
Editing could be better but a good concept ^_^
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8588210
that, and the only difference between Military time and Digital time is a colon. 2200 -> 22:00. But for some reason digital is easier to understand
Anyways, enjoying the story so far
~E.B~
8588377
I'm glad to know that you are enjoying this fic and I do have plans on writing a sequel, a much more raunchy and kinky one. Normally I like Starlight x Trixie but I'm getting into this ship as well and given their relationship, it isn't hard to come up with ideas.
You do know that Spike and Twilight don’t share a room anymore right?
8588691
Actually no, I didn't.
8588762
I figured as much.
But yeah they showed Spike’s room back in Tanks for the memories.
8588777
Well shit, thanks for notifying me of that....I never noticed. Well that won't be the case anymore, he will be in Starlight's old room since she is sleeping with Twilight now.
Twilight is so dense.
Luna's got to be blowing......coughing up........swallowing........DAMN IT!!!!
Nothing my small butt.
Get 'em! Get 'em!!
So they confessed.
A moment of your time, please?
I was surprised when you wrote that Starlight shot semen out from her horn, especially given your post in the forums about not liking penises in stories. Was this some weird dream thing? Or do unicorns shoot out actual semen in your stories? Or was this more of a metaphor for excessive magic shooting out? I think the description there could've been better.
You repeated yourself a lot. If the content is the same you should either make the character think something or make them say it, not both.
Examples:
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That happened in Twilight's dream but I do have unicorns and Alicorns cast fertility spells on themselves to where they can eject semen from their horns. That way mares can still impregnate one another without any disgusting futa being involved.
8598576
Ah, okay, I was dumb and didn't make that connection for some reason, despite the enlarged horn. If Twilight dreamed about Starlight trying to impregnate her I would think that would weigh on her mind when she woke up, since that's quite the step.
8599094
When she woke up it actually did. She went in to take a shower to wash off but still hoofed herself in the shower imagining it was Starlight's enlarged horn....and she did struggle with how she would tell Starlight and initially had troubles looking at Starlight straight in the eyes.
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The only one showing off here is the idiot who wants everyone to know he doesn't understand how to subtract 12.
Many places outside of the military use a 24-hour clock rather than a 12. It isn't showing off, and only an idiot would be so intimidated by a "complicated" prospect of arithmetic that they would see it as such. This is no more showing off than depicting temperature in Celcius or Fahrenheit or using the metric system or the imperial system. It's also a far easier "conversion" too.
8695365
Lol I find it amusing that you're picking up an argument from almost 2 months ago. I did my time for uncle sam, so I'm fully aware of how easy it is to tell military time.
While entertaining so far, I just can't take 'Starlie' seriously.
Might be a matter of opinion, probably is, but I can't see Twilight use that name, of all options, in earnest. Just pulls me out every time.
... pulling me out... hm... there might be a joke in there, somewhere...
You know, Starlight, for somepony who outwitted Twilight easily, time and again, while fighting her... you were pretty dense in this one.
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It is a term of endearment. Twilight has a major league crush on her and isn't going to behave like the normal Twilight, the one that doesn't have a crush on Starlight.
instead of just saying
someday a mare
Why did not you say
someday a mare or stallion?
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Two reasons, Twilight was trying to drop a hint that she was the mare that would come along. Also, if you read my stories involving romance, the mares are almost always lesbians....it is pretty much a default setting in my ponyverse given that I am a lesbian shipper.
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Hey I also prefer lesbian couples in mlp
more or less and said it, it makes it appear that there were no stallions
and I had read only the first chapter, when I commented
9172989
It doesn't mean there are no stallions, it is simply because she assumes that Starlight would want her even though at that point Starlight may be coming across as either asexual or completely uninterested in romance.
9173013
Yes, yes, sorry.
but that's what I understood when I read
shoulder
Why did Twilight just say mare she should’ve said mare or dragon- Uh stallion, yes mare or stallion I totally did not say dragon.
10560476
She knows Starlight is a lesbian and I will NEVER hook Spike up with anything other than another dragon, ever.....then again I'll never hook Spike up with anyone at all.
10560478
Aw, I guess I can’t blame you. I don’t have much of an opinion on interspecies relationships in cartoons as long as it’s not human and animal I’m okay with shipping it.(Sorry if I sounded offensive)
10560478
I was just kidding around when I made that comment, either way I respect your opinion.
Discord is currrently filming Twilight and Starlight having sex.
“Poor widdle ponies.” Discord mockingly said.
“I am so showing this to Trixie, next time she should pick a new code word.” Discord said with a smirk.
Sorry I could not resist making a joke, good job on the chapter.
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Don't worry about it. I respect other people's decisions to do interspecies ships. I personally wouldn't do it and despite him molting in season 8, I still see Spike as a juvenile dragon clear up until that final episode....it would be flat out wrong to ship an adult with a minor in my opinion.
10560498
I will admit, I could see Discord filming that, showing it to Trixie and then getting a laugh out of it. Trixie obviously would be furious.
10560499
I have a head canon the age gap between Spike and the Mane 6 + Starlight is small, but I get what you mean.
10560504
I know, the thought of that happening is hilarious.
10560508
I know dragons age differently than ponies but it is just something that makes me a bit uncomfortable....well that and I think Spike really should hook up with a dragon. The way things look though, that probably wouldn't happen....Smolder is more like a close friend/big sister figure for him....I would be open to shipping him with Gabby though.
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Eh that´s fair, I respect your opinion.