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Jack of Tales


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Well well.... seems some wild magic is at play....

Other than some spelling errors, like reef should be wreath, and keeping the names that are said the same as the names that are speaking ( far to many to count) it is a good story and it features one of my favorite historical nations, Rome. I shall be awaiting the next chapter with glee.

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Also first to like this story XP!

By Jupiter's balls! It lives!

This is gonna be good,Both sides have advantages of not knowing their enemies, but caribous haven't been battling against professional army before sou they are most likely very arrogant. kinda hope battle will be like Battle of Watling Street.

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Agreed, especially after checking said battle. Bet that in any case, horns are gonna break.

Can't wait for the Romans to kick some serious ass.

need more madness and battles

"Roma Vittoria!!":pinkiecrazy:
It just popped in my head after finishing chapter...

By the next morning, the sentries on the walls of Trevorum had noticed that the entire camp was gone, like they had packed up and left without a noise. The slaves, whose tents were still there, didn't know what happened to the rest of the legion.

well shit slaves are going to have a lot to explain

He blinked as he tried to take in what he just said. Walo was the German's only way of communicating with the gods. Walo had never been wrong before. Hell, he was the one that predicted Hilgar's death. If what Gannus said is true.....

You have spelled this man's name at least 3 different ways in one conversation. Please make up your mind before we decide you don't care cause you're gonna kill him off soon.

Wow, way to bring up northis mythology.

I can't wait to see what happens next, also when do you think they will make it to Ponyville and retake that town from the Caribou?

I have a feeling that Julious's father have very kind eyes)

Well he was a goner and when is the next chapter

Nothing like adding a werewolf to the mix. loving the story so far!

Fifteen Denari says that direwolves is _ _ _ _ _ _.:trixieshiftright:

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Author, i strongly suspect that you learned history of Rome from hollywood movies. It is really one of the worst sources of information about roman history, see, how many mistakes found I, just slightly intrested in roman history guy, cannor imagine what will say actual historic.
First of all, decide on the time period of what is happening. The Senate gives you orders, the legate served on the wall of Adrian, built in 128, and it is said that Nero rules(69 year, just before Galba's rebellion and year of four Imperators). This is nonsense, change at least something.
You should also read an article about Upper German limes, but be careful with dates.
I also cannot but note that by the year 69, most of the cavalry were Gallic alas, not equites, and the main unit of auxilariae was cohorts.
also the main unit of the legton is a cohort, often the legions were crushed precisely by them, the entire legion standing was a rather rare sight.
And where did you get the 16 cohort from the legion? There are only ten of them !!!
Therefore, I strongly advise you to read at least one recent book about legions of Rome, for example Dando Collins

And how does he perform sober? I REALLY want to know now

Oh shit he beat up king dainn. Or was it thorax seeing as their is a changling.

These Roman legionnaires...sound eerily familiar to myself in terms of craving all-or-nothing battles where the prospect of death only makes it more exciting.

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