Twilight has received a letter from Sunset Shimmer that Canterlot High is almost taken over by Sirens. She and Spike enter the mirror to help out her friend. However, something went wrong. Spike is separated from Twilight and finds himself in a different world called Thedas.
Spike must set aside his own fears and innocents to save a world in peril, with the help of one that will save it.
Second fan fiction story, set during Rainbow Rocks.
I do not own Dragon Age or Equestrian Girls.
Chapters (6)
I might be presuming a bit too much at the moment (it only being the prologue and all) but the summary suggests only Spike goes to the realm of Dragon Age, while the text suggests that both have...
So I thought Spike was going to be the Inquisitor and is he really a elf or his he some dragon hybrid thing. please let him be a dragon hybrid thing. It would be a mix between shift-mages and warriors and he could be the one to drink from the well and fight the red-lyrium dragon.
OK I love this so far. Love how Spike isn't like acting to wimpy for a lack of a better word but isn't all that tough for being rightfully scared and crying a little.
Also love how kind he is to Lily. Are they going to be a couple. It's better than BlackWall or Solas late less-est, damn heart breakers.
So with those eyes, pointed ears, and that aura does that mean he will have cool dragon powers, please let it be could dragon powers.
I've never play Dragon Age, so I have no clue about much of this, but I'm eagerly waiting to see if Spike's got some badass abilities (like being able to breath huge plumes of magical fire)
I know this probably won't happen but if you are giving Spike a class from Dragon Age may I suggest Mage. I have always loved fics where Spike learns Magic.
Well I like this. I am disappointed that Spike's arms didn't become scaly and grow claws and killed his the demons with his bear arms. But I like how you gave him a two handed sword being that the other warriors use sword/shields or two handed hammer/ax. Also I like how Spike his Lily's rock like how his is for Twilight but has a more prominent role.
So far I'm liking this story. I am wondering how spike will fit in once the inquisitor stage of the game come around. No matter time to wait for the next update.
You really need to brush up on your grammar, and not that doesn't just mean spelling. I mean some sentences need far more elaborate descriptors and more fleshing out. Some are seriously bland and I feel the pacing is too quick overall.
It's a nice story seeing as I know NOTHING about Dragon's Age games, but it could use some work.
More, please.
I liked it.
Dude come on, in the first paragraph alone I found errors! Where's your editor?
5959884 Don't have one.
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*Sigh* Look you might want to proof-read your draft BEFORE publishing it, because I saw some really suspension breaking mistakes and those kinds of things will kill any drive to read the story if they can be found at the very beginning
YES, hybrid dragon form, thank thank you this is so awesome. I so hope he keeps it but in normal fights it's just changes his legs and arms. Also that he gets wings and all the breath weapons. Also I don't care about the spelling issues I can see your trying your best.
What happened to Spike?
6010829 during the battle with the pride demon, he morphed into that, and starting kicking the demon's a**
6010848 Yeah but after that? Is he still in that state or is he conked out somewhere.
6011423 oh
that's what you meant. Whoops
6012214 No prob.
I agree with DarkPhantom13 where's and does he still all dragony. Also, Yes I so want him to look like that he's so badass.
6010829 Hey, phantom do you want to start making bets on what chooses are going to be made. I bet 20 bits on Leliana becoming a Knight-enchanter, Necromancy seems to dark for her and Fade-Mage might be to weird. Also Knight-enchanter is more elfish then the other two. I don't know which specialization Spike will choose, if you ask me they all would fit him. Ravager would be perfect him be a dragon and all. I could also see Templar because I think in Spike's mind the holiness they call down would feel like Celestia. And Champion would be great to being how Spike likes to protect other people.
Is a update coming soon?
I have played this so i can say 1 you didnt make the rest of it easier by being human and 2 playing as a mage sux warriors all the way or at least a rogue woohoo fun times with varric and solas
6018442 do you think they might split up, like have Spike talk to the Mages or Templars while the Inquisitor talks to the other?
6346683 I think Spike would be like the Inquisitor shadow, right hand man or her bodyguard so I think they'd stay together. ( Spoiler warning) Also I don't think the story would work if they did both they need an enemy to fight for the rest of the game and one of the armies need to attack Haven. And I think Spike would point him to the the mages because he seen magic go crazy and time magic is a danger if used wrong.
is there a next chapter?
chapter!chapter!
If you hadn't have used that clip... I might not have forgiven you. XD
In all honesty, I know the feeling and I hope when you do have time, we can see your creativity again. Good luck out there.
So if someone else wanted to continue the story you'd let them?
7746351 Sure I will. However, they have to have played the games and know the lore of the world of Thedas. Plus, they have to ask me if someone can.
7746497 Ha. The funny thing his I have almost all those things but am not the best writer. There is one person on this site the could do the story justice I just need the them to agree to it and for you two to talk.