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CP10 FLUFFY


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Some grammar issues, but all in all not bad.

I'll be watching this.

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Thank you for the comment. My spelling might not be that good because I did this on my phone and Word went wonky on me for a bit.

a few grammar errors here and there but not bad.

So I do want to submit a Changeling OC, but I have one question before that: are reformed-ling color schemes allowed?

Looks like they put that kid through hell. No wonder he snapped.

Why so much interest in that boy? Curious.

Wonder how the others will react to Flutters having a viking boyfriend?

Are you still taking submissions for FoE: Blood and honor?

If so I have a character Wu Lin that I'd like to submit if its okay.

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I had it all planned out my dude :)

Flurry has a gift

A nice twist, Blueblood as a spy in the stonehoof ranks.

Why are Fall of Equestria stories always anthro stories?

....

The kirin stayed silent and hooked the two curves of her swords and began spinning the combined blades above her head, causing the metal to make a hum almost singing as she walked closer. The old caribou watched, throwing his shield up as the kirin swung the blades upward. He heard a slicing sound and saw her grab the handle of the connected sword returning to her original position giving an odd 'eye-smile.' The caribou was confused for a moment then, nothing he saw a trickle of red then nothing.

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Hehe... I love this story, and I love this, quite honestly, badass entrance.

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IDK... I think mostly because of weapons. I guess you could also go human, but at that point, I think it is just a little too real for some people.

If it's me on here, then patient is my middle name.

If it's me on here, then patient is my middle name.

Good to hear my friend :yay:

Nice to hear my dude! Just take as much time as you need!

Hope he’s well

The stonehooves really kicked the hornets nest this time.

the woken the sleeping Giant and filled it with a terrible resolve....

Hope I get to see my character but if not it’s fine just enjoy reading the story

The next chapter should be the resistance

Seems even the gods find the stonehooves unfit to be parents.

"If you're going to do it, then do it." Blueblood sighed. "But give this to 'him' after you do." The blonde stallion said, holding up a piece of paper and gold medallion, which was quickly taken from him as the blades pulled away. "When you get done, tell him I'm here and waiting." He didn't get a response, but he knew he was alone and grabbed a mug and filled it with ale. "May the creators have mercy on them," Blueblood grumbled, downing the drink.

Great to see Blueblood Being a Good guy in this world.Most FOE portray him being a Traitor and that predictable and boring

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Thanks, I didn't like him being the bad guy all the time. Yes, he is a dick in the episode we meet him, but I'm shooting for a different angle here. We'll see it a little later.

Absolutely epic my friend!

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