Huh? Why did you put archaic language in the list of... uhmn... wait... yeah, nevermind.

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It's totally my fetish. (It honestly kinda is, it's sexy! And I'm sad that the show had Luna drop it so quickly, it means you have to come up with excuses for her to revert to it!)

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And I did!

good story

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Thanks!

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both this one and one before it, though I do wonder what cadence, and celestia think about twilight and Lune bedroom actives.

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In the case of Celestia, as little as possible. In the case of Cadence, as much as she likes as long as she doesn't mention it to Shiny ever again, please.

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true but I have feeling Celestia is aware of what happening but not the everything ie she knew they doing it but think it twilight being submissive....

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Depends if they remembered the soundproofing spells on their room or not...

Good god damn SPArk! That was intense!

Seriously!

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He he he. Thanks!

Nothing sexier than good communication and consent!

Some stories make everything so perfect and orgasmic which is fine and dandy but this was a nice change of pace with real emotion and insecurities. The part where Twilight looks at pictures of slavery then fantasizes about doing that to Lune is particularly real as you know you those pictures shouldn't evoke such fantasies and yet it does.

Thanks for writing and sharing this story.

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You're very welcome.

I also love archaic language in both yours and iisaw's stories
About story itself...
I don't mind talking about sex and being open with people... but in comments I usually try to be mature and decent, not to antagonize people less open than me...

But this time I will make exception
This was DAMN HOT

With me being submissive person I find Sub/Dom and associated kinks like insults, objectification, bounds,master/servant and so on extremely exciting
Not hard S/M...no, but light play like crops yes

Definitely fav

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Yay! I am really glad you liked it.

A little disappointed in this one, but I'll admit that's entirely my fault. As a clop story, its a good story, but having just read Clair De Lune which I found thanks to the artwork announcement for this, I found this a let down, solely because of the difference in the two stories. But, as I said, seen on it's own merits as a clop story, tis quite an enjoyable romp. Hmm, how about I offer you something? Luna's dungeon (don't worry, it's only suggestive), which was envisioned as a Clocktower Story, but can easily stand on it's own. Maybe Lune needs a playspace?

Really interesting story an great clop

"I... oh sun and moon, Lune, I am so sorry! I'm so, so, so sorry! I don't know what got into me! I didn't mean to upset y-thee. Please don't be upset with me! I've been having these fantasies, but I didn't really mean it! Honestly! I'm so sorry!"

Remember what Celestia once told you:

"Aye. Not imagination alone, though. I have been bound before in the throes of passion." He gave Twilight a broad wink then. "'Tis one of the reasons why I favor this style of bed; it doth provide many convenient places to tie a rope." He gestured at the four-poster around them, a small smile lurking at the corner of his mouth as he did so.

Although I'm afraid I should say that if you want anything for yourself, Prince Lune, most of what I have here is not to alicorn scale. There isn't much demand for it.

Lune: "Damn you Tia!"

She pumped his cock faster, and with a sudden groan he came hard. She cupped her magic around the tip of his cock, feeling it twitch and spurt, cum spraying out into her magic in a startlingly large volume.

What did they do with the bubble afterwards? Sharing an drink?

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This was actually written before the "No Wrong Way To Fantasize" bit, interestingly enough. It took me a while to get it published. Thank you for your comments, btw. I'm very glad you seem to be enjoying it!

I almost seldomly will read a sequel when I gave up on the original (I'm sure it's a good story, it's just not for me) but I'm very glad I gave this one the benefit of the doubt! It's the little things like Twilight Initially being on the bottom before going 'Nope!' that really make the difference. Although it does make me wonder if that is something Lune would eventually want to do, and how Twilight would (be able to) handle it.

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Thanks for giving it a chance.

Oh... oh my. That... hit all the right spots, so to speak.
Should have been in bed an hour ago, and why is it so warm in here?

Ahem. Apart from that:

It was probably safe. Unless she started fantasizing about how sexy the fractions looked with their denominators lying below the numerators like that.

I died. XD

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Nerds are always the kinkiest, because they can think sexy about anything.

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It reminded me of The Study of a Winning Pony (from ch 8):

I could agree with her on Cloud Kicker being frustrating. I tried not to think of the phallic pastries, so very hard. I swear, if Cloud Kicker somehow managed to ruin books for me ... I could just imagine her opening up one of my books and pulling out a bookmark, then smirking at me as she slowly slid that bookmark in and out between its soft, yielding pages—

Aaargh! Now she's got me doing it to myself! It's like she's determined to ruin everything forever!