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Kalreas
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Kalreas
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Unforeseen Consequences.
910661
I suppose that would have been a fairly good title, I just didn't think about it too much.
Thank ye. Sorin
what... the... buck??????
this is indeed some of the most twisted and bucked up ever written
tentacular rape then getting eaten...
I read it. Now excuse me I have to go to...Do stuff or something... *Flees as far as possible.*
I will probably fap to this.
EDIT: I fapped and it was awesome. Seriously, your work is amazing.
910899
You are sick and twisted.
I like you. LOL.
Thank ye. Sorin
I think I'd rather read Cupcakes, Sweet Apple Massacre, and Trixie's Fun House for 3 weeks straight than read this ever again. You sir are very fucked up in the head
. I like that!
If I'm ever going to write a horror story I'm enlisting your help as co-author first.
910989
I thank you for your words! I cringed at 'Sweet Apple Massacre: Resolute'. That one was worse in my opinion, lol.
Maybe you will write a horror story one day. I wrote this because I was bored and feeling like writing something with a bunch of sickening details haha.
Thank ye. Sorin
I am still reading it, because I was distracted with endless distractions that distract me...
911060
Yet you comment that you are still reading, causing me to reply to you, just to distract you from my insanity further.
Good day sir. Sorin
911108 I may never finish this story, but I want to see why it got 7 dislikes. It looks cool so far.
Yet I am distracted as I have previously mentioned so I am unable to get past the first few paragraphs.
911127
You are soon to find out. I will let you carry on through the insanity my mind can create when forced into the dark pits of creativity.
*Evil laugh* Sorin
911137 My name's Sauron, not Sorin.
911144
It may be, but I'm just simply stating my name at the end of every comment.
My name is Sorin
And you are number four!
"Her strength not enough with her front hooves to pull herself up"
This makes no sense.
Still reading.
911254
I reward you with..
Thank ye. Sorin
"CONGRATULATIONS!" I have truly earned it
HELL YEA! I read all of it, no skipping =D!
But...
"
Seriously, I was looking in my mind for the most wrong, messed up stuff I was thinking to add to this, and I think it turned out pretty well. "
I could think of things more fucked up and interesting when I am not at my best, this felt a little generic.
First, it would have been tons better as a first pony fic, horror always works better that way.
Second, you have to look beyond the physical, pussy - anal - mouth gets old... right after Applejack. Try to torture each of them in creative ways. You could have the monster thing eat one of the mares from the inside. Also always try and make it certain that it is possbile for the main character to come victorious, giving either a surprising escape or a horrible failure with rape.
I think this has potential, I could help you if you like... Sorin'.
911290
... And I'm 15 years old. 
Well, I would have added all those further details, but you know what... I wrote this...
Anyways, thank you for your support and information! Really helps me. Sorin
911299 Refresh, I added more stuff.
911302
...
Lemme see here..
First: "The most painful that she felt overall, was the pain of the mouth tearing her mare-hood's outer flesh away, and digging through the insides, chewing whatever it could grab in the process, as the Pegasus fell unconscious for the last time.".
Second: "Shooting fear through her brain, racing against the creatures chasing her like she had the first time. She didn't get far, as the pain from her injured hooves stopped her dead in her tracks, as well as a wall stopping her path.
She looked back in time to have one of the new creatures slam into her, knocking her into the ground and breaking one of her rib bones, making her scream as she fell victim to the new creatures attacks.".
Does that cover the "giving either a surprising escape or a horrible failure with rape." kinda thing well enough? I personally believe so, seeing that this is the first messed up thing that I've actually physically WRITTEN where anyone can see it.
Thank ye. Sorin
Hey, I mean, halfway through the story you know that the six mares are basically fucked.
and I told you I was distracted, I kind of missed that sentence... a bit.
is it wrong that i felt no feelings throughout this?
i may have even enjoyed it
*nee-he-he-he*
sorry not one for vore but still good job cheers
yes i read through it but sadly i would not be able to clop to this.
I have...the weirdest boner right now.
912542
And apparently... You are not alone.
Good day sir. Sorin
910899
buck yea man! im right there with u brotha
The fact that this contains 6,666 words I take as VERY ironic.
I'm not even going to read this though.
917586
It's a fairly good idea to try to avoid this story as long as possible, because it is VERY sick and twisted. I can't remember WHAT I was going through in order to think about such horrible things to happen to these ponies. I was also fairly surprised that I got 6,666 words, haha.
Thank ye. Sorin
Tentacles....not even gonna continue
I came. Have a thumbs up, favorite and watch.
917880
One of the more interesting and random comments. Thank you for the thumbs up, favorite and watch! Helps me a lot. ((I used to never understand HOW it helped people, but now I kinda do.))
Thank ye! Sorin
911718
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Love your mind....
925416
You should see the story I'm working on right now... Dear Celestia the detail I'm wanting with the gore...
I'm sick and twisted, I know. I love it too. Sorin
910670I enjoyed this way to much... by celestia! I'm going to pony hell!
that was almost as horrifying as whats inside of my head. almost that is..............
Not sure if gusta.
Make this into a video like cupcakes,and the world falls onto their knees and begs for mercy.I cant read this again,i just cant.Excuse me,Im gonna throw up.
I've seen worse, and I've certainly imagined worse.
1451891 Yeah, I can see that. Besides, this was done when I was new with writing and my imagination was wacky.
I can imagine much deeper, much creepier and much more.. everything now.
I saw the notification of you commenting on this story and my reaction... "Crap, people still manage to find this.. thing?"
But yeah, I can certainly write/imagine a lot worse than this.
Thanks!
- Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire
1451925
Give an example (not challenging you here, just curious).
1451939 What I wrote here was expected, basic tentacle rape pretty much. Extremely basic.
I can now go and venture into any character I want and create something that I think is pretty cool.
Like Pinkie Pie fighting in her head with Pinkamena. ((Which I'll be writing about sometime soon.))
I can imagine her struggle of keeping her sanity, trying to stay her normal Pinkie self around her friends.
When really, Pinkamena is a whole other living entity in her mind, trying to gain control.
I've pretty much given up / abandoned the "Boom, here's the story and what happens." aspect of story writing.
I've really tried to improve on that. Taking subtle approaches, taking the time to detail what exactly is going on.. that kinda stuff.
So no more just throwing out any bland, rushing stories like this one with no real plot or story.
And as for the imagining worse part... I've read enough stories to convince me that what I wrote within this story is just basic and pointless.
As well as not really painful or anything else. I hope that covers everything for ya.
Thanks! - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire
1451984
This is mild for me, the bad stuff hasn't happened yet.
Also I put some of my thoughts into this thread as while back. I'd read that before chocolate frosting to get an idea of what to expect from what isn't finished yet.
I actually loved this.
If I was older, I'd sooo write something like this. Probably will when I get older.
Totally liking~~~
I feel a little sick at myself, honestly, that I enjoyed this as much as I did. But I did...
...And I'm not even sorry. XD
This would make a great camp fire story. Odd, I know...
*salutes you*
This is awesome. I tip my hat to you.
Nobody let the author any where near knives! Ok?
........