You'd be surprised at the emotions twenty-six letters can unearth
Nova Dawn has the power to part worlds, destroy continents and erase items from existence. Today, she tries to open a jar of peanuts.
The OCs presented in this story (and the general idea) is from OverlordNeon's art! Be sure to check it out!
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You know, it’s entirely possible to point out an error without being condescending in the process. Don’t get me wrong, you’re completely correct that it should be “pendant” here (”pendent”, incidentally, is a real word, it’s just not the correct one for this context), but pointing it out without the sarcasm would’ve been the polite way to do things
But since you decided to take the holier-than-thou approach, you could have at least done so with proper grammar yourself. The “y” in “yeah” should be capitalized, then you ought to have followed it with a comma because “yeah” in this context is being used as an introductory phrase. “pendent” and “pendant” should’ve both had quotation marks around them, which would show that you’re talking about the words themselves. And, of course, you’re supposed to end a sentence with an appropriate punctuation mark.
Ah ah what a twist (if I dare say ) ^^
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Heh, yup! Hope you enjoyed the story! :D
This story reminded me of one quote from Mythbusters - “I reject your reality and substitute my own.” Which is kinda what happened here several times XD
Also, that is one tough jar lol
Nova dawn is insanely adorkable and Dusk is a no fucks giving smart ass xD. I love it! More please!