Sweetie Belle is a grown pony. Rarity just said that last Saturday in Canada. And if the CMC aren't adults, then why is half of Ponyville turning to them for career counseling. This looks like a job for the Council of Friendship...
This story is a sequel to The Cute One, but you really don't need to read one to understand the other. 
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This is glorious.
It's looking to be pretty good so far. Just a couple of complaints: some minor proofreading errors and, since it looks to be a sequel to The Cute One, you should probably link it in the long description.
Other than that, it's looking good.
Yep sounds about right
Funny stuff. I'd guess the CMCs are around 13. Definitely not legal adults, but old enough to be called "young mares." Spikes probably like 16, but still physically a baby while mentally 16. This is all just headcanons though. I lulled more than I should have at
, foal labor jokes, and poor Fluttershy bringing up very good questions regarding Scootaloo's situation.
So... if Sweetie mostly likes Spike for his connections, but Spike respects that, is that a terrible relationship or a great one waiting to happen.
Either way I like the absurd treatment of headcanons here.
Uh, sure...
8164399 Sorry about that. It's a silly little story, I hope you enjoy it more moving forward.
First part a statement not a question.
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Y'all
Y'all
Oh boy Spike, are you in for it now.
paw
-ustard apple pie.
??...as in filly?? or Twily?
Wutda? Have no idea what that refers to. "I love the smell of polyurethane in the morning"
Used to think Button Mash was a euphemism for gaming, now I think it's conspiracy blogging on the interthatch!
you're (x2)
someone start a global catastrophe, this is insane
Scootaloo wants Spike so she won't get lonely, Sweetie Belle originally wants Spike for social connections but truthfully she wants to get it on with him, but what's Apple Bloom reasons to get with Spike?
Polygamy's legal in Equestria right? Cause not only the CMC want Spike but Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon also love him too.
we got FIW. ohhh boy
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Ember declared them all adult dragons in the previous thingy, and I think The Council probably declared them adult ponies, so ..
Would they be legally adults if they were humans where you live? Presumably no, or you would probably not have said that.
Are they legally adults in this story? Yes, even though they really shouldn't be.
Very fast paced and very few narrative, but the humor is good and very focused on the dialogue. Thumbs up.
You are a genius.
Please, don't stop.
Totally loving this!
That totally IS how friendship works! That FRIENDSHIP WITH BENEFITS!
Yay to all the shippings in the story! Your great at this type of story telling!
Great job and welcome back to this fun story!
(laughs) Well laid!!!!
Add mind control and polymorph into the multi-shades of hay collection.
I feel like this should be its own standalone short.
But funny, yes.
Hahahahahaha! This chapter was so much fun!
Say it with me, "Hentai Manga"!
I love how all the mares act so silly.. its excellent :D !!!
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Then I suddenly ran out of "cute" because it turns out I only had so much.
Glad you've liked it. Funny thing, I wrote this series because a friend of mine dared me to write a "cute" story.