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...what the hell is wrong with you?
No... Just no.
I'm imagining doing all this stuff to honey bun
Your story has been removed from the "Parodies" folder of the Alternative Conversion Bureau as this is not a parody. Indeed, it is barely coherent mass of words that serves no purpose except to mock The Conversion Bureau: The Other Side of the Spectrum and to perhaps sate the prurient interests of a few.
... I'm sorry to say, this is pretty much as I expected, except that somehow it's even crueler.
I'm so desensitized I can't even bring myself to feel offended.
This is one of those....special kind of stories. The ones that leave you feeling dumber for having read it and a sadness that you will never get the time you spent reading it back.
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Using my mind to write stuff and publish it. And... that's about it
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Not informative. Deleted.
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Not informative. Deleted.
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I'd like to see it as a fic.
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It's cool. Rules are rules.
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I like to exceed expectations!
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And that is really nice!
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Not informative. Deleted.
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Well, at least you read it. For me, it's really nice!
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Tried to make them not breaking rules about ratings.
Not even going to read it. Sounds like pure garbage by the summary and profile fic alone.
Are you doing this to mock the other story?
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I'm doing this because I strongly disagree with the other fic, and this is my... well, fantasy. As in, something I'd have loved to see to happen in the fic's universe. I don't really like mocking.
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For killing evil ponies? And good ponies killing evil ponies?
Whatever man.
Haha, everyone shitting on cause it sucks.
There, informative.
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'Evil ponies' is like 'hot snow' -- non-existent.
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Meh, whatever. I did what I wanted and I don't care about anything else.
This should be featured. It's like the Fimfiction equivelant of the offended page of Encyclopedia Dramatically.
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Have no idea what it is, but I'd love to!
I'm starting to wonder if this author has anything resembling a soul.
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A what now?
8153567 Its basically a wiki for internet drama. Also, just a heads up, but deleting comments is generally a bad idea, unless said comments devolved into just say, two guys, arguing about which corn-based meals are better
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Nah, I just delete what doesn't have any information that could be used as a reference. Basically, just something that has no meaning. I never delete comments with coherent phrases.
I represent Group 22, The Conversion Bureau, and I have not read your story, because it has all of the warnings of not only a bad story, but a toxic story. I have removed it from the submissions folder, but you may be able to convince me to read it for potential approval if you can explain to me what this story is and why it should be added to TCB.
I don't usually downvote stories, but when I do, it's because they're really tasteless.
I should imagine this was written to shock readers and titillate the author's love for the comments that follow.
So, no real effort in writing here, other than to upset people.
Congrats.
I don't know what I just read, and I don't think I want to know.
Props to the author on this one, you perfectly executed this writing experiment (not story) and got overwhelming results.
I tip my hat at you sir, upvoted.
ummmmmm nice story
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Thanks for writing! And that's okay, rules are rules. Have a nice day!
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Nah, comments are just a small bonus.
I wrote ot, because I hated the original story, its premise and outstanding hypocrisy, and I wanted to fix it, somehow, even it's too late, now. But better late than never, huh?
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It's a fanfic.
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Thank you!
Strange... maybe I don't understand something, but what's with the dislikes? I thought I tried hard to keep my grammar and spelling on a decent level.
8155155 In layman's terms? Most people are human and don't like anti-human biased stuff, and this is written to seemingly be nothing but torture porn hate fic with no real story beyond "haha *** you". Which, Y'know, if that is really what you want to write, go for it, but it isn't something anyone outside of yourself would really want to read. Like, ever. People tend to prefer balanced, even storytelling as a general rule, maybe with a side note in not insulting the species who will be reading.
As ever, no hostility, just saying. Peace and all that.
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Oh, right, I forgot. It happened to me before, on the other site, with similiar story. Apparently, bad guys (humans) don't like to be called bad guys, and they react badly to it.
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Over the top spite fics don't tend to do well on most sites. Also, you didn't portray the humans and prohuman ponies as the bad guys, you portrayed them as the victims of a deranged psychopath. The spelling and grammar does seem mostly on point, though it's hard to tell when you can't look at the text for more than 5 seconds at a time.
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Compared to how these human and prohuman ponies were portrayed, she was the sanest person in the fic. And compared to what they did, her actions were a tender massage.
(1) it seems that you don't understand how "tying someone to a wall works". You can use chains, because if you actually knew the English language you'd know that you nail to a wall if you're going to use plates. Learn to English.
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(1) ah, I remember the days in which I wrote horribly stories with terrible grammar (basically walls of text), but at least I know how to spot when an author never did any research. What would you think it will happen to an eye if it can't blink? It will dry up. And if it dries up, then the cones and canes die. And if the cones and canes die, then I go blind. And if this character has his eyelids fixed (which also means they were injured or hurt in some way) it will render his eyeballs dried up. In laymans terms? Marcus is blind.
(1) why did you ever believe that a coma has to go there? I know you didn't researched anything, but at least try to write with eloquence. Or is it to hard for someone who clearly hates human kind (using as a reference your, extremely down voted stories, and the fact that you never make any story in which humans are either good or evil.
(1) Equus Prime. . . really? Is that the limit to your small, fortunately pitiful, imagination? Since it's quite obvious, then I feel sorry for you and your child like creativity.
(2) you do know that Twilight can teleport. . . right? And since you didn't write that Twilight is wearing a magic suppressor ring, she still has access to her magic. . . right? And that means that Twilight and escape from there. . . right? Good god, you don't pay attention to any details do you?
(3) it's good to know that, even though they are going to be humiliated, or worse, they still fix any and all fractures, cuts, bruises and injuries. How nice of them.
(Error) holded is a typo, it's either hold or held. And the word you are looking for is nailed.
(1) despite the fact that this entire fanfic is based around how much you clearly hate human kind, you are still going to use terms only applicable to humans? Hypocrite much?
(2) a filly is a female horse infant. Are there children watching this?
(1) the average weight of a pony (depending on the breed, feeding, age and muscular development) can vary between 440-880 pounds (200-400kg). So Honey Bun is capable of, not only lifting, but throwing something that weighs as much as she does without any difficulty? What is she, a super soldier?
(1) the only being capable of doing something like that is Discord. I mean, something that no one knows what it is has proofed into existence. How lazy are you? Why didn't you write that Honey Bun shoved something into Marcus's mouth in order to keep him quiet.
(1) I know you are a horrible author who writes torture porn, but at least put some effort in your writing.
(1) the spinal column, along with the brain, are part of the CNS (central nervous system), which means the fact that they dictate whether someone can feel pain or not. If the spinal column was broken, then Cheerilee can't feel anything. It's basic biology/anatomy.
(1) roar me an oinking. If you manage to roar me an oinking then I'll give you one hundred dollars.
(1) when an eye gets filled with blood, it is incapable of filtering light. And even if it could filter light (which would stimulate the optic nerve and inform the brain what is in front), it would be very painful. Another thing, swines only get aroused whenever they can smell the secretions of hormones the female secretes whenever it is mating season. The only hormones that Cheerilee is secreting are endorphins, cortisol and adrenaline.
(2) "he ran to her, with more than clear intentions"
(1) equines can not puke/through up. Their physiology prevents this from happening.
(2) two problems here. The first is that all of her pain receptors that are connected to the brain (which are all of them) are now disconnected, which means that Cheerilee can only feel her eyes move. Second problem, Honey Bun destroyed her spinal column. That means that the bone fragments will travel with enough speed to puncture and destroy the soft tissue around that area. Cheerilee would bled internally to death in a matter of minutes.
(1) so Honey Bun shoved the control into his mouth? How would that allow him to chew his food, let alone swallow it.
(2) move it. The jaw, in case you actually believe that different parts of the body have a gender, is an it, move it so he would chew
(3) Honey Bun doesn't have fingers. How can a being, a pony in this case, control the most versatile muscle in the entire body while there is a control shoved in his mouth. Another thing, there are no "special spots" that would allow Honey Bun to control his swallowing, want to know why? Because she has hooves and not hands. Also because such thing doesn't exist
(4) to activate the swallowing reflex.
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Too many mistakes on your sides to point them all out, so I'll pass.
But thanks for influencing me to practice and write more than I intended to.
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My sides? All the mistakes I've written are yours and yours only.
And what do you mean you'll pass? If this is how you are when others are trying to help you out, by pointing your mistakes, then I can't fathom to mimagine how you treat people you actually dislike.
I think that you may legitimately have a case of doublethink.
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You misspelled 'imagine'
And when you try to help someone, try not to use snide comments, please. It's not nice.
Like I said, I'm grateful for pointing out spelling and grammar, and I'm going to practice to improve my writing.
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How so?
8259108
You constantly go on about the moral superiority of ponies over humans when you show them doing horrendous, despicable shit and saying terrible things.
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I see no contradiction here. You?
How can they claim the moral high ground when they commit reprehensible acts and constantly speak like they are nazis wiping out the lesser races?
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Because you use human moral. Morals vary greatly.
Oh my fucking god you're a moral relativist aren't you?
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What is that 'moral relativist' nonesense?
A moral relativist is someone who believes that different societies hold different morals; this can further extended into thinking that in an argument between said morals there is no objective "right or wrong". You seem to think that because the ponies have different morals it's fine for them to act out on them, while shaming humans for doing the same thing; hence the double think.
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But there is no objective 'right' and 'wrong'! E=MC^2 is objective. 2X2=4 is objective. But not moral -- it's purely the matter of philosophical/ethical/political/whatever debate. Look at different countries, look at their morals. Same-sex marriage is legal in USA and falls under death penalty in Nigeria or Sudan. Humans have so many double, trible and quadriple standarts that blaming ponies for something like this is just not right. As in, wrong.
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Wait, you're holding the entirety of humanity accountable for the actions of certain ethnic/national groups?
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No, I'm holding every single human accountable for things each of them does.