A long road to Equestria

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StormLuna

StormLuna #1 · Aug 3rd, 2017 · 6 · ·

Ok, you killed you mother and brother just to get to Equestria. Here is the thing, I don't think Celestia would allow a murderer into Equestria to live with her subjects....the closest you'd get is Tartarus.

And I'll be honest, this seems more like something you would write in a journal....it isn't really a story. Like your other stories, this one gets a thumbs down.

Boof Man

Boof Man #2 · Aug 3rd, 2017 · 3 · ·

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The "Kill your family, and then kill yourself for peace" path was kinda stupid, and why would someone against such a thing ask another to do so for "peace"?

This story I guess was interesting, I just wish the similar realities of city life didn't really exist because it's saddening.

StormLuna

StormLuna #3 · Aug 3rd, 2017 · 5 · ·

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The "Kill your family, and then kill yourself for peace" path was kinda stupid, and why would someone against such a thing ask another to do so for "peace"?

That would be extremely OOC for Celestia. The Celestia we all know and love would say one of two things.....either try and grow close with your family OR she would just throw the portal to Equestria open and say "we welcome you with open hooves." Ok, I know that was Starlight's line up in Our Town but it would at least be something similar. But she certainly wouldn't allow a murderer into Equestria.

Yeah city life can be a bitch but country life isn't much better for those who don't exactly fit in.

GrayOnBlue

GrayOnBlue #4 · Aug 4th, 2017 · · 8 ·

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They are humans, remember? And Celestia had no problems with allow ponies to commit a genocide, in my other stories.
Besides, she didn't say 'kill your family'. She said 'sever the bloody links'. It could've been interpreted in a broad variety of ways.

GrayOnBlue

GrayOnBlue #5 · Aug 4th, 2017 · · 8 ·

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To be honest, sometimes I think that I'd have done the same. Even if I'm not getting Equestria. Death would've been a reward, in this case. And not only my death.

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