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Shock Storm


So it seems the way to learning how to write is to read about ponies. Well, if I have to....

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Princess Cadance is many things: A loving pony, a caring mother, a supportive wife, and a wise ruler. What she's not, however, is patient. When Shining Armor takes his time with joining her for a dinner they planned, Cadance decides that she's not going to sit around bored out of her mind. Instead, she's going to entertain herself in the only way she knows how.

With her imagination.

...In hindsight, maybe she should've just ordered take out.

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Comments ( 14 )

Cady's got quite the imagination. She puts the Pink One to shame.

i like how the picture basically screams:"who? me?"

“Who is taking care of Flurry right now? I could’ve sworn Sunburst was taking care of him today, but Sunburst is visiting Starlight in Ponyville so…”

her - if I'm reading this correctly?

8059597 Good catch! To be honest, I'm not sure how that got there. Must've had Sunburst on the brain when I wrote that paragrapj. :twilightsheepish: Thanks!


8059396 I'm fairly sure that Cadance's entire life revolves around asking that question. Poor girl is so confused.

Actually, now that I think of it, most pictures of her during the Equestrian Games show her as confused or exhausted. Bet that was an exciting day for her.


8059100 You gotta watch out for those Pink mares. No clue what they'll do if you leave them alone long enough.

8059690 It's always the pink ones.

Those impertinent plates and cups! How dare they speak to a princess in such a manner!

Shining’s eyes were still on the crystalline remains. Cadance could see the gears turning in his mind, likely trying to decide whether or not he actually wanted to know whatever happened here.

And whether he should keep the armor on.
"Dear? Did you have another one of your 'episodes'?"

Kek. This is pretty funny. 10/10, would read again.

I fear that Cadence is more like Flurry than we thought. She's goo-goo-going ga-ga-gaga!

This seems weirdly authentic. Nice to see a story that just sits down and has fun for a while.

Check your formatting, there's a point midway through where you've got several consecutive paragraphs boldfaced, and that doesn't seem like your intent.

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Thank you both~ I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for mentioning the boldface. For some reason, my format had every paragraph end with [ b ] and begin with [/ b ], which for some reason would cancel each other out except for that part in the middle...I have no clue how it got like that, but it's fixed now, so thank you very much~

She cleared her throat, smiling proudly as she waved a hoof over her plate. “As everypony can see, what I’ve having tonight is a hayburger.”

Should probably be "I'm", not "I've".

Anyway, this was a cute one-shot. I think plate was my favorite character.

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Plate was a backstabber. >:/

If Cadance is this bored she should hang out with Discord.

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