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Foals Errand


Guess whose back?!

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After seeing how exhausted her niece and nephew in law are, Celestia urges them to take a short vacation, and leave baby Flurry Heart in her capable hooves.


(This site needs an adorable tag)

Edited by Stahl. Pre-read by many.

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Poor Celestia has no idea the trouble that awaits her :rainbowlaugh:

You do realize you're going to have to provide sequels and/or side stories to this, right? There are many options for alicorn foal trouble. :pinkiecrazy:

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....I just wrote myself into a new series didn't I?:twilightoops:

6886459 You just might have. We'll have to see what kind of trouble Flurry Heart stirs up in the show, but until then, it looks like YOU'RE the provider! :rainbowwild:

6886357 Whaddaya talk? The story's marked complete :trixieshiftright:

6886459 I may have or may not have thought about this while I was editing it... Maybe I should've said something :derpytongue2:

6886459 From Tiny Twilight to Tiny Flurry Heart

Can you imagine Princess Flurry Heart in the Mother universe?

You fool! What have you done??
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...Moar plz.

D'awwwwww cute!

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Oh thank you my loving Editor! I hope you know any follow up you'll be editing!

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*sigh* It is super mega adorables and she is so fun to write!

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Soon I imagine fairly soon.

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Thank you ^^ shes fun to write!

Una

Very cute! I could really see more of this story.

This is adorable. The last scene reminds me of a little fan comic where twilight does much the same to a certain young alicorn filly.

6887164 lol hope you have fun with it along with all the other storys you are working on

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*looks at the long list* yep, these stories are easy to get out don't have to worry about keeping everything connected like with others.

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? I don't think i've ever seen that one before. Link?

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You will be, seems i've written myself into another series *chuckles*

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Trying to find it currently

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Found the comic, but after reading it again ((been awhile since I saw it). It wasn't an alicorn it was cake's unicorn foal *giggles* still cute and funny.

http://beavernator.deviantart.com/art/At-World-s-End-434571056

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Oh my that is very adorable! and I was actually thinking of Pumpkin Cake when I wrote that bit. This part to be exact.

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Mother
Starving
What if Gods Were One of Us
Twilight Moon
All of these have a certain way they have to be written in a certain order.
Stories like this? And Tiny Twilight Tales don't have that problem making them a bit easier to write. Sorry its 2 am for me my brain is rebelling.:facehoof:

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That's an adorable scene

"Om nom nom"

And thus a new Series begins.

6887165 Pound and Pumpkin Cake vs Princess Flurry Heart

Let the battle of cute begin...

Season six spoilers...

I cannot tell if this real or not.

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the baby is everything else is cute fic.

Very adorable. :heart:

Season 6 hasn't begun yet and stories of this super adorable filly are being written! I just love how fas this fandom is :pinkiehappy: Definitely gonna give this a read :twilightsmile:

sooooooooooooooo cute :rainbowkiss:

“No, no, Flurry Heart. The sun is not a toy.”

HNNNG.

You could easily expand this story if you wanted, but if you leave it as is then it's still fine.

Nice work.

adorable tag

Silly author, adorable is neither a genera nor an element of narrative so I would have to say nopers.:raritywink:

Although it is an emotion to be evoked in particular, and I do have a bookshelf dedicated to that specifically, so maybe you are up to something.:trollestia:

~Leonzilla

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If comedy is a genre, meant to evoke laughter and giddiness, then precocity could easily be a genre, meant to evoke empathetic feelings of maternity/paternity, joy and pride.

Entertainment is the use of medium to evoke a response, at its basest level, after all. "D'aawwwwww" and warm fuzzy feelings are responses.

Umm... Shining Armour and Cadance's foal is named Skyla... So this is not even real spoilers...

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Fraid not, Was announced a few days ago her name is Flurry Heart.

Quote from Yahoo on new Crystal Empire playset:

My Little Pony Explore Equestria Crystal Empire playset (Photo: Hasbro)
The two-story castle set will retail for $39.99 and comes with Princess Cadance and Baby Flurry Heart figures, dress, tiara, earrings, comb, and other themed accessories. It features a rotating throne — a necessity for any true princess, obviously — and spinning crystal closets. Plus, a little press on the heart and the floor lights up with cutie marks!

6888029 Meybe it would fit as a sub-genera of either the slice of life or the sensual fiction genera?:twilightblush:

~Leonzilla

It's kind of pointless marking for spoilers when the spoiler is IN the story picture. If anything if it didn't say spoiler I would've just assumed it was some horrendous OC lol

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Welps I did my job then ^^ cuz shes not.

Huh, the world didn't end yet? Well, just wait until she hits two then. I liked that it stayed sweet, and not quite so much "insanely powerful baby breaks things", at least not yet. Wow, her name (and the preview clip) has barely been announced, and already a fic, guess I shouldn't be surprised. Nice short story.

I don't care that she's an alicorn/excuse for Hasbro to sell more toys. She is ridiculously adorable, and I am an instant fan. But I'm still not buying their toys. :rainbowwild:

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