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Penn Hooven


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Celestia has much on her plate. Foreign Diplomats to please, a Nation to run, and little ponies to keep happy and safe. It would help if she could rely on her sister, however Luna's archaic speaking keeps her from holding court as almost no one can understand a word she says.

It's high time Celestia did something about that.

(Commissioned piece for Dusty_Books)

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Comments ( 11 )

Aside from a few errors, an interesting premise.

Heh. I'm always up for Troll Queen Luna.

One quibble: to keep things properly Pun-ishing, shouldn't it be Shakespur or some other Equine hock-slapper?

Great to see Trollestia on the receiving end for once.

7948823 Luna Trolulululululululul'd :trollestia:

Okay, I didn't expect that. Good Story!

...Ugh. I'm lost here.
This was funny as hell, I'll definitely give you that. But the errors... oh God, the errors. Even if Luna was trolling Celestia with what's actually called Modern English (I kid you not, that's what we think of as 'Shakespearean English' is called—look it up), it was totally mangled, enough that Celestia should have caught on if Luna was speaking that way intentionally. I know that ruins the whole premise of the story, but... ugh.
Not bad enough for a downvote, but enough that I can't in good conscience upvote. Sorry. But again, definitely funny.

7984620 Eh, I'll take that as a complement. Nothing's perfect, and this comes from me having fun with others by spouting random things that sound like Shakespeare stuff, only to have them ask what did I just say, or give the "ooookaaaaay?"

As for error, I know I've got them, but it's hard for me to find them, and I'm a bit too impatient to find and wait for an editor to go through it. It's a character flaw in me.

Wooooow. I did NOT see that ending coming! HILARIOUS!

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