• Member Since 29th Aug, 2013
  • offline last seen Jan 4th, 2020

Berry Delight


my smile met my eyes once.... but they didn't get along.

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Takes place after Gauntlet of Fire

Twilight invites Celestia and Luna for a do-over on their get together, and everything is perfectly fine.

....At least, things would be, if the princesses weren't acting so..... strange.

What is going on?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

Okay that put a smile on my face congrats my good pony you have a very funny story here

8066998 Thank you! Makes me happy knowing my crazy ideas bring smiles to others :pinkiesmile::yay:

8067115 you are more then welcome :twilightsmile:

Well Discord, you were pretty predictable here. Except that ending :rainbowlaugh: Simple and straightforward story, but I like the jokes you put there. Have an upvote :twilightsmile:
One thing I noticed. Ellipsis, the puncuation mark (...) should be consisting of three dots, not four.

I am the sun!


Litterally, in some cases:trollestia:

8627347 i didn't really feel there was any more to be said. And sometimes it's better to cut something short than to let it drag out for too long. Did you at least enjoy it?

8813621 Yeah, i kinda forgot about that one at the time. However, it's not really a story about the site or users, just a fun little reference joke, so, i think it's ok? :applecry:

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