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Inner me: Yes Yes oh, fan fiction gods. I am not worthy of this ship.
Outer me: It's nice
Yes, more of my fave duo.
Sombra x Discord
How come no one haven't done anything like this before?
Incomplete
Hope this doesn't become another interesting fic that will never be completed. Those seems to be quite common here.
8045157 I don't know, because it's a very obscure pairing, I suppose? All I know is; I ship it like FedEx. :D
I'm working on the next chapter now, I've got most of it already written, it just needs formatting and padding out in a few places!
8043580 Yay! :D Sombracord ftw!
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Inner me: YAYYYYY SOMEONE LIKES IT!
Outer me: YAYYYYY SOMEONE LIKES IT!!
I have no composure, lol. XD
is this a love story between a dark emperor and an elder chaos god
count me in
Nice
Are you hinting at something here? Hmmm
i was hoping the changeling tag meant more than "standard changeling bad guys" but i guess we'll see.
8094451 sneak preview: There's gonna be a good changling, who has a change of heart~
8094471 Yay~ good buggies are best buggies
There are too many exclamation points in the narration! When you're deep inside a character POV, if they are a very excitable character, it'd be OK! Like if your main character was Pinkie Pie! But Sombra is not that excitable! And you're writing more from third person omniscient or third person sigma anyway! (Third person sigma is when you frequently change whose POV you are in!)
Also... it is probably... a good idea... to not have quite so many ellipses...
But mostly tone down the exclamation points!
Good story, though.
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First up, thanks for telling me this. I honestly hadn't noticed it, I guess it is reflecting my own excitement as I write. When I have a free day ill endeavour to go over the chapters and tidy them up.
Second up;
Yay, thank you!
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Is the next chapter coming along alright?
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It'll be up tomorrow, providing i dont get delayed! ^^
I think you messed up the day numbering there.
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Oops! Thanks for telling me ^_^ it's fixed now~
Squeee!!!!! I won't to draw prince Loki now!!!!
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Thanks!
I bet he'd look adorable in your style! ^_^ I've tried drawing him but haven't successfully done it yet... I just can't bring the description to life.
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When are you hoping to release the next chapter?
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Hopefully in the next week or so. I was delayed due to severe sickness, I've only, in the last two days, been able to sit at my computer!
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Is the stays on the chapter okay?
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I'm making progress, just had family and technical issues going on, which means less time spent at home writing...but I'll work as fast as I can! ^_^
PIXEL SPARK! Is Radiant Hope Gonna pop up?
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She isn't, while this does use elements of the comics, she isn't in it.
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Haven't heard from you in a while, is the next chapter doing okay?
Being Sombra's mother would make Umbra Loki's Grandmother.
Assuming the sign didn't disappear once Discord left, that's going to be an interesting find for some random Pegasus.
I think Loki and Flurry Heart will be a CUTE couple
I was nearing the end of the first story and starting to feel down about leaving the world you had made... So I had to check to see what other stories you had written. I found out I didn't have to leave at all!!! Also the shipping I felt the whole way through, to have it come to light gah pure joy!
Perfect....wow
Oh but... Now what happens?? This was such a great second part to their story! I love how with both your stories you have one small adventure tie up and yet lead into the next part. The feel of your fics is wonderful and keeps you wanting to read to see what's coming. The imagination this fic has is second to none I love how you have created your own world so to speak, inside the lore that already exists. I hope you are still writing and haven't lost that spark because you are very good!
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I’m so glad you’ve enjoyed it so far, I’m hoping I’ll be able to write again soon. Mostly it’s been a mix of new job and ill health, but there is one more chapter planned for this, to wrap up the family saga. ^_^ and other things...
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Is everything going alright with the next chapter?
Yes!!!! A sequel
Oh that made me laught hard.
It is a reference to the Simpsons?
This ship give me life. I enjed every single línea of Discord