• Member Since 15th Sep, 2014
  • offline last seen Dec 7th, 2022

Pixel_Spark


I write stories of hope, redemption, love and being a dingus. That last one is just me...

Comments ( 40 )

Inner me: Yes Yes oh, fan fiction gods. I am not worthy of this ship.

Outer me: It's nice

Yes, more of my fave duo. :heart:

Sombra x Discord
How come no one haven't done anything like this before?

Incomplete
Hope this doesn't become another interesting fic that will never be completed. Those seems to be quite common here.

8045157 I don't know, because it's a very obscure pairing, I suppose? All I know is; I ship it like FedEx. :D

I'm working on the next chapter now, I've got most of it already written, it just needs formatting and padding out in a few places!

8043580 Yay! :D Sombracord ftw!

8043406

Inner me: YAYYYYY SOMEONE LIKES IT!

Outer me: YAYYYYY SOMEONE LIKES IT!!

I have no composure, lol. XD

is this a love story between a dark emperor and an elder chaos god
count me in

he HAD a colt-friend, yet he'd stood there fantasizing about the ruler of the Umbrum empire ploughing him.

Are you hinting at something here? Hmmm

i was hoping the changeling tag meant more than "standard changeling bad guys" but i guess we'll see.

8094451 sneak preview: There's gonna be a good changling, who has a change of heart~

8094471 Yay~ good buggies are best buggies

There are too many exclamation points in the narration! When you're deep inside a character POV, if they are a very excitable character, it'd be OK! Like if your main character was Pinkie Pie! But Sombra is not that excitable! And you're writing more from third person omniscient or third person sigma anyway! (Third person sigma is when you frequently change whose POV you are in!)

Also... it is probably... a good idea... to not have quite so many ellipses...

But mostly tone down the exclamation points!

Good story, though.

8095823

First up, thanks for telling me this. :twilightsmile: I honestly hadn't noticed it, I guess it is reflecting my own excitement as I write. When I have a free day ill endeavour to go over the chapters and tidy them up.


Second up;

Good story, though

Yay, thank you! :heart:

8095976
Is the next chapter coming along alright?

8274063
It'll be up tomorrow, providing i dont get delayed! ^^

Day 30: The Yak Prince, Rutherford, very kindly sent over a hoof-carved wooden crib. Its sturdy enough, he says, to withstand even the most boisterous child. I have written to him, thanking him for his generosity, I love it. Its carved with images from Yak fairytales, so that the little one might feed his or her imagination.

I wonder, which will it be? Boy or Girl? Whatever the outcome is, I want them to be the happiest they can be? I want to teach them about both my kind and Sombra's.

Day 28: More gifts are arriving en masse. A big box from Ponyville, no need to guess who that’s from, and one from Canterlot! Celestia and Luna sent a sun-themed mobile and a moon themed blanket. They’re beautiful, they feel lie the softest silk.

I think you messed up the day numbering there.

8312080
Oops! Thanks for telling me ^_^ it's fixed now~

Squeee!!!!! I won't to draw prince Loki now!!!!

8315499
Thanks!
I bet he'd look adorable in your style! ^_^ I've tried drawing him but haven't successfully done it yet... I just can't bring the description to life.

8315944
When are you hoping to release the next chapter?

8370632
Hopefully in the next week or so. I was delayed due to severe sickness, I've only, in the last two days, been able to sit at my computer!

8370715
Is the stays on the chapter okay?

8388391
I'm making progress, just had family and technical issues going on, which means less time spent at home writing...but I'll work as fast as I can! ^_^

PIXEL SPARK! Is Radiant Hope Gonna pop up?

8442920
She isn't, while this does use elements of the comics, she isn't in it.

8442949
Haven't heard from you in a while, is the next chapter doing okay?

auntie Umbra?

Being Sombra's mother would make Umbra Loki's Grandmother.

"Guess this one's way off the mark?" Discord joked feebly, indicating a sign simply reading "nice arse".

Another moderately offended look from the clone.

"Probably never find a use for that sign!" Discord sighed and tossed it over his head where it lodged in the side of a cloud.

Assuming the sign didn't disappear once Discord left, that's going to be an interesting find for some random Pegasus.

I think Loki and Flurry Heart will be a CUTE couple :heart:

Comment posted by Lyife deleted Jul 11th, 2018

I was nearing the end of the first story and starting to feel down about leaving the world you had made... So I had to check to see what other stories you had written. I found out I didn't have to leave at all!!! Also the shipping I felt the whole way through, to have it come to light gah pure joy!

Oh but... Now what happens?? This was such a great second part to their story! I love how with both your stories you have one small adventure tie up and yet lead into the next part. The feel of your fics is wonderful and keeps you wanting to read to see what's coming. The imagination this fic has is second to none I love how you have created your own world so to speak, inside the lore that already exists. I hope you are still writing and haven't lost that spark because you are very good!

9049796
I’m so glad you’ve enjoyed it so far, I’m hoping I’ll be able to write again soon. Mostly it’s been a mix of new job and ill health, but there is one more chapter planned for this, to wrap up the family saga. ^_^ and other things...

9053449
Is everything going alright with the next chapter?

"Estúpida Sombra sexy ..."

Oh that made me laught hard.
It is a reference to the Simpsons?

This ship give me life. I enjed every single línea of Discord

Login or register to comment