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InvertedAxis


This is an alt account for posting smut but all I will say is that I am a carbon based intelligent organism of earthly origin, made mostly of water.

Comments ( 20 )

Does this count as tentical porn??? :derpyderp2:

This is my fetish~

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Well, we have tentacles and we have porn. However, there is not any Japanese so the tentacle porn test returned inconclusive. We may have to send it to the world's top tentaclepornologists for an accurate answer.

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Or are you this fetish's person? Who's to say.

thats actually pretty good. With this amount of clop put into one single chapter, it doesnt even feel repetetive like most of the clopfics with huge word count tend to be

Your fetish list doesn't cover up that last one, you should probably fix that.
This looks good. Will read later.

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Yeah, I like to be gratuitous when it comes to details. I have read some very good subtle and artsy erotica but I just can't match that in shear style. If I can't do subtlety, might as well do gratuity.

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I know and it bugs the hell out of me, but if you could see the page for entering the long description you would see that the spoiler tag includes the whole list. I have no freaking idea why this bug is happening.

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First off, maybe it's because impregnation is on a different line than the rest of the list. If you can edit the description, maybe just do it manually? I've also seen lists where each item is individually covered and the spaces and commas between them aren't.

Oh, and this was really good, other than some editing mistakes. If you say that the other tentacle story is even better, then I'm definitely interested.

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made her nervous,but as

Space after comma

alicorn, but she had gotten

Don't need the word "but".

modestly sized rod and slowly

Just call it a phallus. I've got this weird mental image of a metal rod and it's just...*shudder*.

Oh goddess, that felt good

Add the comma

Twilight loved having Spike around, but sometimes it made it hard to take care of her needs.

Don't forget that period at the very end.

preferred something shallower. She made her way

Change the period to a comma, and change "She" to "she".

other carnivorous plant.

Switch the period to a question mark.

needed whatever was at the center of that flower

Add a period.

prey was ready , the

Take out that first space.

enough to cause her to go into huge orgasm.

"into a huge orgasm."

Acquiescing to her need, tentacle gently

"the tentacle"

the Tentacle in her pussy

Lowercase tentacle

as washing her vagin with a fresh coat of liquid, causing a renewed, stronger burning. As the Tentacle in her pussy

*vagina and lowercase tentacle

Fetish Activated.
It would be cool if Celestia or Luna found Twilight like this, tried to save her, and ended up in the exact situation. But hey, author did a fantastic job, and I'm fine with what's here! :twilightsmile:

Very nice! Love me some pheromone play!

This was a rather good story. So you really don't have to worry about it! :pinkiesmile:

I certainly wouldn't mind to read more things like that in the future! :yay:

Better follow you, so that I see immediately when you have some nice clop up again! :moustache:

Looks amazing, can't wait to read it. Is the pic the full version or do you have a source link?

So, is this foalcon? Saw the bit about it being written before the other story, which is foalcon. I love tentacles and twilight, but don't like foalcon.

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No, Twilight is in her princess form here, most definitely in her twenties as far as I am concerned.

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Oh, I get what you are asking. Sorry really tired. No, I wrote this story before hand. It is unrelated to the other story.

“I’m stuck in a box canyon in the middle of nowhere.”

As a fan of Red Vs. Blue I approve this.

I hope you make a sequel to this some day.

I wonder if Princess Celestia will ever find her...
I'm pretty sure Spike would raise the alarm eventually, when Twilight fails to return within a reasonable amount of time, but would anypony actually find her?

And I'm still craving for dat tentacles

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Well I just read this and considering my talents with stories about ponies getting helplessly railed while deep in a cave system I oughta try

Butt feels weird to write a sequel to someone else's story...

I usually don’t even like sex stories, but this was pretty good.

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