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Excellent content as always!

I want a sequel to so we can see how sexy shrink Wrap got and fuck her for real this time. I prefer anal.

There are so many things going through my mind right now....

Aww, why'd Poppy have to go? :c

More Charlotte stories are ALWAYS welcome.

I'm immensely intrigued by the idea of this mare carrying this stallion around town while impaling him on her cock. There aren't any other reactions of shock or disgust besides Shrink, so I'm guessing what Charlotte and Poppy are doing is roughly on par with breastfeeding in public for us; frowned on by some who are usually then shamed for being prudes. I'm also just tickled the defiance of physics that allows Poppy to stay on without the need of an apparatus, not to mention that what Poppy is doing is basically seen as a legitimate career in this world.

If I'm following this right, Charlotte is some sort of prostitute and Poppy is her assistant. The actual clop was nice, but I find the subtle world-building much more intriguing. While I'd say that the ending of having the store destroyed was needlessly mean, I also like how the last words imply a sequel. Here's hoping.

Every story involving Charlotte so far, I've loved <3

Maybe Twilight needs to book an appointment with Charlotte, I think she should get to help make the mess at least once.:twilightsmile:

For sequel I expect the store to be back but somehow a bit better and manager with much better attitude and way sexier and will gladly have sex with Charlotte when ever it is asked.

Also twilight needs to get fucked by Charlotte soon.

Good... but, really, her attitude at the beginning is something I(and probably most people) deeply hate in people... So, it makes enjoying the rest of the story a bit 'uncomfortable'(for a lack of a better word).

Something I don't get with all Charlotte stories. Why does nobody give a flying fuck about the casual destruction of buildings and possibly ruining the lives/livelihoods of ponies that live/work there? I can understand sex being seen as a common occurrence. That can be easily believed if given enough proof for it. But the casual destruction of property by sex act? That sounds like it should deserve its own category of "crime".

I'm not dissing on the content. It was rather fetish-y, but that's to be expected from a fetish character. Definitely clop material, and decent clop material at that. But a part of me can't help but think of the consequences of the characters' actions.

It's nice but the callous attitude regarding the destruction of Shrink Wrap's store, not too mention the other stuff, by Charlotte and more importantly Twilight kinda puts a damper on it for me.

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