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Sexy!
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I am glad you think so!
It's been far too long since we've been graced by one of your amazing stories!
Gotta love Charlotte fics.
Why'd you put Cum Inflation down three times?
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You do role play?
7768455 If you've read some of their previous works involving it, you'll know ONE tag is not enough to cover how prominent it is, especially with Charolette involved.
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Fucking unf.
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I do, but only with friends.
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Thank you! And yes, I agree they were. ;)
Hot, but a lot of fluff.
7769588 Can Trixie be your friend? c:
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Maybe we can talk
7769588 do you do roll play
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Do you do play roll?
*slowly pushes story into secret Bookshelf of shame*
7770094 Sounds about right. The ever growing bookshelf of shame.
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I feel i should clerify that this would go on my Favorites list, but you know...... Shame and all that.
i had to track down your story just for the satisfaction of doing such thing
You know, cum inflation is one of my kinks, but something about how much cum inflation there is just pushes stories like these into a weird sort of "opinion limbo". On the one hand, I love it. Massive cocks, gallons of cum, bodies bulging from the sheer size of the cocks being pushed into them. All great aspects. But on the other, there's two major things that stick out.
One, the aftermath. I get that it's clop, and there really isn't meant to be much of a story besides "SEX! All the sex!" except in certain cases (This is not one of those certain cases. This was clearly just "sex happens"), but the way it ended kind of leaves a sour note for me. They destroyed the Ponyville Spa. The sister's livelihoods was pretty much ruined unless Charlotte is willing to cough up the dough to fix it or Celestia, for some ungodly reason, pays for the damages and the new construction. Even if the costs are covered, they're out of a workplace, so they can't make up for lost profits during the time their new spa building is reconstructed. Charlotte has effectively killed their business for a day of fun. Not to mention the fact they are now giant inflatable balloons filled with cum. To start with on that, the amount of time necessary to process/digest the sheer amount of jizz would leave them stranded up there for a good long while. And unless pegasi are willing to fly up and feed them, or someone is able to climb that high to bring them food, they may suffer health issues. Cum does not a good diet solely comprise. Then there's the elephant in the room. Or rather the cum bloated spa mares in the middle of town. That's... going to raise some eyebrows at bare minimum I'd think. And raise concerns for the safety/wellbeing of the townsfolk when it comes to Charlotte going after any of them or the huge, cum inflated spa ponies rolling over anyone or anything. And there is one other facet of that which... I tend not to voice aloud, but the thought is still there.
The second thing that sticks out to me is the sheer hyperbole with which this was written. Yes, I know it's a fetish fic. Yes, I know that said fetish and said character are bound to be written this way just because of the source material and said fetish's description. But it still bugs me. For one, having a three foot cock means you're just about screwed (literally in this case) when it comes to penetrative sex or even oral. No person should be able to take a three foot dick into any hole in their body, especially not a vagina (Which I know doesn't happen in this fic, but it has happened in others like this). Cartoon physics and magic be damned, a three foot monster cock as big around as a large leg (considering the sizes I was reading of in this story, even larger than that) should not be able to get anywhere near penetration, let alone going balls deep in any hole, with how much size difference there is. A foot long cock, maybe as girthy as half a hoof diameter? Fine. Large, bigger than it has a right to be when it concerns shoving it inside someone, but still within a slight realm of reality that seems more believable.
And that brings me to the next point of "unbelievability": the stretchiness of everything. First and foremost, and the most obviously glaring point, is the fact that Aloe and Lotus should have popped long before they got to that size. If not only for the fact bodies should not be that stretchy, at some point the broken wood/building materials more than likely had various sharp objects poking into them. This should have had a rather dark ending, if any of what I just said were true for the actual story. Then there's Charlotte's massive amount of cum production. And I get it, magic. Especially with those protein shakes she consumed (Which, by the way, seemed awfully convenient that she would guzzle those down without actually knowing what they did. Could be wrong. Maybe they pointed that fact out to her, but Lotus seemed very hesitant to allow her to produce that much semen, which leads me to believe she would have omitted that knowledge). But to take two beanbag sized orbs, even packed full to bursting (Of which, biologically, I believe actually only contain somewhere around maybe 20% space for sperm production. Could be wrong, that was an eyeball estimate. But it was very well under 50%) and produce enough to swell not one, but two mares to the sizes they were? I don't think you need to understand Conservation of Mass to understand the point I'm trying to get across.
And after this long and ranty comment about what I find unbelievable about your story... I still enjoy it. I'll still add it to a bookshelf of mine to peruse later if I ever feel in the mood. It was well written, was generally fetish-y enough and I enjoyed it (Minus everything I pointed out before, which unfortunately my mind always likes to pick out). Just felt like I needed to share my opinions. By no means is this a bad story. But it's entrenched so far in my "disbelief zone" that I can't honestly say it was good enough to stand out. If you're looking for pure fetish fuel (Which I'm pretty sure was your intention when writing this) then yes, this would be good. As a whole story? Not particularly.
7934772 Cheers. Almost every Charlotte story is like that.
I'm starting to wonder if, referring to Charlotte, she's a pony I love to hate or a pony I hate to love. 
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We're all aware of how stupid and unbelievable it is, but no one gives a shit about logic and reality for a one-off smut story. Don't waste your time and effort to point out flaws in fetish stories. You're not changing anyone's interests by nitpicking physical impossibilities, because those are the exact things that makes them interesting to us.
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I'm more concerned about the amount of children Charlotte has got to have made at this point. She alone could be dooming the pony race by causing the majority of the next generation to be siblings