Twilight Is Overheated

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CoffeeBean

CoffeeBean #1 · Jan 30th, 2017 · · ·

I... really enjoyed that. Certainly earned that comedy tag; I smiled through most of it, and chuckled a few times. Above all, it was nicely written! I especially laughed when Pinkie burst out about the bet on Twilight being into mares. Poor twi; everyone thinks she's gay.

Mocha Star

Mocha Star #2 · Jan 30th, 2017 · · ·

I haven't read it yet but I know it's gonna be awesome. I got so excited seeing you posted something.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #3 · Jan 31st, 2017 · · ·

Why make Twilight futa in this story?

Spamotron

Spamotron #4 · Jan 31st, 2017 · · 1 ·

7909831

To play with the tropes associated with it.

Cross Lament

Cross Lament #5 · Jan 31st, 2017 · · ·

Triggers: Futa, Masturbation, No actual sex

*flips the table and storms out!*

That was really sweet! Silly, neurotic Twilight; you're the Princess of Friendship with Benefits, remember!

7909831 Alicorns combine the features of the pony tribes. I don't see why stallions should be excluded from those features.

Purple-Smart Heart

Purple-Smart Heart #6 · Jan 31st, 2017 · · ·

That was a fun little twist on the usual futa formula!

I would say it got a little talky at the end there, I know you wanted to give all Twilight's friends a chance to get a word in, but it messed up the pace a bit, at least in my opinion.

Otherwise I really liked it! Twilight's fantasies were hot as hell and Pinkie Pie was hilarious, nice job.

Commander Darklight