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not a bad chapter can't wait to see more
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I get that poem. I love the song!
I got the Poem, but I notice quite a lot of Grammatical errors and such. Still good, just needed some proof reading/editing.
wait i remember this story didnt it have a more Japanese feel to it before and had them fighting with katanas and twlight got one as well
6801656 Yes indeed, though i wasn't pleased with the story, so rewrote allot of it. I deleted the old one and rewrote it. I decided to remove all the Japanse references kinda was in a phase back then and looking back on it it was a bit odd to me at least.
6801654 Yeah me and Jetflame did our best to get the grammatical errors out, though it might be good to get a native (British) English speaker to check it over. Coping with Dyslexia makes it a bit hard on me to actually spot them myself, I will try more with future chapters though!
6799002 Same I adore the song, and poetry <3
Everything after this sentence got centered.
And I knew I'd read this before! Glad to see it back.
So this was previously up on fimfiction., Well, glad to see the rewrite back, liked and tracked
6804458 Fixed, thank you for pointing it out :) Google Documents import does odd things for the formatting at times :/
6805406 And thank you very much ;3
6805600 You're very welcome, and I had the same problem copying things over from google docs, I forgot exactly how I did it, but direct importing often caused whole passages to disappear from the one story I wrote
6805644 I know the feeling, Google docs is also not really forgiving when it comes to the the formatting from Scrivener exports to MS Word... I'd not use Docs it if it wasn't the easiest option of sharing the story with my Editor.
Not sure if a dark tag is needed because of this chapter. It was quite brutal to be honest.
6826273 yeah i know im kinda debating it with myself; the first draft would have required the gore tag... which isnt the durection i was planning but how it had flowed.
Ill just add it to be certain, i get the feeling this isnt the last chapter like this... even though ut wint be the main focus.
i'm enjoying this so far. I feel like this chapter would been better if it ended right before you know shoes up to save the day, then for the next one expand on what happened while they were recovering then end on what the lose of the wings mean. but then again i love cliffhangers
6828258 yeah I kinda reached the conclusion my self just after I posted it and did a final paranoia read through of it.
A lesson for future chapters ^^
Ok sir, this chapter did three things for me.
1. It reminded me of on of my most favorite stories, Luna the matchmaker
2. You made me like Discord more than I ever thought I would
And 3. You made me so made at Nightmare moon that I wish I could have been the one to Untermeyer destroy her and banish her from the world of the living.
Ok I think I might have gone a bit into my dark side there, but seriously, Nightmare moon, you dun screwed up.
Good story though.
6852760 Thank you for the comment it means allot to me
I do my best to write Discord as a deeper character, I don't see him explored on a level deeper than "I'm so random!" Although there are a few stories out there that I absolutely adore him in <3
Hehehe I will take it that I nailed what a vile creature she is?
This seems interesting I will give it a look later!
ok well 1) im pretty sure morning sickness doesn't come on that fast
2) thats a dam tame reaction form twilight
Man, women... I know they're anthro but if you stick to mare or stallion, it would make this sound more pony and less human
6880739 yes i agree. Morning sickness does not come that fast. It usually comes after at least a week. Sometimes more
6880809 yeah I'm shifting to that in the next chapter and likely coming back to edit it in the others. The original incarnation if this Fic had them entirely humanized, and it kinda stuck with during the rewrite.
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1) theres a reason for the symptomes hitting her in the way they did.
2) true, but i like to think its not sunk in entirely. The big freakout is comming
6880902 also i think i know where twilights bra went its either on celestias face or flaping from a flag pole
heheheheh they child going to be so lovey
Heh... This is at least not a complete surprise at the end, it's happened in other twiluna or twidashluna to state a few... I'm just friggin curious as to what is going to happen concerning starswirl and discord.
This story is amazing. I am completely enthralled with it. I'd also like to thank you for giving me another perspective on discord. He is truly a great.... man? I don't know lol but seriously thank you for this. I'd been going through some rough patches and this story helped me by relieving stress. Keep up the good work
OH SWEET CELESTIA. I HAVE NOT FOUND A SINGLE BOOK ON BEING A PRINCESS. WHAT DO I DO? WHAT DO I DO?WHAT DO I DO?WHAT DO I DO? SWEET CELESTIA HOW DO I DO PRINCESS THINGS?
I'm sorry Twilight Sparkle is currently unavailable due to being broken please try again later.
can we shoot blueblood yet? can we? can we? can we?
see he is a complete moron that needs to be exterminated
referencing that dress really?wired.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/02/Untitled-12.jpg
wait shouldn't that have the registered trademark symbol?
7180908 I'm sorry but your fucking legend
I adore this story and if you take my adoration away by not updating I'll cry
Please make more, please
This story is Dead.
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Hah, this was hilarious, of course there's not gonna be any books about being a princess, obviously since there was originally only 1 princess which was Celestia, than there was Cadance and than everyone started learning about Luna and then came Twilight.
There's not gonna be a book about being a princess but there might be a book on how to be a ruler.
Oh no... You lost an hour of your immortal life, whatever will you do?