ok well 1) im pretty sure morning sickness doesn't come on that fast

2) thats a dam tame reaction form twilight

Man, women... I know they're anthro but if you stick to mare or stallion, it would make this sound more pony and less human

6880739 yes i agree. Morning sickness does not come that fast. It usually comes after at least a week. Sometimes more

6880809 yeah I'm shifting to that in the next chapter and likely coming back to edit it in the others. The original incarnation if this Fic had them entirely humanized, and it kinda stuck with during the rewrite.

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1) theres a reason for the symptomes hitting her in the way they did.
2) true, but i like to think its not sunk in entirely. The big freakout is comming

6880902 also i think i know where twilights bra went its either on celestias face or flaping from a flag pole

heheheheh they child going to be so lovey

Heh... This is at least not a complete surprise at the end, it's happened in other twiluna or twidashluna to state a few... I'm just friggin curious as to what is going to happen concerning starswirl and discord.

This story is amazing. I am completely enthralled with it. I'd also like to thank you for giving me another perspective on discord. He is truly a great.... man? I don't know lol but seriously thank you for this. I'd been going through some rough patches and this story helped me by relieving stress. Keep up the good work

7180908 I'm sorry but your fucking legend

I adore this story and if you take my adoration away by not updating I'll cry

Please make more, please

This story is Dead.