Twilight is feeling down lately then she receives an invitation for Hearth's Warming Eve celebration from Princess Celestia.
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Why would you call it a bad story?
I think it`s wonderfull!
Bad story? There's no such thing as a bad Twiluna story
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Nah I wasn't calling the story bad (I have been told that I got a creative mind for writing) (LulamoonSparkle Lots of Thanks for her telling me that
,check out her stories), I meant the writing of it. Because of the (countless grammar mistakes and the lack of description) what an Editor can probably fix.
After all LulamoonSparkle did a really great job with my pervious stories, but unfortunately she doesn't have much time :( and I didn't ask anyone else to edit my stories...
Few mistakes and errors but I loved this story. You deserve ice cream.
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*gladly accepts the ice cream and starts licking it in the warm summer before it'd melt.*
Thanks
It's a fantastic story, you should do more TwiLuna story's. They are great and you have talent at writing. Good Luck!
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Wow, Thanks a lot
, I have a couple of TwiLuna started, but finally I want to finish some of my incomplete stories before writing anything else (when I can find the time to write).